OK HERE IS SOME NEW SHIET: http://community.playstarbound.com/threads/the-age-of-avali-character-submissions.102863/
Not to discredit your judgment, but are you sure you want to run another RP while your first one is just getting off the ground? You said yourself that you're new to the RPing business, so I don't want you to take on more than you can handle. Just, consider if you can handle managing both.
I just edited the page to say apps are closed for now. I will wait until we have finished this one.[DOUBLEPOST=1447459982][/DOUBLEPOST] To prevent anything going wrong.
Depending on how long this RP lasts, that thread might go dead. Perhaps you can get a mod to delete it and then post it again once Amnesia is over.
They should be, but moving the plot forward when nothing is happening is on Diace. As GM she has to have as much of the game world created as we help move it along. It's a mutually beneficial relationship, but Diace isn't giving as much as she needs to let this game thrive.
I still feel like you should focus on one thing at a time. It's not about having multiple things happening at once, it's about the work you can put into an RP to make the world an interesting place to make a story. Nothing interesting is going on here if you make simple posts for one line of Neptune's text. What else will he do? Why hasn't that monster attacked Zetta's character yet? Where is Diace? Doesn't she have control over this facility? Why isn't she trying to get the group back on track with her game? It's these things that will help make Amnesia a place where people want to interact with the world.
Zetta, why is Stableaf talking to himself in that room alone? If I remember correctly, he's in a different room than the rest of the party.