We All Make Mistakes

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mittgfu, Nov 10, 2012.

  1. Mittgfu

    Mittgfu Phantasmal Quasar

    Finally, chapter 8 and 9 released... It's been a long time.
     
  2. TTCBuilder

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    Yaaaaay!
    Time... To read!
     
  3. Mittgfu

    Mittgfu Phantasmal Quasar

    So I guess you missed my story. Nice to know :)
     
  4. Mittgfu

    Mittgfu Phantasmal Quasar

    Chapter 10 out now. I will get a bit more active once the holidays start. Enjoy :)
     
  5. TTCBuilder

    TTCBuilder Jackpot!

    Hmm it's good, but I'm having trouble seeing this guy and the weapon,
    even if this is supposed to be a flash back, could you embed more details?
    It would also make the chapters a little longer.
     
  6. DNAY!

    DNAY! Ketchup Robot

    Good job! But you should indeed add more details.
     
  7. Argthrond

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    Looks so interesting, i will read it later. :up:
     

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