Union of Soviet Socialist Planets (USSP)(Roleplay)

Updated the Thread any if I could get some feedback from you guys on what you think be awesome

 

I like it, but it needs spoilers...
But tis good.

 

Well the update was Removing the Spoilers haha

 

I see

I think the spoilers were ok on the Ranks at least

 

Thanks for your feedback I'll see what everyone thinks then I might change some stuff around.

Also I fixed the Lore to make sense with the Earth's destruction and all....

 

Sensible Earth Destruction...

Only in Starbound...

 

Well Idk about sensible it was Giant Tentacles attacking the Earth but who knows maybe it'll be explained more

 

Yay! New lore! I like it. A few run on sentances *Pushes up his nerd glasses* but other than that it's good.

 

Were suppose to be Communist! Not Grammar Nazis!

 

Secret USSP Grammar police! Fear us...

 

We are now Allied with the New Floran Kingdom perhaps one day we can convert them to our cause!

 

Age:25

Why you wish to join: For the promise of helping others and the community part of Communism.

Skype: Psinoob

Have you been in trouble with the mods before? If yes, why?
For being a dog. *Arf* (Just kidding.)

In Game

Character’s name: StarWalker (Shorten to Star)

Gender: Female

Division Wanted: Labor

Race: Avian

Biography: Star was a slave that worked her way to the top of the food chain on one of the pirate ship orbiting space. She noticed that a heavy supply of chemical weapons were loaded on to the ship. With a bit of cunning she manage to swipe some of the keys from various members. She manage to get a few of her fellow slaves to the escape pods before activating the timer on the weapons. The ship was flooded with deadly chemicals as she escaped. She landed on a planet in control of the USSP. Not knowing anytihng about them or the planet she manage to build herself a colony of fellow slaves. After a few run in with the USSP she decided to offer herself and her people to the USSP with the promise that they wouldn't be slave and could continue to be equals under communism with the USSP. She is in a holding cell now awaiting the Premiers answer.

 

While it was a good App I don't think there is a Dog race.

 

I changed it. HOw about now?

 

Better. We welcome you Comrade!

 

Just here to follow up on the alliance request. As long as you all let people think for themselves, the Stargazers are with you. Single member that it is... *clears throat* anyways, seek the secrets, peace out.

 

Good, just make a application and I will put you down in the rosters.

 

Star bows to the Premier, "We shall not forget this mercy and we will work hard to earn it."

 

So i am back from not getting alerts.

 

Missed a lot Comrade