Story The Chronicles of Bustow

don' die

 

Pretty much exactly what happened the first time I fought dreadwing.

 

Entry #27 is out! Enjoy!

 

Floran really likes that story,also floran thinks human is bad.Floran smells familiar thing,but They have mutated it.On a side note,does the poop monster really exist?

 

I'm glad you like it! And yeah, the poop guy actually exists. It's called a "Po Golem."

 

Entry #28 is here![DOUBLEPOST=1418594096][/DOUBLEPOST]Entry #29 is out too!

 

Entries #30 and 31 are ready! Yaaaaay!

 

Entry #32 is out! Sorry I haven't updated this in a few days, I'll try and get another entry out tomorrow!

 

Hello everybody! Sorry about the lack of updates recently. School and the holidays kinda got in the way. I have a question. I've been toying with the idea of Chriswell either a) gloriously assassinating Dreadwing or b) having Chriswell be wounded and/or killed. I'm leaning towards option a, however while I don't usually like killing off main characters, I do think a plot twist would be cool. Anyway, what do you guys think? Should I spare Chriswell, or should I lead him to a horrible, gruesome demise?

 

my vote is both.
successful suicide mission o3o

 

Im with rhomboid:Chriswell killing Dreadwing but getting hurt really bad would make the most sense.Well,after dreadwing exiting the UFO and destroying the galaxy,but that a bit too much.

 

I have returned with a (slightly) lengthier entry! I give you... ENTRY #33! Enjoy!

 

Sorry it's been almost a week since I updated last. But today, I have two entries*, so you can pretend one came out on Wednesday! Yaaaaaay!


*Entries #34 and #35

 

Entry #36 is out already? It's a miracle!

 

Feast?Floran knows well how to feast in ship,but usually does not like big monkey.The meat is hairy.

 

Entry #37 is here! It's got... uh... cooked Hylotls and banana bacon... and that's about it. Anyway, enjoy!

 

Wow... it's been a really really really really long time. Anyway, Entries 37 and 38 are done. I'll try to get these out more frequently.

 

Entries 40-42 are here. Sorry that the updates are becoming less frequent, it's been pretty busy lately.

 

Woohoo! After more than a month, entries #43 and #44 are out!

 

I must say, after checking this out today, I am enjoying this quite a bit. The entries are descriptive and have good detail and make enough sense to figure things out. A few minor points I have to nit-pick is the major lack of images and the pacing. You seem to be going everywhere an its a bit hard to follow, one moment you're in some sewers, the next you're drinking with a human in a bunker. Here's a little suggestion, maybe you could add some dates and times to keep things a bit easier to follow. Also, would you mind easing it with the curses? I know some explicit language is appropriate in some situations, but you're a bloody apex man! Have some nobility! Pull yourself together, and "DON'T PANIC". Keep up the good work! I'm loving this so far.