I'm going to make a comic with my vastly inferior artistic skills, okie doke? Here's the first box: As with everything I make, I appreciate brutally honest feedback. Also, this ought to update rather frequently; these are really just sketches that tell a basic story. EDIT: I enlarged the picture a bit.
so far, i really like what you've got by way of line art! it really looks like one of those comics that i would binge read at the library! keep it up!
Aaaand I made another. Yay! I like the Floran in the computer. I imagine him as being very practical, while this here Apex scientist is more scatterbrained.
I NEED MORE! i really like where this is going! keep it up! (bananna face... that really got me there...)
Aaaaaaaaaaand this oughta be the last one for today. Like I said, I pop these things out pretty quick! Though I still have other things to do in my life. Speech bubbles! Whee!! I'd briefly considered having no speech, but some of what I have in mind would be hard to tell in pantomime and sound effects. And I'm glad you fellas like it! The plan is fore the quality to improve over time, so for now some of the backgrounds might will look like crud.
indeed. We need MOAR MADNESS! Oh! And comics... Those are good too... ( oh Raptorizor! Where did you go?!)
Apparently Mr. Apex dude just ate inhaled the whole banana, peel and all. That, or he stowed a half eaten banana in his pocket for later use. Who knows? I hardly keep track of this stuff! Also, here is an alternate version that looks a bit more sketchy. I'm curious as to which you fine folks think is fanicier/better/cooler/etc. And thank you for the appreciation! Your words are very kind.
Now THATS skill right there Also , aaaaaaaaaaa, cute floran alert! (wait did they say hes a half breed?? holy heck!)
Aw, she's so cute and excited about it! And I like both. The first one is clean and clear, but I'm very biased towards the beauty of sketchiness. It gives off the feeling of details without them being there. haha
Hylotl-floran hybrids seen to have become pretty popular... Also, I prefer the double sketchy one but that's jurist me... (And my can't-do-dedicated-line bias...)
i prefer the sketchier one because sometimes i need to double-look at the cleaner art to see what's going on. also this is excellent
Considering that the only visual difference between male and female Florans in-game is a slight dent in the back, this fish-plant is probably bad with the ladies. Here's the alternate clean-version:
