Digital Redseven's Art (Taking Requests)

So, this is my first piece of fan art I've ever Posted... but definitely not the first piece of fan art
I've ever done. So, here you go:

some constructive criticism would be nice so next time i can do better.

 

I assume that's lightning?

 

Yeah it is... Its kinda hard to tell.

 

Ok, now I've made another piece of art. This one is of a stream side home.

 

Hm, not bad. Though I think lightning is more whitish with a tinge of blue.
(it took me 5 tries to type though for some reason...)

 

not bad indeed, try copic and working on depth.

 

Awwwww!! These art are so cute

 

Soooo... It's been a while, A REALLY LONG while, and I seem to still be relatively far up in the list still. So I tried my hand with the same art program (smooth draw) and with a gloomier style, and this popped out:

I hope you like it, and as always, constructive criticism is always appreciated. Bye!

 

I made another thing, but I'm less proud of it than the gloomy one I posted yesterday.

Because water is magical and frozen in time.

 

I really like your dark one! I love the shadow behind the tree. And you pulled off the gloomy effect really well.

However, *pushes glasses up* If you want constructive criticism than you need to compare your objects with your surroundings, For example the size of your sword is wider and bigger than the stem of your tree. The sword should be a lot more thin.

Anyway I like it xx Keep it up.

 

Looks nice!

 

Thanks!
I kinda messed up the sword, but It didn't look good thinner, so I guess it's a big huge sword.
And also I might post the original version, which is really creepy. The picture was originally going to be called "Lynch"
So yeah.

 

Thanks, I guess?