Story Night Sky - A Starbound Story - *Discontinued*

Post from July 15th 2014. Re-posted as quote; making room for 2nd Story post.

 

I am reading intently, and can't wait to see what you do with my character! Keep up the good work.

 

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I can't wait to see my character in your fine story!

 

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Keep the volume low to hide the horrible digital noise pls.

I love it down to the last detail. Keep up the good work!

 

That was something I hadn't expected. As such my jaw dropped as listening it through. Very good voice acting. Noticed you added even the chin scratching heh

Great to hear you enjoy my interpretation of Psymund. I will keep writing, and such support I've been getting motivates me going onwards and improving my work. Thank you.

 

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#3 is best in my opinion, and I really like how you put Polaris (Little dipper) in there!

 

I'd say the first one, personally.

 

Surely has been a while since I actually gave a real response.

I agree that number #3 is better. However, I do like the blue hue in #2 and #4, but not to have it overpower the image, it should be a circular gradient from blue to black to depict some atmospheric lighting of some planet. Otherwise, the neon lighting is perfect. Although, the middle shape may be switched to perhaps a milky way galaxy instead, because it may confuse readers as to the significance of the middle shape if any. But that is my opinion since it is merely a general idea. But good work though.

I love how your story is coming along. Still a bit troubling on the minor grammatical errors, but still minor. Nevertheless, I can't wait for more.

Oh yes, still want to draw Thorn and Rin, but I have career plans to enact right now so I'll push that aside for a much later time, but I still look forward to doing it.

 

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So you want us to be grammar nazis? Bahahahaha!

Gradients are basically a pattern or color scheme between two or more colors. Think about the word gradual and that's what I mean. A circular gradient I think it's called is basically a circle. So a center color gradually changes to an outer surrounding color, like an aura if you will.

I would go into grammar with you later.

 

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Never mind, I think you figured it out (>_o)

 

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A very good return! I'm happy to see you back