Poem New years starbound

Fireworks in the sky,​

And it is no lie,​

If i say that i shall play,​

Starbound that awesome game,​

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Fireworks in the sky,​

I shall go up very high,​

And beating the game,​

That is where i for aim.​

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Fireworks in starbound.​

That should close that horrible wound,​

Of waiting for release,​

That is where i for please, ​

 

Good stuff.

I like the use of imperfect rhymes. I have a hard time using them since they always feel weird in my mind.

Best of luck in the contest, knopie!

 

I mostly like them aswel even now i think it's still weird

 

It's pretty good, but don't entries need to be related to the holidays?

 

New year is a holiday where i live

 

From the contest thread:

This entry meets the requirements.

 

Thanks for writing that i wasn't sure anymore

 

No problem!
It can be a little hard trying to convey what theme a piece of writing is about. Likewise a reader's interpretation of the theme.
Anywho, best of luck. =)

 

You never mention new years, though. Well, I guess fireworks counts.
I'm guessing the judges won't be too picky, so I think you're fine

 

Yea i would have made it longer but i was out of ideas aswel so...