Living Planets (Or Planatary parasites) Revamped And Ressurected

My motivation has been a bit down lately, I need some inspiration! I'll try to get something worked up within the a 5 day radius.

 

Actually, I just looked at Hades Heart, and had a similar sketch of it! Try this on for size and see if you want anything revamped/changed/modified.

 

Utterly goddamn terrifying. It seems like a neat thing but it draws too much on looking like a heart when it is actually the 'brain' of the LP (hence why I suggested the three Guh creatures from fossil fighters). I admire your'e work and really hope you don't mind my criticisms. So here they are, in bullet form.

• It is actually more of a brain than a heart since it controls the LP more or less.
• I like the singular eye and that should be a definite keeper of it.
• It looks like it would be anchored where it sits, whilst the Coregan is able to move independently (it controls the LP using telepathy).
• Its utterly terrifying. This wouldn't be a bad thing, but I want to make the Coregan adorable. Make the Darkbound Coregan as fucking evil ,mutated ,terrifying ,and purple as you want.
• Finally it draws too much from a single source (aka Hade's Heart) and while this is just a basis, I think, it will need to use more sources.

There ya go. My critique. Hope I don't offend you with my stuff but I really want it just so, cause a Boss is forever. Can't change it after a week.
I shall scan the internets for some suitable material to help you and provide them every so often. Here are some links to some new stuffs and old stuffs I told you about.
0²:http://kirby.wikia.com/wiki/0²
The Three Guh-Brains;
Guhvorn: http://fossilfighters.wikia.com/wiki/Guhvorn
Guhlith:http://fossilfighters.wikia.com/wiki/Guhlith
Guhweep:http://fossilfighters.wikia.com/wiki/Guhweep
And last but not least the Viruses from Dr Mario:http://www.mariowiki.com/Virus

Feel free to use whichever ones in your arting and if anyone has any suggestions please post them in our lil forum. Note: Please keep the suggestions non-rediculous and nothing innapropriate(I can't spell today).
The end have a nice day !

 

Like I said, the heart was one I drew before the suggestions, but thank you for the criticisms. I definitely feel Guhweeep is my favorite body shape and style, so I might use him as a main source, and I'll try to make him just a little more adorable this time.

 

Thank you. Personally Guhvorn is my favorite of the three, but their all pretty neat. Also the reason I apologize so much in my criticism is that im afraid I might offend you and you're art and then you'll leave to never be seen here again.

 

I tried to create a zero-like monster, and here's my result :

The red parts are supposed to be half-sunk in the ceiling of the boss room, and the conic tentacles are supposed to grow bumps that shoot at the player.

 

Okay! This is my next crack at it! I gave you a lot of varieties this time.

 

This is very promising. Keep up the good work. Its coming out kinda adorable in a way and has a very smooth design.

 

Which was the best in your opinion so I can work off of that one? We will slowly get this to work!

 

any plant version?

 

You could be inside of someone. Like osmosis Jones!

 

better that not.

 

The top one is best. I like the lil tube things it has.

 

IM AM MADNESS

 

It just hit me after seeing that core (eye/heart). There would be an area where you first discover the core and it is displayed in the backdrop as you start making your way to it. Whenever you would pass an area where the eye is visible, you would notice that the eye is following you. That would give so much depth to the experience of a living planet.

 

cool great idea

 

Sounds interesting...

 

yeah, a following eye, like eye of chutulu in terraria, but that doesn't moves...

 

bumpity bump