Digital Fanfiction Webcomic! (AYELMAO UPDATED 4 ONCE)

Discussion in 'Fan Works' started by yokimoninoka, May 19, 2016.


Cutest ship?

  1. Sebastian x Yokee

  2. Sam x Yokee

  3. Sebastian x Abigail

  4. Sam x Kelly

  5. Sam x Penny


  7. Sam x Abigail (omg)

  8. Sebastian x Kelly (? ? ?)

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  1. yokimoninoka

    yokimoninoka Prypiat

    Comic update!
    (tuesday updates are fun)

    =3= I'm not responding to comments this week, but please know i do love reading what you have to say <3
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    • Anushka.C

      Anushka.C Guest

      ;-; poor Yokkee, she better find someone to dance with-
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      • Megzzzx

        Megzzzx Void-Bound Voyager

        Awww I want her to dance with Sebs. I know Sebs wants it too! I can't wait for next week!
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        • Tsukuru

          Tsukuru Pangalactic Porcupine

          That panel where she's sitting on the bench holding her face up with her hands cracked me up because her elbows are in the air (x
          I like the buildup, but hopefully nobody will end up too sad.
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          • Rgbunpro

            Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

            I love how Maru and Harvey look downright villainous in that one panal. Secret plot to take over the world confirmed.
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            • Risukage

              Risukage Giant Laser Beams

              I love Elliott's hair, and OMG, your Haley is best Haley. Doc Harvey's mustache kinda has a Poirot feel to it, and now I want to read his lines in a Belgian accent. :rofl:

              And hey, is that Penny? If so, nifty! I've had like ONE of her cutscenes because it's so stuffing hard to catch her at her trailer, so I barely know a darn thing. (If it's Leah, soz, I'm a derp!)
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              • Ghostly Fox

                Ghostly Fox Giant Laser Beams

                It's Penny- she's Sam's designated partner at events like the Flower Dance.
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                • Pudassassin

                  Pudassassin Hard-To-Destroy Reptile

                  I told you! anyway, nice comic drawing style you got there!
                  • Gabaw

                    Gabaw Scruffy Nerf-Herder

                    Penny Posse 4 Lyfe. She's mine damnit! Here's the plan. Yokee asks the super saiyan to dance, he turns around, Penny is already in my arms now and forever. You don't have to stay with Sam but win-win right :rofl:
                    • mrobake

                      mrobake Zero Gravity Genie

                      Ohh the nightmare of no dancing partner..
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                      • Pudassassin

                        Pudassassin Hard-To-Destroy Reptile

                        Btw, where's Leah? She suppose to be around with Elliot...
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                        • Rgbunpro

                          Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

                          Also, dat dress! Mmmmm, it's fancy!
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                          • Villain_In_Glasses

                            Villain_In_Glasses Seal Broken

                            Maru reminds me of Shiroe from Log Horizon in this scene....amazing how you can make the scene feel so hostile towards Yokee!
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                            • Risukage

                              Risukage Giant Laser Beams

                              Now that you mention it, she does, though I was getting more of a Professor Tomoe from Sailor Moon feeling to it. *Laughs.* So old-school! And the one downside to getting laser surgery is that since I no longer wear glasses I can no longer do the glasses-push-up-the-face thing, though I have done it on accident a few times since then. :rofl:

                              ...Okay, that was some phantom limb kind of thing there. I typed that and felt the need to slide my glasses back into place because they always did that and I haven't worn them in two years. WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVEN.

                              Edit: Also, your name and avatar? Awww yiss.
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                              • yokimoninoka

                                yokimoninoka Prypiat

                                lmao how i portrayed Haley is like basic bitch of most manga series. I know majority of penny and abigail scenes. but i dont know anyone else's. usually i have to do a lot of research to shove their events into the story
                                I'm probably not going to implement any other characters besides Kelly n Yokee
                                sorry to crush your hopes and dreams.

                                i cry i cry i cry
                                thank you for your comment on the style vUv I'ts getting easier and easier to do this type of style with the line art
                                and Leah is... idk where she is shes gone :>

                                =3= i wasnt actually what i intended but i mean \o///
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                                • GreenWombat

                                  GreenWombat Scruffy Nerf-Herder

                                  Great story so far, I especially love your art so much.

                                  As for the poll question I would say that Yokee/Seb seem the best potential couple so far.
                                  • yokimoninoka

                                    yokimoninoka Prypiat

                                    Im sorry for the late update
                                    i was in UTAH for a week seeing my S.O.
                                    lmao but i am getting writers block on how to approach who is with who
                                    becuase now im confused.
                                    • MagicallyClueless

                                      MagicallyClueless Black Hole Surfer

                                      the coloring is so lovellyyyyy <3 <3

                                      my kokoro is going mad with how nice
                                      and dokiful
                                      this comic is
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                                      • Anushka.C

                                        Anushka.C Guest

                                        DOKI DOKI
                                        //screaming excitedly
                                        Such anatomy and beauty shkansjs
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                                        • Megzzzx

                                          Megzzzx Void-Bound Voyager

                                          Eeeeeeeeeeeeee so exciting! I have been so excited waiting for this. It is going great and I think you'll figure out where to take it.
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