Diary of a Lone Avali [Discontinued]

Discussion in 'Writing' started by Gilligan Lanley, Dec 20, 2015.

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What's your opinion of the story so far?

  1. Great!

    66.7%
  2. Okay.

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  3. Decent..

    5.6%
  4. Needs more work.

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  5. GIB MEH MOAR!!!

    38.9%
  6. Pinapple (You know who you are <3)

    22.2%
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  1. Firepaw Da Cat

    Firepaw Da Cat The Fluffy Cat

    Wow, you guys posted a lot while while I wasn't here [​IMG]
     
  2. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    Is log 12 out yet? 'Cause you promised it today and I need more to read man! :nurusad:
     
  3. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

     
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  4. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    We've been busy. ^.^
    An almost derailment too :rofl:
     
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  5. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    :rofl: completely forgot about that!

    And what do you mean by "derailment"? By the words of George p. Billyhead (a guy I just came up with) "I expect great quality from great people, on the deadline" may his imaginary soul rest in peace. He died waiting for a soccer ball named Wilson to answer a question he asked.
     
  6. Firepaw Da Cat

    Firepaw Da Cat The Fluffy Cat

    I can see that you've been busy [​IMG]
    So, what were people even talking about?
     
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  7. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Dawwwww. Love really has come to town.

    Edit: I gotta hit the sac. Bye bye.
     
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  8. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    I was talking about log 12, and an imaginary guy. :rolleyes:


    :fireball: :fireball: :fireball:
     
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  9. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    It started with bio-impants, to uber Glitch 2.0, to starwars, and I caught it before it went further. :nurucool:
    ...well pretty much that.
    Yush! Love is in the air!~ *que music*


    Good night Automan!

    EDIT: That is offically my shipping song for those two. :nurudallas::nurusad::nuruflirt::nuruhype:
     
  10. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    Yeaaahhhhh, you could say it got a bit off-track. :nuruninja:
     
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  11. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    I'm thinking of adding a music track for each log. What do you guys think?
     
  12. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    Cool, think about making the logs a bit longer and more descriptive of the scenery. As in "the grass sparkled with dew that morning" not trying to sound like a writing teacher or whatever, but that would be nice.
     
  13. Firepaw Da Cat

    Firepaw Da Cat The Fluffy Cat

    Well, I do like music. I think it's a good idea [​IMG]
     
  14. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    But the point of a diary is supposed to be brief...ish. Cluing up the day's/week's events.

    When I switch the story over into a new format, I'll be adding more descriptions.

    And by that, I mean when I feel like DoaLA is over. Think of it as the prelude to the main story. Like this would be the first "novel" of in a series, so to speak.
     
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  15. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    16-02-16-2.png The novakid pet. Before you say anything...

    1. Its adorable
    2.You could want to add one in the story
    3.Its getting sort of boring :nurusnooze:

    Not the story itself, of course!
    Just there has been NO ONE showing this adorable creature to the world, so I think this thread deserves to see it.
     
  16. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    Fine with me. As long as you continue, im cool. :nuruhappy:
     
  17. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    As a note, the chapters will be longer, which means they may or may not take longer to come out. :p
     
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  18. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    Imma go watch netflix and then go to sleep. CYA. Hope you enjoy my Novakid pet! :nurusnooze:
     
  19. Firepaw Da Cat

    Firepaw Da Cat The Fluffy Cat

    Well, I need to sleep
    Hope to see more of the story written tomorrow!
     
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  20. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    You two are gunna like what's coming up!

    Good night!
     
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