Digital Centor111's ART

Discussion in 'Fan Works' started by centor111, Mar 2, 2013.

  1. centor111

    centor111 Cosmic Narwhal

    I'm not very good but this is my art thread, taking a few requests
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    • Mopy

      Mopy Cosmic Narwhal

      First of all, we all have to start somewhere, and we get better and better as time goes on! Secondly, this evokes a very peaceful feeling when I look at it, and that is exactly how I feel about Stardew Valley, so good job there! You have a very painterly feeling, and I think that's great, but remember things closer to the frame will appear larger and sharper than things in the background. I think if you touched it up a bit, it would be really wonderful! :)
       
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      • centor111

        centor111 Cosmic Narwhal

        thankyou for your help I will try to edit it but the program is a little stubborn.
         
        • Mopy

          Mopy Cosmic Narwhal

          What program are you using btw?
           
          • centor111

            centor111 Cosmic Narwhal

            for that: SketchBookCopicEdition
             
            • caskett

              caskett Pangalactic Porcupine

              That is honestly better than anything I could do, it's really good :up:
               
              • Shock

                Shock Spaceman Spiff

                Touching up isn't elaborated enough. What is touching up? Finishing the piece of? I like the art, but I advise you to change the nearest rock, get the black outline away and remove that unnecessary finger-like rock next to it. Overall, it's quite good, for a start to develop upon.
                 
                • Mopy

                  Mopy Cosmic Narwhal

                  Wow, well I suppose what I meant by that is continue to work hard and I'm sure you'll see improvement. I wasn't going for an in-depth critique (which i'm perfectly capable of) mainly because I wasn't sure if the artist was looking for such a critique. I suppose I could ask what "changing the nearest rock" means. How should he change it? Honestly, I'm not sure what the point is of critiquing my response to someone else's art. I will provide very in-depth feedback when and if I think the artist is looking for it. I chose to go the encouragement route and point out the things that I found successful. In any case, I do think the art has a lot of potential, and should the artist want a very detailed response on exactly how to improve that piece I would be more than happy to provide it. :)
                   
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                  • centor111

                    centor111 Cosmic Narwhal

                    yea I noticed the problem with the rock... the edge is far too sharp
                     
                    • Shock

                      Shock Spaceman Spiff

                      I mean Mopy, you're nice, I'm stating a fact so centor can understand what to work on. You probably can give critique and such since you are a talented pixel artist. And that is all. As for my depth on changing that rock, I said to get the black outline away and remove the unnecessary finger-like rock next to it. :)

                      Good work centor, it's looking great.
                       
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                      • caskett

                        caskett Pangalactic Porcupine

                        Yeah, you should edit that first rock a bit but I really like the moss on the rocks :megusta:
                         
                        • Mopy

                          Mopy Cosmic Narwhal

                          My apologies good sir, my interpretation was completely off the mark, I should have known better since this community is amazing. ;) Also, is that copic edition program software for a computer or an app?
                           
                          • oath2order

                            oath2order Parsec Taste Tester

                            Yeah, that's not that bad, I like it.
                             
                            • centor111

                              centor111 Cosmic Narwhal

                              Ok i decided to post my draft of another mountain by the sea(coincidental I have a roulette and i draw whatever I pick out). it didn't turn out how I wanted so I need some help with critique on it. I am aware of the MAJOR perspective Issue so don't spam that unless it is constructive. Constructive criticism only : Islands 2 .jpg
                               
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                              • caskett

                                caskett Pangalactic Porcupine

                                Kewl! One of the problems in my mind is the black lines.
                                 
                                • centor111

                                  centor111 Cosmic Narwhal

                                  Yea I drew them when I was outlining the shape and I forgot to do them in a more sandstony colour. I'll fix that easily. Thanks for the help
                                   
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                                  • caskett

                                    caskett Pangalactic Porcupine

                                    Everything else looks great!
                                     
                                    • Jonesy

                                      Jonesy Sarif's Attack Kangaroo Forum Moderator

                                      Awesome. Keep it up. :up:
                                       

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