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Discussion in 'Writing' started by Arcadoof, Oct 6, 2017.
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The story needs a LOT more detail. As a reader, we have no idea of the characters. The events I don't think were detailed enough and robbers breaking into a vet in the daytime to steal cats makes next to 0 sense whatsoever
You have the base for a story. But you need a lot more than that
It's a rough draft I'm actually wanting to delete it
I request that this thread be deleted, not closed, deleted.