The Demon Syndicate

Alright.
There's an application formula there.
Feel free to fill it in and create a character if you wanna join
Ask Mailboxhead or Britefire if you need further information.

 

what i copy and paste it and fill it out what then

 

Post it.

 

Um...
Yeah.
Come up with a character and fill in the application. Be sure to look through the races at the bottom of the main post.
(( Some might not work atm due to story reasons. A couple are WIP too. ))

 

Like mine. I really want to see a male naga...

 

Your character profile should include:
Race:dragon


Character name:Fireak
Gender:male
Bio:
Magic Ability:breathing fire
Picture:i will get one later
Misc. Info:big red spike


hop that is good

 

Sorry but that really wont cut it.
Im not an admin so i can't approve or dissaprove it but its barely anything.

Look at some of the other bios perhaps. Get an idea of what they should look like.
They dont need to be a wall of text but they do need to be a bit more than 6-10 words.

 

Your character profile should include:
Race:dragon


Character name:Fireak the destroyer
Gender:male
Bio:he is a big dragon from the world of fire
Magic Ability:fires spikes at his enemys and breaths fire
Picture:
Misc. Info:well he can eat people just for fun and food his spick set you on fire gets man very easy

 

Grammar please.

 

Well.
It's a start.
It would need some actual backstory instead of just "He's a cool dragon".

 

"He's a cool dragon with glasses."

 

I'll be perfectly honest, I don't think the level this rp is at is gonna be the best for yeh.

 

ok he is a dragon from the world of fire why he left because sum knights are after him so he is here hiding from them

 

I dont think posting giant pics is helping prove your point. It's not even making a point.

 

I wasn't reffering to the character picture.

 

so what are you reffering to

 

The entirety of the bio really.
It's subpar. Also to be honest your grammar isn't excactly perfect.

 

Let me handle this please.

We're looking to keep a certain level of grammar and clarity in our posts, probably at around a high-school level. I'm also thinking of implementing a membership rule for new members to submit a three sentence writing sample to gauge this value. Do you think you'll be able to maintain this?