Ooh. I'm a bit iffy about your colored text (it's hard to read, in my opinion) general use of punctuation and consistent misspelling of a few words(for the record, the possessive pronoun for 'he' is 'his', not 'hes', and it should be 'race' instead of 'rase'; 'immorality' is the lack of morals, implying the person is a sick b*st*rd, while 'immortality' means the person can't die), but overall, not bad. I dunno if the powers and such are a bit much, but you gave quite a lot of info nonetheless, and I appreciate that. Of course, I can't forget about Flux (although I suppose he's quite known in the RP forums already as a cool guy, but that 'dropping a nuke on a shack' line was awesome), NiteStrike (Also very nicely done) and StarWalker (Honestly? This is the absolute first freaking time I've ever seen someone RP as a dog in a humanoid-dominant RP). Anyway, I think I'll wait for LordFlame and/or Alaizia Darkstar to post first. Both of them are in the same closed-off room as Animalicus and Christa, and the latter has already asked if the two of you have any objections. So would any one of you kindly say something?
I thought about the color of the text being hard to read ,just wanted to add some dramatic effect, but i guess it dosen't realy matter that much so i changed it. About the whole misspelling thing ,i will try to focus on that more now, should have reread everything a time or two.I don't even know how i missed the "t" in immortality , anyway thanks for helping me with my mistakes. Yea i allready read their applications.Flux's character whould be the perfect guy to kill Jun ,as he is anti-villain and Flux is an awesome RPer
Ohh my god !Getting soo excited ;D Basicaly there will be a fancy ball happening and Jun will be there.I will let your immagination run wild and think of the whole story how Nuke found out about Jun and everything.
Same here, my good friend Same Here Get ready to be sliced with five swords, then shot in the head and heart by a powerful revolvers
Good But, I'm serious about the five blades. Hawkins is like the King Bradley from FMAB in this world He can juggle five, but not MOVE while with five blades Max : 3 blades. Anymore than that, he can't run while juggling
Sounds badass , but it won't be an easy fight ,as Jun has 1796 years of sword fighting experience . Can't wait for the most epic battle in history .
