Avali Nexus 18: Legal Somewhere

Boop. I nuke everything.

 

Ahh, time for my favourite time-killing activity.
GRAMMAR NAZI-ING TIME!
@Corosar

Wait what? Is the RP non-canon only here?
The sentence is misleading. Should be: "Disclaimer: 99% of RP that happens here is non-canon."

This is actually my fault. It's "thread", not "page".
I actually pointed this out before, but no one paid any attention it seems.

14th and 15th. Not 14st and 15nd.

Why is there a comma at the end of 17, unlike other numbers? It should be replaced with a period.

This is a question. Questions typically have question marks at the end, not exclamation marks.
Also, there should be a blank line between this sentence and the previous one.

 

"We want you to help us eliminate multiple HVTs on this planet. We need someone familiar with the culture and at the same time able to walk through cities without raising suspision." Your communicator indicates that someone sent you coordinates. "Mett you there or not. We give you half an hour. Out."

 

He sighs. "Alright. I'll be bringing my team as well."

 

//*grabs reks and huggles while she is Obscure* shhhh you don't have to be alone!

//i will repeat myself... everything but the last two are actually not my issue... i didn't have alot of time to review as the thread needed to get up in ten minutes... also.... its more meant to be a statement over a question... so shhh... that is how i see it in my brain.... also... what happened to your post on the front page?

//also where is @Jonesy He is usually the one that kills us...

 

I'll be back later, I have schoolwork.

 

I deleted that post (Which included disclaimers about some of them not being errors from you that I forgot to add back aaaaaaaa) because I missed a few errors.

Well it doesn't look right.
So I recommend fixing it.

 

Meep merp moop!


*persistent meeping*

 

//for some reason i don't think i can.... also i need to rest up.... getting back into the avali sleeping patterns again see all in two hours or so

 

Nice thread title, works a lot better than the last one.

Is any of that stuff free to share, or does it disallow coping?

(But that's the joke)

 

Merp?

Meep!

MEEEEEP!~

 

...What joke?

 

Ack! I've missed it! RIP in peace thread 17.

On the upside we can vote now! Feathered space raptors at the polls!

 

All the other points are fair, but the messy ordinals were all on purpose.

 

Comito pads closer to the creature's corpse, noticing the snow scattered on the nearby trees that was clearly stirred up by its impact.

His suit's beacon continues to guide Rune towards his and Jerecho's position, like a lighthouse amidst the sea of darkness.

 

@Jerecho So do you not check alerts/notifications?

 

// Have I ever told you I LOVE your style of writing?
With roaring thrusters the Condor appears over the hole in the canopy, before slowly decending, the thruster's exhaust-flames coloring the surrounding tress blue.

 

I've been liking the dynamic of your entire trio, myself. You, @Comito, and @Jerecho.

 

//
Beep
whirr
Boop
CLICK
*robot noises*

 

D'awwww, thank you. But my writing style really isn't that good :/ I'm missing many words and sometimes I can use words because I don't know their position/conjugation...