Poem Space... Empty Thoughts

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Sir Hagfish, Aug 27, 2013.

  1. Sir Hagfish

    Sir Hagfish Void-Bound Voyager

    Empty Thoughts and misguided journeys:

    The shuttle shoots out into space
    an emptiness is growing inside me
    a hunger one cannot sate
    a hole filled with grief?
    a planet gone... so to speak

    What brought upon this wreckage
    This cruel and sadistic fate?
    Shall i alone escape this place?

    Lost in this darkness
    Yet lights everywhere
    but all it does is remind me of the eternal despair

    I'll start again, make a new place
    build it up, fill in the space
    i cannot be alone in this cold ominous place



    (one can only imagine the effect of losing a planet, upon a character.... especially one floating aimlessly in a shuttle in space... facts/ info taken from the "about" page.
     
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  2. Sir Hagfish

    Sir Hagfish Void-Bound Voyager

    Feel free to comment, submit ideas or criticize this. I understand this is open to interpretation and i'm keen on feedback :D
     
  3. Commander Benny

    Commander Benny Phantasmal Quasar

    I like this. I don't hate happiness or anything but I do enjoy a bit of deeper darker poetry that catches the emotional side. good job my friend, and cool avatar.
     

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