Traditional Where there is one..

Not the best for sure, please comment and give suggestions.

 

Good thing I got it in BIG Right?

 

I like it, you still do need practice though .

 

I personally think that you have potential. I like the way you pay attention to the small details. 1

I would suggest: You don't have to put up with my tips and lectures.

• You should try and pay more attention to proportions and realism (Not that you should skip on the detail).
• Remember one must first be able to draw realistically before one distorts and idealizes... or something like that. Basically you should learn to draw realistically before you draw comics or cartoons.
• Practice often. In art its practice that makes perfect. (I hate using cliches)
• Traditional pencil is a great -if not the best- basis for almost any artist to start on. 2
• Ask me anything any time. I have 'resources' (if you would call it that) that could help you out.

1 I especially love the detail on the steampunk theme you used.
2 I, myself use pencil as a basis.

BTW I really think you have potential.

Thank you for putting up with my useless attempt to help.

- Griffinwolf8