Story Vi-I3 and her Mischievous Adventures across the Universe (interactive story)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Boboclown89, Jan 1, 2014.

  1. Boboclown89

    Boboclown89 Big Damn Hero

    (This thread will be an interactive story, become a character and roleplay in the story!)

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    Vi-I3 computer log, Day 1

    I woke up to find I was sitting in a strange tub filled with blue liquids, and wires were connected to many of my circuits.
    I hear a voice.
    "Sir, I think she is waking up." said the voice. "Hmm, it seems she is." Another voice, how man voices are there?
    "Decommission the Stasis injector." One of the wires disconnected. "Hello, my precious specimen." said the man with a slight chuckle at the end. "It's ok to speak, my dear." Where am I? Should I trust these voices? "Why are you NOT SPEAKING?!" I'm gonna call this guy Loudmouth. "Where am I?" I cautiously asked. "You are in the Apex Labs III a Cd 43." It seems I am in a a laboratory... but why? "Why am I here?" I asked him. "Well, you see, we found you in a shipwreck, approximately 3 hours after is crashed. You are in horrible state when we found you, so we took you here to study and heal you." To study me? What does he mean by that? "Then why am I still locked up? I'm healed now, right?" "Oh, we're not through studying yet." "How long do I have to stay here?" "About 3 months." So, this will take awhile... might as well observe my surroundings. I look to my right, more chambers. Filled with all sorts of races. But i'm the only Glitch.

    Vi-I3 computer log, Month 3, Day 1

    It's been 3 months now, my systems went into automatic stasis to avoid insanity due to boredom. I will be asking the Apex shortly for my release.
    "It's been 3 months. Release me." I say. "Oh, you want us to release you? Sorry, we won't be doing that." the Loudmouth said. "What? Why not?!" "Because, we're not finished studying. And we will never be finished studying." he roared. What am I going to do?! I'm stuck in this Stasis chamber and cannot escape... I got it! I'll send a help signal for one of my colleagues to rescue me!

    Message sent to Colleague 1

    Once they get the message, my systems will start up again. Until then, they're shutting down. Goodbye for now, log.

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    OK, now somebody will continue the story. Create your own character and use them for your continuing. The character you create will be the unknown "Colleague 1" that the message was sent to.




     
  2. Zaisher

    Zaisher Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    zzz..zzz.. :computer: ALERT MESSAGEW RECIVED CLIENT NUMBER 611142 :???: ugh what now :computer: message reads... zasds traapeedchambz apex :???: ok someone doing something related to apex i'm just gonna assume blow everything up coords? :computer: random coords: alright time to get down to business start the warp .....
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    enteringatmoshper :??: port me down :apex guard hey is tha-!!! ITS TH FUGITIVE NIGHT SHA- :shade: lets see where the labs are......
    (and now you continue shades attack P.S. he is generally crafty and is an intelligent floran almost as smart as green finger he works as a bounty hunter and wants to help the apex rebellion against big ape and the minikong he also does hi best to destroy apex expirements for the greater good of apex kind he also uses a sword is extremely fast and acrobatic and also pulls out a lazer powered by his own photosynthese he also mastered blink tech)
     
  3. Boboclown89

    Boboclown89 Big Damn Hero

    I love how you continue the story! The only thing I have to say is that you need to work on spelling and grammar, because good spelling and grammer make a good story. I'm going to continue story, now
     
  4. Zaisher

    Zaisher Scruffy Nerf-Herder

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    sorry I type REALLY fast
     
  5. Boboclown89

    Boboclown89 Big Damn Hero

    Is ok, I don't like pie either
     
  6. FalcoSparverius

    FalcoSparverius Aquatic Astronaut

    If you can create a character and ROLEPLAY in the story, why not just call it a roleplay? This forum should get an rp section.
     
  7. Boboclown89

    Boboclown89 Big Damn Hero

  8. Boboclown89

    Boboclown89 Big Damn Hero

    Where would that be located?
     
  9. Priest_Drew123

    Priest_Drew123 Void-Bound Voyager

    In a role play section? Is there even one? Any ways I'm going to continue the story because I like where this is going.
     
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  10. Priest_Drew123

    Priest_Drew123 Void-Bound Voyager

    I watched through the computer screen as the Apex Doctor dissected the Glitch. It was interesting to watch the surgeon go to work on the metal body, because of the fact that it was in a liquid stasis chamber. There were robotic arms inside the large jar with lasers and saws. The Doctor was controlling it with a joystick type machine. I grew tired of inspecting the Apex's works. I flipped through the files and downloaded all information on the facility onto my portable holo drive. As I heard several explosions, screams, and the slicing of a blade I quickly unplugged the holo drive and opened the Lab. As the Doctor got a good slice in with a scalpel, I instinctively disarmed and cuffed him to a radiator thing.
    "How do you open the stasis pod, scum," I interrogated.
    "Please don't kill me! I tell you, just don't kill me," the Apex sobbed.
    "I will if you don't tell me in the next 6 seconds." The explosions were getting closer. I had to hurry, "Open the stasis pod, now!"
    He pressed a couple buttons and the pod appeared to explode. The result was being covered in freezing jelly. I slowly picked up my fallen comrade and made my way to the door when I was interrupted by the Apex Doctor,
    "Never knew Novachildren to be merciful,"
    "We're not, if you haven't heard yet, something big's coming, and I'm leaving you to distract it," I said as I threw him a spare handgun, "Shoot on sight, Doc."
    Just then the door to the lab opened,
    "Glad to see you could make it Shade."

    End of Chapter 1
    Side Note:
    This is actually my first time ever doing recreational writing so it may not be very good. I'm only a freshmen in high school.
    It was still really fun and I hope to do more chapters. If this isn't actually where the story is going, then post a reply telling me this doesn't fit and I'll take this down. Thanks for reading.
    P.S.
    The character is a male Novakid named Flameslinger. He is avid with firearms hence the name. He owns a legendary .85 Magnum Revolver with incendiary rounds.
     
    Last edited: Jan 12, 2014
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  11. Boboclown89

    Boboclown89 Big Damn Hero

    I absolutely love the way you're continuing! No worries, its all good. I'm going to continue as well.
     
  12. Boboclown89

    Boboclown89 Big Damn Hero

    I continue my story below!

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    Vi-I3 computer log, Month 3, Day 2

    I woke up to find myself in the arms of my Colleague 2, who must have intercepted the message, and was headed for the door. I heard explosions and screaming, no doubt because of Colleague 1.
    "Never knew Novachildren to be merciful." said an Apex Doctor. "We're not, if you haven't heard yet, something big's coming, and I'm leaving you to distract it," Col. 2 said, throwing the Doctor a gun. "Shoot on sight, Doc," he said, as the lab door opened, "glad to see you could make it Shade." There he was, Col. 1, and about time. I then proceeded to black out.

    Vi-13 computer log, Month 3, Day 3

    "Where am I?!" I shouted when I woke up. No response... I look to my right. A glitch flag. I look to my left. A glitch cooking pot, with Automato's cooking. I'm on my ship. " Glad to see you're awake." I look to the voice. It's Col. 1. " You've been out for a day now." Now I look to that voice. It's Col. 2. "What happened?" I mutter. "You blacked out, probably because of spending a month in a Stasis chamber." Gee, ya think? "What happened to the Apex Lab?" I ask. "It is now a pile of ash." Col. 1 responds. "Can I have some Automatos?" "You asked right on time, cuz they're ready!" Good.

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    I'm gonna end my part here, but I have a question. Was it Slade that caused the explosions? Just curious.
    Welp, you can continue now! So far, it's pretty good in my opinion.
     
  13. Priest_Drew123

    Priest_Drew123 Void-Bound Voyager

    Yep it was Shade. I got that from when zaisher said, "I'm going to assume just blow up everything" I'm gonna try and make the characters in the character creator
     
    Last edited: Jan 13, 2014
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  14. Boboclown89

    Boboclown89 Big Damn Hero

    I assumed it was shade, just not sure, thx for that. I'm going to give some facts about Vi-I3, if you don't mind:
    • She is 27 years old.
    • She is in a group called the Fighting Warriors Across the Universe, or the FWAU. The FWAU's goal is to fight, fight, and fight some more. The FWAU's purpose is to let all fight-lovers get to fight some more. She joined the FWAU at 16, the base age requirement for any member.
    • She had the emotions of fear, sadness, pain, love, hate, anxiety, relief, calmness, and boredness removed at age 19 so she could fight better in the FWAU.
    That's about all I need to say for the story to make some sense, bye bye until the next post!
     
    Last edited: Jan 31, 2014
  15. Boboclown89

    Boboclown89 Big Damn Hero

    Where'd everybody go?
     
  16. ClarenceCore

    ClarenceCore Void-Bound Voyager

    Sigh* A dead thread. Sad clown. Party's ruined. It's no use.

    I might contribute to the story, I just need to review the other chapters again, I don't really know what to add on though.
     
  17. Boboclown89

    Boboclown89 Big Damn Hero

    Sad days...
     
  18. Zaisher

    Zaisher Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    sorry about not posting I sort of ran out of ideas and forgot about the thread altogether wish the thread was more popular because I honestly have NO idea on how to continue it
     
  19. Boboclown89

    Boboclown89 Big Damn Hero

    Idk, do something on the ship I guess... oh welsssies
     

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