Unbound Travels - Starbound Private RP

charactername: alice
race: human
general info: i like to help with server , and help ppl sometimes i like to stream what im doing and play in party
character biography: i dont know xd actualy working at it

 

Character Name: Arietta Falcon

Character Race: Avian

Character General Info: Arietta is sixteen years old female Avian. Ever since she was a young child she has been fascinated with flight. She idolizes Kluex, the winged God of the Aether. As is common practise by one who worships Kluex, wherever she goes, she builds temples dedicated to him. Arietta has a strong sense of exploration that is always sending her across the surface of every planet she encounters, but only the surface. Arietta is very claustrophobic and avoids closed spaces and underground areas as much as possible. She can hold her own in simple battle but she has never been the strong and fierce warrior many Avians are. Instead she found her focus on collecting. As she explores she constantly collects interesting trinkets that aren't found on her home planet.

Character Description:

Arietta has soft blue feathers with black, alert eyes. She wears simple black clothes. She's not very muscly but is extremely fit.

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Character Biography:

Arietta's parents were respected warriors and had always envisioned their children becoming the same. Arietta's brother went on to be a fierce warrior but Arietta had never been much of a warrior, she much preferred exploring. It was easy to tell her parents were disappointed but they still tried to be support her.

When she was fifteen she set out on her own away from home. She was always faithful to the Avian religion of worshipping Kluex though. As she continues on her adventures she is always adding to her collections and building temples of worship to Kluex.

 

Character Name:Luke Luquinn
Character Race: Glitch
Character General Info: He is age 43 (change available), and is still very young and lively. He does like talking and playing music alongside others, but does not prefer to talk himself. He is an adventurer by heart. He has adventured into the dark frigid depths of snow, the hostile hotness of the desert, the staring eyeballs of the eyeballland and many more. He himself can not even remember how many planets and lands he has adventured. He maintains a close relationship with the people he loves and likes, occasionally dropping in on them to give them a few souvenirs of his previous adventures. He is quite skillful of a spaceship driver, although he sometimes goes a little bit over the edge and crashes into some planet or another. Due to the odd crash, his ship is quite battered.
Character Description: He has a black knight's helmet on his head , and yellow LED lights for eyes. A black shirt and black pants is his usual attire, although he does wear other festive attires in festivities. The reason for black is because it is fit for adventurers. The black hides any dust and sand that have caught on, and hides also oil marks and sweat. A gold belt is used to hold up his pants, and brown leather boots are usually worn for style. He is nimble and swift, therefore having no excessive muscle. His force and speed, are in contrast not to be laughed at. His health and strength are almost as similar as can be to a wild and fierce animal. He has short limbs and small feet in coordination.
Character Biography: Once upon a time, a child looked up to the sky and saw a wondrous being... No. None of this. Actually, he and his father were kidnapped by the Apex. They said that his father was connected to a illegal Apex connection, taking him into custody and leaving a little boy about the age of 17 oiling ( Glitch term for bleeding : I made it up ) in the dark streets. A little Apex boy saw him and pleaded his father to take the little Glitch home an save him. His father refused naturally, and the family went away. The little Glitch looked up to the smoke of the towering buildings and thought : thought that his mother and sister would be there, beyond that black smoke. Then he blacked out. when he regained consciousness later, he was on a wooden floor, in the midst of a Apex family. The father was frowning heavily, but the boy was unknowing of it and filled with joy. Over the course of may years, the glitch boy became legally a member of the Apex family and earned the name Luke Luquinn, following the first name of his lost father and the last name of the father that adopted him. Luke was on the search for his father's location for decades, however the information was not revealed to him. Incidentally, his adopted father then became a big cheese in the Apex community with a big success of the business he was president of. Luke, having been an adult for a long time and having earned a lot of money along with a small loan from his father, bought a run down Glitch ship. With new found information from his father that his real Glitch father may be alive despite a heavy injury : He set off into the deep vast galaxy with newly found bravery and a fearsome will, the will to find his father.

 

I know it's a bit rude, but is anyone going to judge these applications? There is more than two pages full of them and not one has been judged, I understand people are busy but I'm so excited to join so please excuse my informality aha.

 

Character Name : Zake Takanori
Character Race : Hylotl
Character General Info : About 22 on human years , He is kind of a serious guy when it comes to personal interests, but he likes a good joke , he is a friendly guy , he's a good hunter.
Character Description : Zake is fully light blue with black clothes and three red eyes , he has a small fin on his head.
Character Biography : When a child Zake loved swimming, he loved it more than anyone , his dream as a child was to see the biggest ocean on the universe, but he knew that he couldn't just go like that , he knew that there was going to be great dangers , so until he was old enough to leave his village he trained his swimming and his hunting with about 15 human years , Zake could hunt anything on his planet, but he knew he still wasn't ready, when the time finally come, he said to himself , " Right now on this moment , i will dedicate my whole life into finding it .... The biggest ocean on the universe ,Nothing will stop me! " So his village that knew about his dream since he was a child gave him one of the spaceships they had , and he left... to explore the universe, to find the biggest universe on the world!

 

Patience, christmas is right around the corner.

 

Character Name: Gregory Holmes
Character Race: Avian
Character General Info:Early 20s. Greg is a introvert that tends to follow and not lead, he rarely objects he's very calm and controlled only taking action when necessary while he enjoy the company of people he finds it hard to make conversation He is fascinated by technology and it's use
Character Description: Black feathers, with no noticeable facial features,he's short for a avian, he likes to hide behind his glasses and thick clothing
Character Biography:When he was young he was brought up like most Avian's, in a village he was always curious having to know everything or be able to explain anything he saw so in his late teens he would stair into the sky the stars causing him to strive toward them this lead him to abandon his village and his home planet. He now searches the sky for answers and for a friend.

 

Character Name: Yetto

Character Race: Apex

Character General Info: Yetto is not entirely sure of his age, but he knows that he's getting old. His personality is skittish and flighty. He has trouble maintaining eye contact and his speech often seems disconnected or downright strange. He is not violent, but an intense personality nonetheless.

Character Description: Yetto is a light blue skinned Apex with white unkempt hair. His eyes are sunken from lack of sleep but almost always bulging wide open. His hands are always fidgeting, as if folding invisible origami. Clearly, Yetto is an Apex with something always on his mind, usually complicated schemes against the MiniKnog and conspiracy theories dealing with the Big Ape.

Yetto refuses to eat any food but bananas. He's not only picky but he's very vocal about what he thinks of the disgusting things that others eat.

Character Biography: In an early experiment by the MiniKnog, lofty scientist Elborn Knutson decided to raise one of the strange blue skinned apex in captivity and observe the effects of it's strange skin pigment.1 This unfortunate victim was named Yetto. Yetto picked up language from his scientist caretakers and mimicked their behaviors, he even was taught how to read, but he never quite became the intellectual, social being that Apex were known for after the administration of the Vestigi-Evo Process. That is, until he escaped. His caretaker had mindlessly forgotten to pressurize the air seal on Yetto's cell, and all it took was a swift kick to push the door open.

Having never even left the cold steel walls of the MiniKnog laboratory, the outside world was a bizarre and dangerous place. He lived solely off of bananas which he would steal from the nearby MiniKnog lab. He was constantly occupied trying to unpack and debrief from the traumatic events of his early life. The Apex who he thought were his caretakers, in reality, turned out to be his captors. This filled him with a powerful rage, but he was able to contain himself if only for the cause of getting to the bottom of the horrible situation that is the MiniKnog.

One day, while spying out of his tiny cave window, Yetto had discovered a book dropped by a careless passerby. The book was titled "Flying for Absolute Incompetent Morons: Beginner's Edition". It wasn't long before he was tired of reading about it and wanted to fly an actual ship. The MiniKnog transport ships were always coming and going. All it took were some quick decisions and a few punches and Yetto was lifting off from the ground, with no clue what he was doing or where he was going. He ascended into the blackness for days and days until he found something amazing; other planets. He had no idea that the universe was full of so many different things and people. The Apex revolutionaries are skeptical of Yetto due to his offbeat demeanor and chooses not to associate with him, Yetto considers himself a part of the revolution as he fights for the same cause. He has a hard time socializing and sometimes accidentally comes across as sort of a creep but he continues to learn and adapt as he explores the galaxy.

1 The experiment yielded the result of a speculation that these blue Apex, affectionately named Yetis after the age-old earth lore, were slightly resistant to cold and had a different kind of brain function, similar to Autism in humans.



About me: I'm an artist and a writer, I play many video games and I've been a DM for a Dungeons and Dragons group for about two years now, so I'm very familiar with roleplaying. I can't wait to see what this server is all about!

 

Character Name: Kosta`
Character Race: Human
Character General Info: Kosta is a relaxed kinda guy. Loves to have fun and meet new people.
Character Description: Average size male with a big heart. Loves meeting new people and exploring the world of starbound
Character Biography: An orphan who has had no one. A man who fought against all odds to become what he is today. People always told him he would be nothing....now he has his own ship and makes his own path.

 

Why the hell on character general info you call him kosta? if the name is nick pavese '-'

 

Character Name: TK-1337
Character Race: Glitch
Character General Info: TK is very social for a past house droid, prefers hot climates ( he claims its not good for his circuits otherwise), his age is unknown due to all of the commerce and markets on the desert planet of Zyngia II c; he was sold as a common house droid with his memory wiped as standard procedure.
Character Description: His outer dura-metal covers have a earthen brown/ tan finish to them, and 2 antenna coming from his side head piece, mainly used for comm talk and constant UI updates from an unknown source.
Character Biography: TK-1337 is a very unique android, and for this reason of being unique is also why he had to hastily leave his last known planet location. TK has a conscious. From what TK remembers his story begins in a small market hut in the Citadel Center. TK was up for sale at a very low cheap price, it seemed a steal to most. In this case he was bought up right quick in matter of a couple days being there. He was bought as a house droid ( which tends to all the small matters: dishes, clothes, etc.). But one day he had to run an errand which took him to the nasty part of town, full of criminals and all kinds a crazy people. When he dropped a bag of groceries that rolled into the back of an alley, he was ambushed with a quick emp grenade to the chest plate. When waking up he found himself in a laboratory strapped down tight. A man of science came from the corner of the table and attached what he called a centra-fusion anti-matter diode to TK's front face plate. All of a sudden TK woke up with the scientist dead and the whole building on fire, but strangely he felt something in his head, something he never processed before... some memories of his past. Memories of him having highly advanced combat training, being uploaded with billions of different languages, and a talking with other bots of his kind. He snapped back to his present time when the building almost collapsed on him if he didnt react fast enough. While dashing out of the doorway into the street, only to be seen by a guard ship which then took force and tried to apprehend him in the act. Fortunately for TK he managed to out maneuver the guard and take the ship. Someone or something tried to blame that scientists death on him. Now hes out in the universe for answers...

(p.s. sorry the length)

 

Was a mistake sorry. I replied to another thread with a very similar application and it asked for my real name.

 

Character Name: Tina Lin
Character Race: Human
Character General Info: She is a astronaut, who train by scientist in order to have the ability to survival in space. Her mission is to find a suitable planet for humans. But she is not the only one, there are many astronauts like her, who send by human into universe to find a suitable planet for humans to live. She is kind and gentle person, that she like to touch and communicate with other different kind of species to understand their culture and like to learning their languages.
Character Description: 28 year old, Asian, black hair, black eyes with yellow skin, 168cm height.
Character Biography: In 3015, when Tina is 4 year old. She and her families was migrant to America. She enjoy communicate with different people which from different country. Her dream was to become a astronaut and after several competition, she successfully become a astronaut and train in NASA. Her devotion to universe, make her become one of the best astronaut in NASA. When she receive a Mar exploration mission and been train for several months. She think so exciting about the first touch to the universe. But luck not always belong to her, there is unknown virus have spreading throughout the America then the world and causing some of the animals become mutant and violent, they begin to slaughter every species they saw. So the world`s president decide to find a new planet, which suitable for human to live. Now all the survivors from earth are temporal living in Mars waiting one day a astronaut come back and tell them the good news and Tina is now managing to be this astronaut.

Additional info: my email is: binhaowu@hotmail.co.uk and steam id: 女汗子.

 

Alright. I'm going to be reviewing as many applications up until this post as I can.

I apologize in advance to any moderators whom have denied apps, and I judge the remade versions of those denied apps, but honestly, it's just too much work to go around and look to see which one has been denied and which hasn't. Anyhow, let the reviews begin!

 

YAY

 

Remember to read this announcement for permanent user accounts: http://halcyon-network.net/forums/showthread.php?239-Permanent-Server-Accounts

 

Character Name : Solon Aoyama
Character Race : Hylotl
Character General Info : 25 human years, Solon is calm and composed, facing most distressing situations while keeping a serene face. He enjoys farming and meeting new people and species to sell his products. His favorite hobby is archeology, going to remote planets to investigate the remains of former civilizations, all meanwhile collecting some baubles for himself.
Character Description : Solon has light green skin with only a purple fin on top of his head, flowing backwards. He dresses in a brown and black monk attire.
Character Biography : Solon is the eldest son in a family of rice farmers. When turning into adult age, Solon was employed by his father as the pilot of a small merchant vessel that sailed between the Hylotl homeworld and its nearby colonies, selling produce from his family property to the colonists. A floran attack managed to set the ship adrift into deep space, but knowing the coordinates, Solon stopped in a nearby planet and gathered fuel for the trip home. He returned unscathed to his homeworld, to the joy of his family. Yet the experience had greatly impressed him. He never had seen a Floran, or any other species before for that matter. And the time he spent on a distant alien planet gathering fuel to make the trip back home was freeing, to say the least. Human months later, he was leaving the Hylotl homeworld on a ship of his own, with no certain destination in mind.

 

Denied
Whilst the writing is very good, and I can see you have put a lot of effort into this application, I'm afraid I cannot accept it. I'm not comfortable with your character having 'come back to life', nor the idea of you being somewhat of a 'unique race'. You see, if you die in our server, you die. There are no workarounds, sorry. I really do hope you reapply with a different concept, as you truly are a skilled writer and I believe would enjoy your time on our server

Denied
It's very rare that we allow child characters, and I'm afraid your application did not justify allowing you to play one. Any character under the age of 20 is considered a child.

Accepted
Please await a PM from me.

Accepted
I like it. A nice interpretation of the little lore we have. Please remember that every character is liable to death, no matter how good their training. Await a PM from me.

Denied
You're almost there! Just expand on the biography a little bit more. What was especially bad about the 'odd jobs' she performed, so much so that she doesn't speak of it? Go into a bit more detail about her life on the streets, and perhaps a bit more about her time in the USMC, and you should be good to go.

Denied
We don't allow characters that have been used in Singleplayer. Anything used by your character in our server must have been found by your character in multiplayer. Aside from this; please put more detail into your biography, as it is currently quite vague and leaves a lot of missing details.

Denied
Seriously lacking in information and effort currently.

Denied
An interesting character concept with good potential. Please remember that this company will not have already been set up on our server, and you shall have to set it up yourself, so you should tailor your biography to tailor this. Aside from that, please work on your biography to include more detail.

Tentatively Accepted
Considering how little lore we have regarding the structure of Hylotl society, and their interactions with other races (Bar Florians), I cant really fault you on the lore. Aside from that, I liked the character.

Denied
You're really close to being accepted, so please dont be disheartened! I would just like a little more detail in your characters biography, perhaps regarding his time in Colony Co, or even his time on Earth. Please remember that Humans couldn't travel further than their own Solar System before the destruction of Earth due to technical 'limitations'.

Accepted
Some parts of the biography confused me, however the writing is nice and I enjoyed reading it. You have proven through the application that you are capable enough to be apart of our server, I feel. Please await a PM from me.

Denied
"and saw that the glitch blown up earth"
Please review Human Lore and try again. The entirety of your biography conflicts with Human Lore.[/quote]

Denied
This character could be expanded upon further. Please add more information, as the amount of detail and information you have shows us how much effort you put into your character.

Tentatively Accepted
The application is simple, although it sticks to the lore and I feel as though there was just enough information provided.


I am currently reviewing more applications. If you have not yet been reviewed, hang tight!

 

Would it be okay if I played her as someone with a very rare illness that causes her body to age rapidly rather than someone who died and was brought back to life? She wouldn't be an unique race anymore, just human with an illness. I can edit the bio if need be.

 

That sounds good to me! Feel free to post your application again with a reviewed biography, and I can guarantee it will be reviewed tonight. Thank you for your patience, and continued effort!