Unbound Travels - Starbound Private RP

Character Name: Ghost Wanderer
Character Race: Floran
Character General Info: 29 years. Sex: Male
Character Description: Brown skin with purple leaf color, dark brown eyes, vibrant hair.

Character Biography: Ghost lost his family and tribe during a war between his tribe and several others. Seeing his family being devoured after the fierce battle he managed to escape when his mother hid him before the battle, he was only 7 at the time. Running for his life he stumbled upon a sole Hylotl scientists in the woods. Being on the run for days Ghost was tired and hungry and when the unfamiliar creature offered it food he accepted without question. Ghost followed this unfamiliar creature and studied it as much as the Hylotl studied him. After years the scientist and started teaching Ghost, he showed him how to use tools that had flickering lights and buttons and how to grow food. The Hylotl thought him language basic culture and knowledge. At the age of 29 Ghost and the scientists lived together for a long time, now as mentor and apprentice. When Ghost was studying another Floran tribe trying to learn his roots the camp that him and the scientist where staying at was raided by bandits. The Hylotl was tortured and killed, when Ghost returned he found his mentor dead and mutilated. Ghost was furious his thirst for blood returned, something he was trying to suppress for years. In the night he managed to track the bandits back to their temporary camp and slaughtered every single one of them. tarring them limb from limb and decorating the ground with their blood. With just the clothes on his back he managed to steal one of the bandit ships and with the knowledge that was thought to him by his mentor he traveled to the furthest planet. Trying to begin his new life once again and forget all that he has lost. He discarded his name and took upon a more fitting name, Ghost.

 

I guess mine was skipped as I have waited for almost a week now and your mods have been replying to others ahead, so I'll repost:

Character Name: Abram Boris
Character Race: Human (Cranky one)
Character General Info: Abram Boris is a 73 year old fart that is too busy too socialize as he believes that his experiments and inventions are the utmost importance.
Character Description: Abram's appearance consists of gray frizzy hair that he is slowly losing, a genuine yet old fashioned gray sweater, gray slacks, and surprisingly something that is not gray, his dads old ox hide shoes.
Character Biography: When Abram was in his younger years, the size of his brain was three times of an Apex's, making him an invaluable resource among the Humans and Apex's, creating conflict over the two races as his inventions both aided in military uses and later leading to deeper astronomical exploration. Abram at the beginning of his elderly years, decided he could take care of himself without relying on an entire race, now with just his spaceship, trusty tools and gadgets is looking for a peaceful, welcoming community on a desolate planet where he can conduct as many experiments as his old heart desires.

 

Please revise your biography a bit. I'd like to see more events directed towards your character and how they lived.

I'd like for you to expand upon your biography a bit more, add a few more important life events that link to personality traits of your character.

You're going to need to adjust the race. We currently aren't accepting any race that isn't a playable race in-game, sorry.

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Does Ryosuke live on a planet different from earth? I need to know about this economically driven city-world.

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I'm gonna need you to flesh out your biography a bit more. Give me a bit more details about what Andrew did in the past, how he interacted with his father, how he felt about the Bow smith shop, and any important events that happened in the past that define who Andrew is.

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Please add more detail to your biography. Do you have any information on his life before being adopted by the Okami clan? can you go into more detail about the events of his parents death and how the Okami clan found him?

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I'm going to need a lot more detail and info on your application, please.

Can you tell me how Rumex came to learn how to fly a ship?

Give me a little more detail on the early life of Bunsen II.

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I just have a few questions and discrepancies with your story. How exactly does he master swordsmanship within the course of a year with no teacher or any form of learning device? Where did he get access to a gun, a bow, and heavy weaponry to teach himself how to use them effectively? How did he learn how to build traps and such after the raid? Who is Max? Where did he come from?

Please look over your story and revise it to either explain or correct these plot holes. I appreciate the effort and time you put into to type this whole story though.

 

Character Name: Fiane Vetra

Is the next profile to be reviewed.

 

Character Name: Disclosed, calls himself “Kurai”

Character Traits: A Hylotl extremely secretive about the significant pieces of his past and has been known to make up different stories for every person who asks. His skin is light sea green in colour, which he sometimes uses to appeal to the spiritual by explaining that in a past life he was a water dragon. He tends to wear different clothes depending on what occasion is being participated in, sometimes he pretends to look rich in order to appeal to others, other times seeming dirt poor to try and get some free money from those he can fool. With one large fin centering the back of his head, spiking off into three separate points, he sometimes intimidates those around him with his seemingly larger appearance, which he believes works perfectly to his life style.

Character’s Backstory (we think):
We have been following Kurai around for the past few weeks, recording all of the stories that he has been telling random strangers, and from what we’ve put together as the most likely to be true is a rather smooth story, though it does have a few breaks. The most likely start to his life that he has explained is that at a young age, he never specified an exact one, he had his planet taken over by Florans. He further explained that during this hostile takeover, which has been documented and is true, he had his family slaughtered and he was taken in by a Floran that didn’t want to kill a child. From there, we find a significant gap in his story until he was about twelve years old. He explained to one of our crew that when he was twelve years of age he learned of what the Florans had done to his people, and when he discovered that his adoptive father was the one to murder his true parents he was thrown into a frenzy. He began to trash the house, swinging about a sword that his adopted father was teaching him how to hunt with, and when the Floran tried to step in to stop him, Kurai lodged the sword into the plant’s stomach. The story doesn’t quite make sense, as we have yet to document a Floran that had shown remorse for anyone, let alone a Hylotl, but individuals are subject to differentiating from their race. Kurai’s story continues as he states that he ran from his new home, sword in tail and with enough food to spare, stealing his adopted parents’ interplanetary transport, and stealing away into the depths of another star system. Once again, after this, he seems to fall off the face of the universe, not to be heard from again, until later in his life, already at the time of early adulthood, he is found pillaging a Floran village somewhere in the expansive Beta Sector. The recorded attack tells of him and a small crew of mercenaries creeping onto the planet by night, only to murder its inhabitants just as they awoke, giving them a chance to see the face of their murderers. The village was quickly in ruins and not a single body stirred, except for one that is. Kurai tells of how while rummaging through the village’s chests and storages, he found a near empty jail, empty of all but a single human. A common enemy had the two bond before they had even spoken with one another, and upon releasing the human from confinement the two had proceeded to tear the village to the ground, leaving all in ruin other than the one large tree at the center. The two of them stared menacingly at the centerpiece of the destruction, and with a simple flick of a match the base of the tree began to burn. The two stood back from the burning spectacle as branches began to fall from it and leaves slowly sparked and burned to nothing, and they laughed, ignoring the fact that this was once a home to hundreds of men, women and children. Once again there is a flash forwards in time, and Kurair noted that he and his human friend seized to adventure together any longer due to the human having what he describes as “problems with stupid women”, and so Kurai continued to adventure by his lonesome, pillaging villages, and leaving nothing in his wake other than destroyed buildings and bloodied bodies. His most recent attack, however, didn’t go quite as well on his part. He made it out of the village, barely alive, and from such he seems to have had a change of heart, not murdering everything in sight, but nobody ever flips right around to their opposite. In due time he will go back to being the murderous fiend that he once was.

 

Character Name: MR CHEEZ
Character Race: Avian
Character General Info: I am 14, a good player I have decent weapons, tech and armour.
Character Description: Blue Avian with Full Durasteel Armour, a legendary weapon, and a few guns. I am up to the Delta Sector
Character Biography: I have been playing on the game for 30 hours, and I have travelled far and wide in search for the perfect solar system to match my needs. I then built a grand house, and equipped myself with fine tools. I have defeated 3 bosses, and very close to the 4th. I am looking for a server on which to film youtube videos and generally have fun. Please Accept me?!?!

 

Character Name: Ricard de'Armaan

Appearance: Tall and lanky human, mid 30s with a rugged facial structure. He has long brown hair and green eyes. He wears slacks and a leather jacket. He carries himself with a paranoid, twitchy demeanor, forever watchful of his surroundings.

Hobbies: Cooking, playing music, and the occasional drink or two.

Background: He is an intergalactic smuggler, after completing his most recent transaction he found himself lost and out of fuel in dead space. Far away from the people and the places hes used to, Ricard drops himself down to the surface of an unknown planet, wary of what dangers he may encounter.

 

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Prince Auberon
(Royalseed Floran)






Character General Info:
Prince feel many passssing brightssstar within ssstemsss. Prince not guessss apenumber. Guessss not make for sssmart Floran like Prince. Prince know hunt. Prince know book. Prince hasss many sssecret of Greenfinger. Prince know all Floran bessst hunt together. Floran mussst ssshow other! Floran mussst be one!

Character Description:
Prince muchlike thingsss of ssshiny. Mossst love gold-thing and sssparklerock. Prince muchtime ssset them in growing manetangle. Prince muchlike red. Manetangle of Prince isss red. Chessstbark of Prince isss red. Prince alwaysss ssseek make all thing red. Lucky, lucky Prince that many thing in 'verssse made of red!

Character Biography:
Book now lossst ssso many page. Prince isss crafty and make many, but Prince make lifehunt too many passssingsss. Not remember where comesss before hunt. Sssometime Prince dream of oaken sssoldiersss. Of ssslimy demonsss. Of burning hot firesss in dry grasssss. Prince dreamsss crassshing tower of highbark and roothall sssticky with lifesssap. Prince dream muchold Floran, but not hear hisss wordsss. Doesss Prince forget... or remember?? Prince know only dreamsss and book sssince lifehunt. But, Prince make lifehunt no more. Prince mussst find home. Prince mussst find cocoonkin!​

 

Character Name: Naven Hikiri (Nav for short)
Character Race: Human
Character General Info: 29, good under pressure, kind, swordsman
Character Description: purple hair, darkskin, dark brown eyes
Character Biography: Born in a town named Bellview. Naven had no friends, and was picked on at school. Mostly do to is naturally purple hair or his dark skin. For the extent of his school life all he heard was "princess" He may never have made it if not for his sister. What he lacked in people skills he made up for in swordsmen ship. The Hikiri family were known for their combat skills, and many soldiers. Nav's sister Myu was well trained in the art of the sword. Being the older of the the two she was thought. Nav would have too if not for his mom and dad's untimely demise. Myu trained Nav, not just for his protection but to keep her self sane and not thanking about her mom/dad. Nav somehow made it though high school, but didn't enroll in collage. Instead he got a job as a cashier to support him and his sister. Then Myu fell ill. One day, wile tinding to Myu, a well dressed man came to the door. As it turns out his father was a gambling man. A dept of 10,000,000 Pixels had piled up and they had to pay it. They had to leave, and quick. Nav found a caravan trader willing to adopt. The trader would only take one. Nav left Myu in the hands of the trader. Then he skipped town. Quickly finding himself in a big city he took up thievery. After Raising enough funds he bought a ship and started to look for a new home. Keeping tabs on this sister and her health.

 

Review pls.

 

It seems you skipped some applications there.

 

Re-post with updated version.

Character Name: Okami Aoi .
Character Race: She is a Human.

Character Description/General Info:
Aoi is very calm and tempered when needed but also active and euphoric for the rest of the time , she loves the rain and her Samurai Clan which she is very loyal to. She is 27 years old , an expert with the bow and a master of the Samurai ways. Her long bright white hair is a typical trait of her clan , that doesn't mean she is old , pure clan members are born that way , white hair as snow and glacial darkblue eyes. Aoi is eager to find a new home ,a new start for her people and mostly for herself , she felt so lost living as a space nomad.Recently she made alliance with the other two Samurai clans : the Hayashi and Natsume, together they share the dream to make a peaceful village for their clans and her friends where they can rest , trade and live together.
The name Okami means Wolf , in her clan all members wear a Blue Kimono and a black skirt while the Hayashi wear Green Kimono and the Natsume wear it Red.They all use Hylotl weapons since they are very similar to japanese ones . They traveled alot after the earth's destruction , they lost many comrades , all they have left is to not forget their traditions and make a new stand.

Character Biography: Aoi has always lived in her family branch , not knowing much of the outside world , she has been growing according to the Samurai values passed down by her family to her. From child to now , she has lived to exceed the high expectations of her family and clan members.But she also dreamed of the outside world since her mother used to storytell and feed her immagination with heroic quests and wonderful places. By the age of 14 during the last day of autumn ,she won an important tournament between Clans to inherit the Yorei Shrine that was held and cared by her family from four generations, that tournament showed her clan members she had the strenght to be a leader. For her, the possibility to not succed in something is not acceptable.She was taught the katana combat ways since she was ten by her father , who died early due to a disease hailing from space. His death threw a great shadow in her life, leaving her behind with a huge hole in her heart. Since that episode she makes sure to live everyday to the fullest in order to not regret anything in case something happens. She is afraid of being left alone or left behind by her people that are all what she has left .This made her improve herself in order to gain security and live on the tragic episodes she passed. Due her father's death , she took over her father's duty as the head of the Okami Samurai Clan guiding them to a new home , showing them only her strong side , knowing that all of them rely their hopes on her , she can't show them her weakness or they would fall. Only Fuyu an Avian she took into her clan knows both sides of her being , she trusts him like he was blood-related to her even though he tends to be too sticky. All she knew , the world as it was ,is now part of a fairytale she sings herself to sleep...those days passed in the dojo with her family, the love and care for the Yorei Shrine and her father are now ashes of her past.

 

Coming back for round two
Character Name:
Fuyu no ōkami (Winter Wolf)

Character Race:
Avian

Character General Info:
Age:23
Personality: Fuyu is furiously loyal, obidient, and relaxed (or lazy, take your pick). Because of the events that happened early in his life he distrusts anyone he hasn't met before purely from fear. He is somewhat immature at times but very serious other times.
He absolutely hates Florians. He loves to play music, his favorite item he owns is a guitar given to him by his mother.

Character Description: Slightly blue feathering, huge fan of plumage on his head, he dons the kimono worn by the Okami clan.

Character Biography:
Fuyu was born to parents who lived on a practically deserted planet, he had pure white feathering, he brought great joy into his parents lives. Fuyu lost his father when he was very young, he never found out what happened to him but he knows he was too young to remember him. He was raised by his mother who worked very hard to feed him after she lost her mate. Every day they would go pick berries and he'd learn more about the world they lived in. One day while they were picking berries he got seperated for his mother, and he picked a berry from a oddly large bush. The bush leapt at him and tried to drive a wooden spear into his face, his mother appeared out of nowhere and scared off the vile creature. That night his mother taught him about other races in the galaxy, such as the Florians. That was when he developed his hatred of Florians.
Years passed and he learned how to hunt with a bow, and fight with a sword and sheild. He learned how to read and write and he learned how to do his favorite thing, he learned to play music like all avians do. These were the good times.
Sadly, the good times would not last. His mother was growing old and frail and he spent a lot of time taking care of her, he returned home one day to find his home on fire and his mother dead in her bed... he was just 19. He broke down and cried and it rained, it rained very hard and for days... the next day a human warrior found him crying outside in the rain, and she put a beautiful blue cloak over his shoulders and brought him to her clans camp. When he arrived and took off the cloak he dried off to find his white feathers had been stained blue by the cloak and the rain.
Since that day he has spent the rest of his life at this womans side as part of her clan. All he knows about the people who killed his mother was that they were humans who had tried to inhabit the planet after earth was destroyed. The Okami clan had the same thought but arrived to find the planet in flames. He has spent years in the pursuit to find the people who burned his planet and murdered his beloved mother, as well as working with the Okami clan to repay the woman who saved his life that day years ago.

(I would request I be allowed to bring an Acoustic guitar onto the server as part of my characters story)

 

Are any of the mods checking the Halcyon Network Forums application page? I understand things take time, just ween watching people get accepted here while waiting for a response on the main forum.

My apologies for being rude, I am not intending to be.

CrackShotCleric


EDIT - Forgot I only posted at 50 PM EST today, been working and editing since about 4 PM EST yesterday, please ignore this post.

 

Looks cool

 

Character Name: Vladmir Kane
Character Race: Human
Character General Info: A 28 year old leader of a private military protecting the human race.
Character Description: Medium height, blue eyes and wears clean clothes.
Character Biography: Vladmir grew up in a strict family and went to a private rich military school, Once vladmir graduated he joined the military until he was scared off of his home planet earth. Vladmir created a private military called HLP (Human life protection) to protect the human race.

 

Re-posting from official Halcyon Network Forums:

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Character Name: Tanner D. (Dax) Lysovan
Character Race: Human, M
Character General Info:
Subject shows high intellectual ability. Behavioral patterns show refined abilities for social and environmental adaptation.
*NOTE: Subject shows tendencies of developing moral attachments with subjects of similar social pattern types, perhaps to point of fault - see "LOYALTY: SUBTYPE OVER-TRUSTING"
*NOTE: Feature has high probability for successful exploitation
Subject also shows behavioral patterns indicative of militaristic lifestyle. Work ethic is admirable, subject takes few/infrequent pauses for rest, often working itself to exhaustion for causes beneficial to peer group - see "LOYALTY"
Down time is often spent resting, reading, socializing with peers, or fixating on paraphernalia in bouts of depressive mood swings
*NOTE: Items appear to be a necklace, several slips of writing paper, a printed codex, and photographs. High-resolution scans yet unobtainable.
Subject displays behaviors indicative of deeply inset beliefs of UNIVERSAL benefit vs. impairment - see "MORALITY: RIGHT/WRONG"
Body posture displays near-constant state of readiness for purposes of Violence or labor if necessary.
Behavior patters suggest previous experience with star-exploration. Experience level rating: Journeyman - See "ADJECTIVES;EXPERIENCE;SEASONED"
Subject is proficient in the areas of: Piloting, Celestial Navigation, Use of projectile weapons, Habitat construction, Space Craft maintenance/repair, Programming, Task force leadership.

Character Description:
Age: 25
Race: Caucasian
Height: 6' 2" Imperial Standard
1.88 Meters, International System of Units
Body Structure: Slim frame, however subject has deceptively high aptitude for physical exertion. Most likely attributed to the subject's strict exercise regimen.
Eye Color: Steel/Blue
Hair Color: Brown

Character Biography: Obtained via Standard "Tavern Meet and Greet" Procedure.
*NOTE: See "EXPENSES" for complete itemized listing for Intel opp expenses.

Quoted from subject:

"I'm not from here, at least I don't think so. Not quite sure where "here" is. Then again, I guess I'm not quite from anywhere. I was born on a mining vessel, outer colonies. My parents were employed by the Colonial-Corp Industries at the time, and I spent most of my childhood running around ore transports and studying galactic common with a subroutine on the emergency transponder. As it was in the navigation/comms station, I had a head start in both. Not to brag, but I could plot a FTL jump at the age of 8.

When I was 9, my parents got a job planet side on a Terra-class medium planet named Detteros. Nice enough. The weather was a bit harsh though. Otherwise it was a virtual earth clone. The next year my parents, now that we could afford it and lived somewhere worth living, started having more children. First were my sisters, twins. My parents named them Abby and Alease. Then, three years later, our family expanded to include my youngest brother, Zane. From there, we grew like any normal family, I guess. I finished secondary school, and joined the United Earth Federation Fleet with the rest of my class to fight on the Orion front. The war had just started up and we wanted to get in on the action before it ended.

Unlike my friends however, my entrance examinations marked me as a prime candidate for flight school, which meant officer school as well. The next 7 years were almost living hell. Nothing but training, drilling, and research. In officer school we were taught everything any of our subordinates would have to know, and more, so we could actually understand the orders we gave others. Flight school was a nightmare, because you had to build your own ship in which to learn how to fly. So all that training actually came in handy.

It seemed like I had finally got things going when I graduated from flight school. It was a huge deal, I was the first in my family to go, much less complete and the Fleet even payed for my family to be there to watch the ceremony in person. I remember thinking how everything was working out. I had a very nice paycheck, a secure place to house my family, job security, food on the table. Everything was perfect, until the Orions launched a surprise offensive deep into the core worlds. We still don't know how they got past both the outer colonies and the buffer worlds without detection, but now it doesn't matter I guess.

They made a large scale, simultaneous attack on each of the Core World strongholds; Gilamon, Vandibuit IX, Cascapulon VII, Alpha Undexuven, Earth, all of our strongest worlds. To each they brought enough ships to outnumber our fleets at least 20 to 1. I remember their fighters were numerous enough to create a false eclipse as I walked across the commons to see my family in the mess. I had just been given my ship assignment, The U.E.F.F.S. Napoleon; A medium-heavy tonnage carrier class. Primarily outfitted for Fleet single-ship support, The Napoleon Was home to no less then 6 fighter squadrons, two gunship squadrons, and three battalions of seasoned Marines.

I watched the first bombardment destroy much of the flight-line and primary command center. The alarm klaxons were screaming all over the base. In the distance I could faintly hear them in the civilian metropolis of Donak prime. Everything seemed to slow down to a crawl. I can remember the smell of scorched metal and earth, mixed in with the stench of charred flesh wafting in from the direction of the flight-line. I remember watching my father, mother, and siblings bust through the door of the mess and start running towards me. My father and mother were caught by the crowd, but my siblings were almost to me. I can clearly remember the sounds of the Orion fighter engines, screaming through the air overhead, it's Pulse Cannon discharging, the bolt impacting the mess, and the ear-wrenching scream as the building was obliterated by a super inferno of plasma. The sight of my flight mates and our families being blasted to little more then a fine red mist and occasional chunk of charred flesh is something I will never forget.

I'm not sure what changed inside, but something did that day. I remember getting up after the blast's shock wave. Things just seemed to take a sort of "grey-scale" look to them. Everything inside felt icy. I could feel the adrenaline rush, but it wasn't the fiery-energy I was used to. It was, I don't know, cold. Like a plasma battery fresh out the ammo crate, cool to the touch, but humming with energy. I could feel my stregnth not like a inferno, eager to spread and consume with out control, but like the glacial river, surging underneath the ice, waiting for a chance to tear it's victims from the world in it's freezing currents.

I don't want to talk about all of it, Partially because I am still under oath. Classified is Classified, even if I am in an unknown sector of space, and have no idea what Time I was whisked off to. To make a story short, I was able to join up with a group of marines who were headed to the flight line to re-establish a defense and help with the evacuation. With the other security forces, our base defense was able to hold the Orion troops off long enough to get most of our troops into space. The last shuttle launch was obliterated by and orbital bombardment, along with the ground forces defending it, I watched the explosion from my shuttle view-port. My ship landed on the Napoleon and after securing what we could, the captain ordered a jump to FTL. We ran, leaving behind our brothers to the firestorm of the Orion guns, but we lived to fight another day.

Eventually we were able to meet up with other U.E.F.F ships, and waged a Guerrilla campaign against the Orion fleets. We were always on the run, Rebels with no where to call home, and warriors fighting a war already lost. But on we fought, because the only other option was extinction at the hands of the Orions. This continued for almost three years, until our ship was chased into a warp storm by an Orion destroyer. I was sent on a scouting sortie and the jump went wrong, leaving me stranded in an empty shuttle, here...where ever here is.

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Character Name: Gildarts
Character Race: Human
Character General Info: I am 21, really new and like exploring
Character Description: a hard hat, and a pickaxe.
Character Biography: I was in search of a good planet to call home and then my ship broke down in the nearest gamma cluster
So, while I gets to fixing it, I might as well set up shop here.

 

Character Name: Tella Von Tei
Character Race: Human
Character General Info: I am 30
Character Description: Black coat, black hat.
Character Biography: Going across the galaxy, to became a grand master bounty hunter.