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Unbound Travels - Starbound Private RP

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  1. Basicorex

    Basicorex Yeah, You!

    Character Name: (native Hylotl name)Agnekai Both-Shai, (translated name) Eternal of the Ironscale.

    Character Race: Hylotl.

    Character General Info: Standing 6.4 feet tall, the Hylotl Agnekai is an imposing figure but whose personality is one of humilty, patience and respect, a former vanguard of the Ironscale clan who after the fall of his homeworld is looking for the "true" path, that which will lead him to hit destiny and although his reserved personality might indicate otherwise he will not hestiate to "end" the cycle of your suffering if it shows that you'll stand in his way. Age unkown but somewhere around his mid 20s.

    Character Description: Agnekai has dark blue fins and a light blue skin body with a beige belly, and he has also the ruby red eyes so commonly find among his species. He has honed his body and his mind to its out most peak through a training which focuses on strength, agility, speed, endurance and resisilince but also strategy, tactics, Tzhok-ta(Hylotl chess) and caligraphy, a training he where he now only needs to medidate to reap it's fruits as he's been training since the day he was a simple tadpole.

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    Character Biography: To know who Agnekai is you would have to know his clan, the Ironscale clan, a clan known for their practitioning of the deadly arts and although the Hylotl society being one that appreciates pacifism the practice of the deadly arts was greatly enjoyed not for the sake of causing harm but to enjoy the aesthetics of it. The deadly arts had many different practioners and different styles but one that came to differentiate itself from the others were that of the Ironscale clan, a style named the Both-Shai Ryu(Scale of the Iron Serpent) where the prime goal where to master the three paths, the Both Shi(iron soul), Both Shu(iron body) and the Both Sho(iron mind) and then and only then would one be able to become an Both Zen(iron master), the way to that were through rigorous training where they day after day trained from morning to the evening and always ended it with a memory meditation where they stored the days training in their muscle and mind memory, they also trained in wide variety of weapons but the ones prefered were the two handed long sword and the long range rifle. But no one had in the history of Ironscale clan ever mastered all three but there was a legend that someday when their people were in great peril there would be on among them who would master all three and bring an end to the great peril.

    Being told from the time he was a tadpole to the day he became an adult that a Hylotl siren(oracle) hade said that he would one day master all three paths of the deadly art Both-Shai Ryu, but the in the Ironscale clan there was only a master for two of the paths, so he when he grew up from his tadpole stage he was first sent to the Both Shu Zen(Iron body master) where he was trained in strenghtening his body and put through the most difficult of test and was taught to master all types of weapons until the day he became an Both Shu Zen himself. After that he was taken to the Both Sho Zen where he was to train his mind to reach that of the Both Sho Zen, so he was thaught to how to learn and use different types of technology, languages and history and he was also thaught in the sciences and in Tzhok-ta and the arts of war which he later on went to master in an age humans would consider him to be a young adult.

    So after mastering both the Both Shu and the Both Sho he couldn't find any to teach him the way of Both Shi and there was no great peril at that moment in his life either, so he was then told that he should go on a great journey as there was a forgotten part of what the Siren said, where no one new if she said the great journey for the Both Zen or his people, so they then took for granted that he would be the one to go and he did, some weeks after he had left his homeworld he saw a ship heading in the direction with great vines growing through it and so he tried to contact but couldn't and he thought it to be strange and got a very melancholic feeling but decided to leave and get some resources for his next part in his journey to become the Both Zen.
     
  2. MetalHead_Owl

    MetalHead_Owl Orbital Explorer

    Accepted. Expect a PM with the details soon.
    Denied. Expand you biography a bit, give more detail to your characters past.

    Accepted. Expect a PM with the details soon.

    Glad to see you expanded your backstory a bit.
    Accepted. Expect a PM with the details soon.

    Accepted. Expect a PM with the details soon.

    Accepted. Expect a PM with the details soon. And yes, the Hylotl invasion is valid on the server.

    EDIT:
    Accepted. Expect a PM with the details soon.
     
  3. Eyrok

    Eyrok Void-Bound Voyager

    Oh, how jolly! See you soon!
     
  4. Phoboss

    Phoboss Subatomic Cosmonaut

    WILL DO!
     
  5. jakp25

    jakp25 Void-Bound Voyager

    Character Name:

    Linus Cerdic

    Character Race:

    Glitch

    Character General Info:

    Created just 26 years ago with a rather simple desire to farm his boltbulb, currentcorn and automatoe's then sell them on market, his personality is forgiving and rather humble. Upon encountering a problem he will normally go about it in a calculating way, not leaping in, but not hanging back out of fear. Despite this, he is irrationally fearful of Floran's as although they do not want to eat him, they do want to eat other things, and blood is not a good thing. Being ambidextrous and strongly within the lower-class of his race's society has let him thrive where he is, able to feed two chick-bots at once.

    Character Description:

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    With a simple build and the good, honest clothing of a farmer, Linus fits in among the other Glitch lower-class all around the universe. His average height of 1.73905 metres exactly also leads to him being the most average Glitch you will likely ever see. Simple green eyes glow bright with amusement most of the time, although, upon occasion, they will fade with a slight worry, he is not at all intimidating. His clothes are normally mud-splattered and pockets filled to the brim with seeds of all varieties.

    Character Biography:

    Created on the forest planet of Alpha Chisti 053 V by two self-aware Glitch he has always lived a life free from the Hive-Mind and the rules of the Kingdoms. His childhood in general was good, and there was never any lack of Bolt-O's or Stuffed Automatoe's upon the table. An only child, with no other influences, he grew up with an great amount of respect for both of his parents, and always strived to follow their roles as farmers. His parents had different ideas, and although they hid it from him, they were poor, lacking in any pixels to buy from the locals (A few families of Avians and other Glitch). They aspired for more from him, more than they could do now, as their circuits grew frayed and wore out, their LEDs slowing fading. Not wanting him to share in their sorrow, they sold all they could, buying a FTL able ship, so that he could escape the monotony of the farming life.

    They never understood it was not what he wanted, that he wanted to be just like them, not an explorer but a farmer. To please them, he took the ship, as they leaned on each other, outside of the rural barn and house that had marked the first 14 years of his life. They had taught him everything they knew, but now they wished a different fate upon him. His worst memory is seeing them smile as his ship lifted off, knowing that he only had enough fuel to get to one planet, and that they were happy, where he was not. It was closely followed by his best memory. Setting down, upon this, a different place, a different planet, a different solar system! The soil was good. He had seeds. He could still be a farmer.

    His early years upon a the first planet he landed upon were tainted by him seeing a sentient being die before him. The Florans of this planet, which, to him, had seemed rather friendly attacked a crashed Avian ship, while Linus stood by, trying to help the survivors. He saw them stab, stab and stab, over and over, even after the bodies were certainly dead, but the feasting. That was the bit that scarred him the most, their blood-lined mouths, red upon green in a garish display of their carnivorous origins. Blood was something he had never seen before, and why should he? He did not bleed, but blood was most certainly a bad thing.

    He left that planet, far behind, to find one with less... harrowing and vicious inhabitants. He had left quickly, and his ship didn't have enough fuel to return to... well anywhere. This voyage was one way and he ended up where he is now.​
     
  6. Phoboss

    Phoboss Subatomic Cosmonaut

    [​IMG] Character race:Hylotl
    name: Zurtai Marashi
    Gender: Male
    Character general info: A peaceful and focused man who avoids combat until others lifes are at stake
    age:32
    Description: A black skin with pink belly large fins also pink
    Character Bio: Born on the aquatic world Uyshikaino Zurtai was of course a very adept swimmer, and yet hates getting wet unless fullt submerged. This caused a problem because this planet rained.....ALOT. Eventually his home was attacked by the florans and he being a pacifist wouldn't act until they killed his father(Because he tried to fight) and were threatening to seed the world (plant an ever-growing seed that sucks up the water) he then took action he grabbed his late fathers katana and rushed out of the door. He then proceeded to try to take as may prisoners as he could and out of 3,000 there was only 436 fatalities. What he wanted most was to find purpose and this he found in the O'Ruposa sentinels a group of peaceful warriors (kind of like jedi) That he swore eternal loyalty to leading him on many missions including; Stopping the group of terrorists "Penguino" (HEHE) and taking down infamous glitch Shade Lord Karkorus.

    Karkorus eventually escaped and this is how the final showdown went.......K=Karkorus Z=Zurtai K"so you found me....HA smarter than I thought Hylotl!" Z"Only out of Serenity Karkorus" K"Ha serenity my Processor!" K strikes Z Z " Divines! I call your power!" Z Is shrouded in a Blue-ish mist now K "You think that can help you? NEVER!" K strikes Z who dodges and slashes a hole across K's chest and K looks at his chest K" a little hole hmmm.....I DONT CARE!" stabs Zurtai in the chest with his lance who falls into the lake below to sleep for 14 years........ He wakes up (On the server he is picked up by Schmoop) and looks through the galaxy for Karkorus and the O'Ruposa...........................

    "I am here father....I made it"
     
    Last edited: Dec 14, 2013
  7. Mr. Wolf

    Mr. Wolf Space Hobo

    Character Name: Wolf

    Character Race: Human

    Character General Info: Male in late 20s. Wolf (last name unknown) spent most of his life forgetting who he was. He has a twisted mind overflowing with dark thoughts. Most of the time he is in control of his actions and he won't terrorize others, but when he is insulted he isn't far from bursting into a madman. He is ethically somewhere in between ''Good'' and ''Evil''. Wolf hates the fact that he's still breathing after all this time so he is quite suicidal and can be very brutal in fights. He can fly starships as well as his father, the former commander of an old forgotten fleet, who died long ago trying to protect his homeland and family. Wolf decided that he won't stop his quest until he finds the answers to one question - Why did they do it?

    But after the question has been answered Wolf didn't know what to do next. As he was walking through the woods he suddenly stopped and looked at the waterfall... he said, ''It's... magnificent...'' Sad but at the same time happy he decided that he wanted to change. He wanted to see the beauty of the universe and explore the secrets that it holds. He wanted a redemption for the things he had done. Wolf is willful to become a better person and to connect with people, he will try to keep his dark side away from the others but he will forever stay damaged inside.

    Character Description: Height 6'8'', Wolf is slightly above average build, has a very strong right arm due to constant sword battles, his body is full of cuts and wounds, he has longish brown hair, brown and cold eyes. He mostly wears black clothes so that he can be almost invisible at night, but he likes blue pants too.

    Character Biography: At this point Wolf has lived longer damaged then normal. Wolf always kept his family name to himself. Nobody, he has ever encountered, knows his last name. He lived in a wealthy family with his mother Ellie, his father and also commander Rayner, baby sister Juno and his older brother Riley.

    Early life - PROLOGUE
    At the age of 3 Wolfs father Rayner was promoted to commander of a fleet of starships, making Rayner the youngest commander at the age of 33. Commander received a royal mansion from the Council and immediately moved his family to their new home. Unfortunately Wolf couldn't talk in English as he was never bilingual. This made him a target later in his childhood.

    At the age of 5 other kids started making fun of him for not knowing how to speak English perfectly, which made him feel really miserable. He thought that doesn't fit into the world. Whenever he was hurt he wanted to escape from reality and he would if it wasn't for his only friend, his older brother. They used to go into the wilderness and play around the waterfalls and lakes, climb on tall trees and just have a time of their life together.

    At the age of 7-9 Wolf had already mastered his English. He was a good student in school and he wasn't mocked anymore. He loved reading Space Adventure comics, they made him want to become an adventurer and seek the lost worlds or uncharted galaxies. But things weren't all perfect at that time. The Council has separated into 2 forces. One couldn't agree with the other, soon it became really serious and both forces were ready to go to war to protect their interests. In no longer then 2 years the forces started hating each other and a month before Wolfs 10th birthday an unnamed war has begun.

    At the age of 10 - THE FALL
    Rayner was on his starship SS72-Defender. He ran to communication Center and sent a message to his family:

    Dear Ellie,

    ...Tell my kids that I've always loved them and that I'm
    sorry for not always spending time with them...there is no time...
    ...quickly give Riley the coordinates, they'll lead you to safety...
    ...local Avians offer to help us... 39.624281,-80.873345


    I love you!
    Wolfs homeland was attacked 3 months ago. While his father was defending their home his 18 year old brother Riley was leading his family to the arranged escort location at the border where they should have been saved by local Avians. Instead of being rescued, extraction turned out to be a set up by Avian bandits. The family and the other citizens tried to defend themselves but the Avians were well armed and they were easily mowing down civilians. In that assault Ellie carrying Juno was shoot no less then a dozen times. She died in a puddle and Juno drowned. Wolf fainted but Riley was able to get him out of there. Later that day Wolf and Riley watched Rayners starship crumble from the sky in fire. This changed Wolf forever.

    At the age of 12 - NOT AFRAID
    After the escape, Wolf and Riley joined a group of other people, survivors. They all lived in a camp on a field for almost 2 years now. There wasn't any trouble in the camp. They couldn't move back to their home city because it was overflowing with very toxic poison from all that bombing. One day a group of bandits finally decided to raid their camp after weeks of scouting. The raid happened at night and it was a huge bloodbath. Riley was searching for Wolf and as he was running a bandit tackled him. Riley was resisting so the bandit on top of him pulled out a knife and desperately tried to stab him. Wolf was running around looking for Riley too. He saw his brother struggle in the fight so he took the gun from the dead body next to him. He aimed properly as his father taught him before the war and pulled the trigger. Wolf dropped on his knees with tears in his eyes. His brother came to him slowly and took his gun. He said, ''Don't blame yourself, He deserved it.'' Wolf looked at the body for a second ''I...I feel... sick.'' he said. ''We have to go!'' said Riley while shooting, ''You're going to feel better later.'' Wolf remained still, ''I can't, why did d...'' Riley interrupts, ''Don't give up now... I need you to trust me, please come with me!'' Riley runs out of bullets, ''Thank y...'' Wolf interrupts, ''Let's go!'' And so brothers ran to the nearest forest, they were safe.

    At the age of 13-17 - THANK ME NOW
    Months after the raid brothers have settled in an abandoned shopping center. They formed a series of warning signs and deadly traps for trespassers. As months passed the center was a perfect place to spend their time when they were bored. When Wolf became 15 Riley started training him. Wolf first learned how to rely on the guns, then bow and arrow and a year later heavy weaponry.

    Around the age of 16 Wolf started his hand to hand combat training with Riley. ''Very powerful strikes little brother!'' Said Riley. Wolf responds, ''Oh...I learned from the best, soon I'll be beating your ass'' Riley said while avoiding hits, ''You wish, ya weak ass maggot'' Wolf after one quick unexpected KO punch, ''Ha-ha...you're getting old.'' Riley smiles after a long stare, ''You can thank me later.''

    By 17 Riley taught Wolf how to handle a blade, he said to Wolf, ''Blade knows its enemy, use it only on them!'' Before 18 Wolf mastered his sword skill. Every time they went out for supplies they were risking their lives because after the war ended the whole continent was in panic. Survivors, clans, kingdoms and bandits were born.

    At the age of 18 - RUNAWAY
    Sometime around summer two brothers felt that they were being watched anytime they go out for supplies or just guard watch at night. But one night something wasn't alright. After the brothers got back from their ''adventure'' they noticed some of the traps in front of the Centre were slightly moved. They ran inside only to walk in a trap. Wolf counted 23 bandits, Riley said, ''They're Avians'' Wolf replied, ''THE AVIANS, like 8 years ago?!'' Riley looking for the leader, ''I don't know.''

    Bandit Leader speaks, ''Very nice place you got here... boys.'' Wolf said, ''Thanks we took good care of it.'' Riley to bandit, ''Who are you?!'' Bandit stops for a second, ''I... I'm Laius the king of bandits.'' Riley out of breath says, ''8 year ago, was it... well you... who mowed down all the people at the old border?!'' Laius responded, ''...A lot of things happen in that time... I don't know, It maybe was or maybe wasn't me.'' Wolf to Laius, ''You son o...'' Riley interrupts him, ''Don't do something you're going to regret later.'' Wolf had an idea, they had a trap that can make the 2nd level collapse but the switch was 10 meters away. He gave Riley smoke bombs and whispered, ''We'll collapse the whole Center, throw the bombs in 10 seconds and run outside.'' Then 10 seconds later bombs went off and Riley ran, Laius started chasing him and Wolf pulled the switch. The whole Center started to collapse an it was gone in less then 40 second, enough time for Wolf to get out alive. Outside the brothers had a last stand against the remaining bandits while Laius escaped with his ship. Brothers finished off 5 remaining bandits and after a long night they decided to hunt down the leader.

    At the age of 19 - GOODBYE DAYS
    Just recently Wolf and Riley found some information from an local camp on Avian bandits that wronged them. Its been half a year since the attack and now that they have located them they can have their revenge. Late at night they snuck into their camp looking for the leader, but unfortunately a drunk activated alarm and soon they were in the middle of the action. Brothers ran like hell. Thinking that they've escaped, they stopped to rest by the waterfall. ''Goddamn it, we were so close!'' Said Riley and continued, ''What do we do now?!'' In couple minutes the bandit ship located them. Laius aimed precisely with his sniper rifle and shoot Riley in the neck but Wolf reacted fast and killed the pilot. Then he took Riley and they both jumped in the cold river. That night his brother died in his hands. ''Wolf promise me something...'' Said his brother before he died. ''What my brother?'' said Wolf, ''You have to...'' says his brother and dies. Furious, Wolf promised that he will get his revenge and find the Avian who killed his family.

    At the age of 20-25 - FORGIVE AND FORGET
    Wolf was mainly focused on finding Laius. He spent 3 year tracking him down. Anybody in his way was his enemy. Between the period of 20-23 Wolf had killed a couple dozen people without a remorse. After torturing a member of the bandits he found out that Laius has retired after fighting with other bandits for the king title. Laius lost and he was forced to leave the group. Now he lives in a wooden cabin deep into the woods by a lake.

    At the age of 25 he found the wooden cabin. He entered but nobody was inside, he was shaking and wasn't ready for encounter. And so outside, near the cabin by a lake Laius was admiring the view. He recognized Wolf and said, ''What a beautiful view, never in all my life I had thought that I'll finally find peace, but now its too late...'' Wolf looked at him with his cold eyes. He couldn't stand how the men who killed so many people was happy. He asked him, ''Why did you do it?!'' Laius turned and said, ''For money at first, but later... just for thrill, I felt alive!'' Laius continues, ''Its not late for you to change, you ca...'' Before Laius could finish the sentence Wolf already pulled a gun out and shot him in the head.

    But after the question has been answered Wolf didn't know what to do next. As he was walking through the woods he suddenly stopped and looked at the waterfall... he said, ''It's... magnificent...'' Sad but at the same time happy he decided that he wanted to change. He wanted to see the beauty of the universe and explore the secrets that it holds. He wanted a redemption for the things he had done. Wolf is willful to become a better person and to connect with people, he will try to keep his dark side away from the others but he will forever stay damaged inside.
    Wolfs story continues years later...
     
    Last edited: Dec 14, 2013
  8. dclzexon

    dclzexon Intergalactic Tourist

    Character bio redone with more detail

    Character Name: Silver Sinnard.
    Character Race: Floran
    Character General Info: Age 19, Male, is a rather serious and aloof character, interacting with few and choosing his words wisely every time
    Character Description: 5' 0 has white silver flowery hair, and much to his dismay, is a rather girlish looking character, even for floran standards.
    Character Biography: Silver through out his early youth shared the same love for stabbing as his floran kin, except he loved to do so from the back. Trained since youth to be a accomplish warrior to be unmatched on the fields, his father expected him to be a unstopable fighter with no equal, just like he was in his glory days. How ever, as the years went by and silver grew, it became more and more apparent that Silver lacked the talent, drive, and most importantly, the body for such a thing. Silver was often shunned and looked down apon by his community, and because of this he had to lie, diplomacy, and steal his way to everything hes ever wanted since a young age.

    Silver first gained his love of thievery and deception at the age of 14, where his father had grown tired of his expectations being failed, and put him in what he had thought to be a abandoned temple. His father, disgusted with his son, told him not to come back, until he could survive a fully year in the temple and around its wilderness by his own power. Abandoned and alone, young Silver explored the temple, till he crossed paths with a score of raiders. Lead by Krineck Listovian, a Floran from a planet afar, the band of interstellar thieves where known as the Black Orchid, one of the best and most effective of lifter of valuables that the stars had ever seen.

    Krineck had listened and sympathized with Silvers story, and saw a chance to turn a bitter child to a savy thief. together, Krineck trained the child for 3 years, after seeing acceptation aptitude and drive of will to succeed in the lessons that Krineck taught Silver. with pure obsession, and never ending days and nights of training and practice, Silver had become the best silver tongued, pocket raiding, thief, who was more than accomplished, in acrobatics and resourceful exploration.

    on his 4th year, Silver had returned home, only to lift every pixel and bit from his fathers position, to fund his adventures with the Black Orchids. and after 2 years of serves too them, Silver decided to split him self off to make a name for him self alone or with a new crew, and further hone his skills. saying his long goodbyes to the crew that had become his family, Silver had gained a ship as a reward for 2 good years of work from Krineck, and now explores the stars as a upstart rookie through the open space

    Silver makes up for his lack of floran savagery with a silver tongue, cunning guile and trickery, and his adeptness at skulduggery, hes a haphazard sort how ever, loving adventure and raiding ruins despite not having the natural combat ability to fight them off as effectively as he would wish. He despises his short comings, and tries constantly to improve past them, while still polishing his talents, this often has mixed results.

    Silver has had few friends, but knows of the warmth and kindness that they can bring, getting past his cold shell, or his lying face, will often lead to a good and reliable friend, who is willing to do unspeakable horrors in the name of himself and those he cares about.

    TL:DR
    rather than face to face. Cultivating a love for exploration, infiltration, guile, and thievery, Silver Sinnard all but abandons his home planet to explore the stars for adventure and opportunity, despite his young and inexperienced age. While a rather amoral, he values the few friends and comrades he makes, and is willing to fight and die for them without question, but he sees all those who are not his allies as outsiders, and would have no qualms about putting them to the knife, provided he had a good angle behind them to slit their throats.
    he is a "rational floran" in his own words, preferring to live another day than die in a glorious fight, making him a weaker fighter than most in his race.
     
  9. Phoboss

    Phoboss Subatomic Cosmonaut

    HEY ITS A BOOK!
     
  10. Filunya

    Filunya Void-Bound Voyager

    Character Name:

    Filu also known as Broccoli

    Character Race:

    Floran

    Character General Info:

    • This small Floran is 22 human years old.
    • Very adaptable person, but also quite bubbly and a lot curious.
    • A non educated savage who has never been to other planets.
    • Filu prefers fabric clothes to be more flexible and refuses heavy armor.
    • Her fighting style is more acrobatic and fast with short swords or daggers.
    • In her free time she enjoyes playing instruments like the Floran bone xylophone.
    • Loves Boneboos badly.



    Character Description:

    Is about 5'0" (1,55m) tall, has pitch-black, almost creepy eyes and a descent sweet smell of fresh fern surrounds her. The skin is pale green as her fern-like hair which sometimes disperses a golden pollen when shaking her head.

    Character Biography:

    Before the Avian pirates attacked, Filu lived in a small, primitive and casual Floran tribe which was founded on a small green planet in the alpha sector, covered with nothing but wide green lawns, emblazoned with red and blue tulips as far as the eyes could see.
    The small Floran used to play the bone xylophone although she was really bad in it. One day, after practicing with patience, she was chosen to start the big hunting-event with her music – an honorable day for her.
    Chasing animals was her favorite activity since she liked to get different furs for decorating her straw-hut as a trophy.
    “Flesh”, that's what her tribe used to call non-plant creatures.
    As a Floran it was a normal behavior to take a walk, killing and stabbing flesh which crossed their way. So did Filu with her two one-handed swords, made of steel and plants. There was nothing like a guilty conscience but fun.

    Defending their homeland with the Floran's inborn blindness and aggressive nature will be the tribes undoing this time.
    The thievish birds were wiping out the small population in a dramatic war which lasted about half a year.
    "They had crazy fire weaponssss making Florans unknown woundss."
    Only Filu survived, hiding in the underground. For years, she nourished on fallen Florans, visiting the surface time to time to stock up on some sunshine for a few minutes.

    Filu has always been suspicious about foreign persons, especially if they were made of flesh: something she always detested - even as food.
    "Why should Floran eat ssssomething that is hated?", Filu keeps saying. In her opinion, meat tastes disgusting. This is the reason why the little Floran prefers different kinds of fruits, especially Boneboos.

    Another year passed, until a scout ship landed on this planet.
    The Apex Erwin Freiburg and his men were exploring the green landscape, accidentally finding the little Floran's hideout. The scared plant was overtaken by these foreign, fleshy people and started attacking. Her advantage for being a fast fighter allows her to put his whole crew to death but not without being shot several times. Filu collapsed and found herself in a cold and dark prison cell in his scout ship. Full of anger she screamed and hit the cage with might and main but was too weak to escape. He treated her wounds when she was comatose: bandages covered her green body.
    While the Apex thought about how to handle the situation, the astonished Floran admired the technology she had never seen before. “Broccoli”, the Apex used to call her: a racism term for Florans invented by his crew.
    Erwin wasn't able to control the ship by himself, so he made a decision. At first the Apex treated her like a wild animal, then as a savage. For months he tried to tame her with little success. Years went by until it was possible to let her out of the cage without being attacked. His technology was too impressive and a Floran without any weapons is too weak. She had no choice but following his instructions – Filu was still captured.
    He started teaching her social behavior, tried to rip out the savage in her to transform the plant into an acceptable soldier. Glad his patience was strong enough for enduring this heavy piece of work.
    Ever since Filu became a curious and squirrelly person who enjoys discovering new things.

    [​IMG]
     
  11. Mr. Wolf

    Mr. Wolf Space Hobo

    Do you like it?
    lol
     
  12. Phoboss

    Phoboss Subatomic Cosmonaut

    yes
     
  13. Mr. Wolf

    Mr. Wolf Space Hobo

    thank you
     
  14. bswaldmann

    bswaldmann Tentacle Wrangler

    (( Resubmitting with enhanced backstory DLC, typically only available to those who pre-order Okousan from Spacestop ))

    Character Name: Okousan the Heartful
    Character Race: Avian
    Character General Info: Age 26, Male, Formerly a priest of Kluex at a religious colony he was sent off to form his own religious colony all by himself... is what he was told by the other priests that have just had enough of him.
    Character Description: Around 5' 6", not the tallest person, white feathers kept constantly smoothed down lending to an unassuming appearance. In stark contrast to this he tends to wear whatever is most comfortable in whatever environment he is in, and then tops it off with a traditional Avian headdress.
    Character Biography:Born into an Avian mission, Okousan was a quiet boy lived a fairly typical religious life. One fall evening, shortly after he turned 16 some friends of his invited on a camping trip, and he gladly joined them. They were gone for one month. Okousan eventually found his way back to the mission, while out they were attacked by a great beast and forced deeper into a forest for safety. They eventually lost the monster, but ran into him again and again as their trip home went on. Eventually it was just Okousan left, and he was left alone, face to face with the beast. When all hope seemed lost the beast lunged at Okousan, only to land on extremely unstable ground that gave way and consumed the creature, leaving Okousan standing alone. Believing this to be a miracle, he eventually found his way back home, his heart now full of resolve and faith, despite the terrible things he had witnessed.

    Upon returning, he told his story, knowing how close he was to his friends nobody had any reason to doubt it, and soon took him in for much more intensive religious study, leading him to eventually become known as Okousan the Heartful.

    After several years he eventually was assigned a mission of his own, so he left with around 200 other Avians to form a religious colony on some random planet, to spread the word of Kluex and his great deeds to it's natives. However he was noted for being perhaps too passionate in his method of spreading the belief, and developed a reputation for assaulting other Avians both below and above him in standing due to them (in his opinion) not having enough faith in Kluex and disrespecting him by asking Okousan to calm down every once in a while. After having enough of his nonsense they convinced him to start his own colony on some faraway planet they'd hopefully never ever see.

    He now wanders the stars hoping to build an incredible temple to Kluex... and perhaps maybe taking on some followers who are as dedicated as he is to his cause.
     
  15. R2Randy2

    R2Randy2 Big Damn Hero

    (Thanks for the feedback, i tried to be a bit more descriptive on the bio.)
    Character Name: Randeii Kight
    Character Race: Glitch
    Character General Info: Unlike most of the Glitch at his small Village, Randeii, a former guard, is more interested in the past of the Glitch. His dream is to uncover the roots of the glitch's past. He is some-what brave for the most part, but is at times a coward. One of his biggest fears are tribal Floran.
    Character Description: 26 years old, 6'3 feet tall, he wears his old Blue peasant clothing and has menacing, but also friendly eyes. He often stutters and has his eyes flicker when processing large and confusing amounts of data. He often attemps to sound "human".
    Character Biography: Randeii was born and raised in Veldin Town on a forest planet. When Randeii was young, He wanted to outgrow the medieval lifestyle of the village, eventually being claimed as "insane", But rather than being executed, he was forced to live the lifestyle anyways, as demanded by the town's King, Veld. At age 14, Randeii's original Head modification was removed and was replaced by a Durable and knightly helmet, and was trained as a guard for the village by the chief guard. He was beaten, Shot with an arrow, hit by a sword, and nearly killed. He was forced to guard up until the village was raided by a nearby Floran settlement (Which started his fear), and nearly destroying the village, but succeeded in killing Veld, the Chief guard, and two of his companions. For the next couple of years, the town was in anarchy and it was every man for him self; During this period of time, he learned many survival skills. When he was 19, he ran away and stole one of the guard's ships, and has been persuiting his dream of uncovering the mystery of his people's past. Now age 26, he has yet to find any evidence of who created the Glitch and why. At this point, his village has been destroyed by the floran encampment and he refuses to return to his home planet, or even the same system.
     
  16. Phoboss

    Phoboss Subatomic Cosmonaut

    Mine is terrible..................
     
  17. yoyohaloreach

    yoyohaloreach Big Damn Hero

    Character Name: Jared McBright
    Character Race: Human
    Character General Info: He's like your regular soldier or at least was he's one of those that never judges from one's appearance or species he is a kind and sweet as some have said but he does have a bit of an anger issues you piss him of he'll go off like a rocket either referring to word or force to take his anger out but he usually tries to keep the wraps on the anger he prefers using a gun but does use a sword when it is needed he also loves heavy metal and rap... weird
    Character Description: A Gi Joe looking fella having mini mohawk pretty dark brown hair and a bit of facial too. He usually wears a leather jacket, a white/grey-ish T-shirt, and jeans. He does look up to his marine stature having a muscular body but not too buff but not too skinny but right in the middle.
    Character Biography: Before earth went to shit he was a Marine always doing what his superiors asked of him as long as it didn't go against his morals but he was kicked out for assaulting his commanding officer for ordering him to shoot apon civilians. After the he was kicked out hearing that earth was dying he used his saved up funds to purchases a scavenger ship and get the hell out, moving around from planet to planet and usually scavenging what supplies he can find on wild planets and such. He is still wandering seeing if there is any cause he can determine himself to, since is the destiny of all soldier who's lives are destined to be on the battle field such as his... hopefully.
     
    Last edited: Dec 14, 2013
  18. Phoboss

    Phoboss Subatomic Cosmonaut

    I woul add periods if I were you.......
     
  19. Wazumba

    Wazumba Aquatic Astronaut

    Character Name:
    Blue

    Character Race:
    Avian

    Character General Info:
    Blue is about 25 years old, she is not sure however, age is not something that she tends to bother herself with. While she lacks any form of leadership skills and usually stays quiet unless spoken to, she is loyal to her friends and is very passionate about the things that matters to her. For example, decorating her nest, playing music, drawing and running across fields of green.
    To sum her personality up in a sentence: She loves having company of a dear friend, but only if he or she knows to be quiet from time to time.
    Blue has scars on her body as a reminder of the harsh life she has lived but that doesn't stop her always looking beautiful.
    As you might imagine from reading the biography, she does not ever speak her last name.

    Character Description:
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    Sweet and shylooking. Black, wide eyes with a soft but piercing gaze.
    An attractive you female who seldom smiles.

    Character Biography:
    Blue is a female avian who grew up in the wilds. She was an unusually small hatchling, compared to her brothers and sister.
    Her parents were were very well respected amongst the rest of the village and there was always a lot of pressure on the heirs of the bloodline.
    Blue however was not interested in her parents plans for her and did never quite feel like a part of the family.
    Her parents wanted her to be a diplomat and stay at home, studying. Blue however, loved adventures and more often than not, sneak out whilst unattended so that she could listen to the tales of wanderers or climb another tree.
    One morning, Blue woke up from a guard grabbing her from her bed and before she knew it, she was being transported of the only planet she had ever known and
    was exiled without any of her siblings ever knowing what happened to her.

    Presumed dead, blue managed to survive for almost ten years on the monster-infested planet she had been left on by her parents guards, untill one day when the priesthood stumbled upon her camp.
    Luckily, Blue had been out hunting at the time, but when she got back, her home was destroyed and a note had been placed on one of the piles of rubble.
    It had only contained one word, five letters, but it had been enough; "Leave".
    Filled with rage for loosing her home for the second time, Blue had nothing left to loose.
    She snuck through one of the priesthoods camp and managed to steal a ship.

    Blue is now left with no where to go, no one to search for and no possesions
    with the exception of what she might find the newly acquired ship.

    She is Starbound.
     
    Last edited: Dec 14, 2013
  20. yoyohaloreach

    yoyohaloreach Big Damn Hero

    okay I edited the thing sorry for no punctuation..
     
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