Unbound Travels - Starbound Private RP

Hahhah, denied.. I guess I'll edit those minor things. Should I use the same format too, take out the centering and bold in text?

 

Character Name: Lucian Kai
Character Race: Avian
Character General Info: 45 Year old Avian Male. With a life of living with religious freaks most of his life and being outcasted by society he turned to the stars as a means to escape he set his sights on planet cracking.
Character Description: Orange feathers.His beak is scratched up a missing left eye he had it replaced with one he found in an apex lab while exploring a lab a auto doc patched him up and he has both his eyes. He wears a a black commnoner shirt and worker skirt he stands a 5'11" and has an aged and jaded look to him.
Character Biography: He grew up without a home he was an orphan as he grew up he was adopted by a very strong kluex worshipping family the mother and father were not the greatest parents seeing as they thought sacrifice might bring them fame and fortune with the god, but as it stood the young lucian was unaware of the situation and when his sacrifial day came. He was taken from his bed and place on an alter. How he escaped is a different story. Some say kluex saved him as he was an avian that wasn't a grounded. Others saay the father killed the mother and wanted to sacrifice Lucian himself. Its also been heard the other way. When he was released and outside his cottage it was on fire his family roasted alive. He got up and walked off into the night and left his little town.When Lucian was 10 he was recruited by avian bandits and as time rolled on his 18th birthday he learned he wasn't grounded and tried for a job as a courier they gave it to him but after he deliverd a bomb by accident they fired him when he was 27. He was an avian pirate and for 10 years his fortune was great but he gave it all up after the ship went down from another pirate ship .He and a few others survied. This now brings us to the present he is currently in space orbiting a planet he has knowledge of but he is happy to be gone from all the other worshippers.

 

So, Umm... how long does one have to wait? does no answer mean mean denied? Sorry if this a stupid question...

 

We'll always respond to an app (Assuming we don't miss it on accident, in which case just complain to us). It could take a varying time of 10 minutes to 3 days. We promise to get back to you as soon as we possibly can but we are only human! Have some patience for now and you'll be looked over in the next batch of apps.

 

Okay, And thanks!

 

Character Name: Urist
Character Race: Apex
Character General Info: 60 years old, very serious and intelligent, as a result he's not very charismatic
Character Description: Dark gray skin, white hair
Character Biography: He lived his entire life in an underground resistance base. During a routine raid on Miniknog, he hijacked a Miniknog ship and began his journey to the stars.

 

Yess soon the name "Coggins" will be yelled loudly over the airway... for .. probably an unrelated reason

 

Character Name: Deathkiller
Character Race: Avian
Character General Info: age - 21, personality - i do not fear death. i am constantly soaring.
Character Description: a black bird with white tuft
Character Biography: i gestated in an egg then was hatched. i learned to fly and have not stopped, into space and beyond. i seek adventure and do not fear death. i will defy death forever as planetary flight flights gravity.

 

Character Name: Thrain Lor
Character Race: Apex

Character General Info: 28 Years old. With a very eccentric nature Thrain tends to be solitary and focused on the "Now" of his often changing environment; though doesn't mind the company of other explorers as long as its likely he will have the opportunity to discover and study strange creatures and ecosystems. He pays little mind to the politics and quarrels between other, so called, "intelligent" species.

Character Description: 5'5", Thrain is more slender than the average Apex. Fortunately, his more slim, less muscular body doesn't leave him wanting for strength. As a proud Apex his race is naturally absurdly strong. His healthy light skin colour and stunning dark brown fur makes him a fairly desirable mate for Apex females. Prefers to dress in thin layers when in average to chilly climates thanks to the heat provided from his fur. Wears a very kindly look on his face, always cautious not to cause insult with body language.

Character Biography: When Thrain was young he was always fascinated with the wildlife of his home planet. The countless similarities and differences between even just two different species would have him pondering for hours on end about how evolution could have possibly lead to so many different outcomes. He was lucky enough to have been born on a planet where many human adventurers would frequently stop and trade. So Thrain often waited around at the nearest market just hoping to see an adventurer he could bombard with questions about the creatures they might have seen in their travels, and offer any valuables he might find on his own planet as trade for scientific books the adventures might have in their ships. as he grew older he would even sometimes accompany scout ships on short missions to unexplored planets, where he would prove himself to be a very valuable asset by discovering and documenting a great deal of the wildlife and the environments of the planet. Now as an adult, he's been given an unbelievable opportunity, or more of a command, by the Minikong. He's been ordered to set out on a long term mission to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and new civilizations, to boldly go where no monkey has gone before. His main objective is to find and study a specific intelligent race there has been rumors of. Rumored race has only been reported in occasional sightings and is being called the Novakid.

(There's a Star Trek reference in there... cause I'm a geek)

 

I've made it standard, was there any other reason It got denied?

 

Character Name: Lopez

Character Race: Floran

Character General Info: Male,23, Friendly, kind and funny, likes irony and sarcasm stuff.

Character Description: Most likely any other Floran, except he has one finger missing in right hand, and a scar in the face. (I'll try to draw a bit and if its not bad as hell I'll post it.)

Character Biography: Born as Peaceful Muncher, he was raised with discipline, taught that putting every floran village together could help getting Floran civilization to a new era where they might take an important spot on the universe. After reaching adult phase he became an important diplomat which helped building a neutral zone village.
Some years later that vilage was raided by apex scum and he was inprisioned, after months of planning he managed to get out of their thought assigment center killing every apex he could. He took one of their spaceship and travelled far into the universe.
After that incident he decided to change his name what Apex were planning and take revenge, what leads him to have crazy adventures and be near death many times.

Sorry for mistakes and gramamr stuff, english is not my native language

 

did you checked this one?

 

Character Name:
Dennan Tynt

Character Race:
Human

Characer General Info:
Age - 25, Soldier for the USCM, he was one of the best soldiers in the company, with a very bright future.

Character description:
He's pretty tall, about 1.95m (6.4 feet), most of the time he wears a black jacket and jeans, if he doenst wear the USCM uniform. He has blond hair and green eyes.

Character Biography:
Dennan Tynt was a soldier for the USCM, he fought in many battles, to protect his family and all the people who believed in him. But the mission at "Gamma Alteron X IV" changed everything Dennan ever believed in. He always fought against the evil, the danger at least what he thought what is the danger.
At the 10th day after the invasion, they came to a small Avian village. The Mission was to find every hint of smugglers and illegal gun sale. Officer Prid was the leading force at this mission, he always was a hot-headed and fast irritable person. After 10 days without any hint for illegal activities, Officer Prid became a little angry. He thought he couldn't come back without any usable hints, because he was the one who wanted to come to that planet.
As the army went through the city, they came to the INN, inside, the army saw a group of Avian Pirates. They were not threatening anybody but the officer needed something he could bring back to the general. He wanted to arrest the Pirates for no reason, of course they complained and don't want to go with us. The Officer didn't even had any proofs for their guilty. Suddenly the Officer started to shoot at them and almost the whole army joined him, almost everyone but not Dennan Tynt. He always believed in the right things, he wanted to fight the evil, but who is the evil now-- no question -> the Officer. Dennan Tynt went back to the spaceship and went to bed. He wouldn't speak to anyone on the flight back. As they arrived Officer Prid came to him and told him, not to say anything to anybody. Dennan of course denied that. Officer Prid got angry and told him he would take care of his family if anything would "happen" to him.
Dennan knew what Prid talks about and what it means, but he wasn't very cowed. Dennan was about to forget the whole thing, at least the tried. On the 23. April, he woke up, everything was normal, only one thing was missing, his wife. He found a letter on the other side of the bed, singed by some one who called home self dirP, of course Dennan knew who this was, he was shocked he wouldn't even think Prid would be able to do things like that. Dennan went to the army base and asked where Prid is. They told him he was transferred to an USCM Prison, to take care of it and lead it. They told him the coordinates and Dennan instantly flew to it. But at the given coordinates was no prison. At this moment he got a text message to his ship, that told him that he now is one of the most wanted criminals for the USCM. They accuse him, killing of over 100 Avians civilians and treason. Dennan now knows that he can't go back to his old home, he can't go back to see his friends and he can't see his wife again, everything because of one person OFFICER PRID. But not only him the whole USCM will taste his revenge. Dennan will find his wife and gets his revenge at any cost.



//My best for you "Unbound Travels" Team//

 

Character Name: Okousan the Heartful
Character Race: Avian
Character General Info: Age 26, Male, Formerly a priest of Kluex at a religious colony he was sent off to form his own religious colony all by himself... is what he was told by the other priests that have just had enough of him.
Character Description: Around 5' 6", not the tallest person, white feathers kept constantly smoothed down lending to an unassuming appearance. In stark contrast to this he tends to wear whatever is most comfortable in whatever environment he is in, and then tops it off with a traditional Avian headdress.
Character Biography: Okousan was a man of passion, he left with around 200 other Avians to form a religious colony on some random planet, to spread the word of Kluex and his great deeds to it's natives. However he was noted for being perhaps too passionate in his method of spreading the belief, and developed a reputation for assaulting other Avians both below and above him in standing due to them (in his opinion) not having enough faith in Kluex and disrespecting him by asking Okousan to calm down every once in a while. After having enough of his nonsense they convinced him to start his own colony on some faraway planet they'd hopefully never ever see.

 

Character Name: Lassscivar (Just kidding, it's Lascivar. No last name to provide.)

Character Race: Floran

Character General Info: Lascivar is 37, weighing approximately ~180lbs and standing at 6'1.

Eminently hostile, for lack of a better description. Lacking any capacity for sarcasm or understanding for words beyond their utmost literal sense; due to this he takes most jokes as direct insults if they're badly worded. His grasp of the English dialect is a little cleaner than more "savage" Florans from the tribal villages, but traits such as his ravenous cannibalistic tendencies still linger.

It's quite possible to hold a conversation with Lascivar, although he seems to pay far more attention to the body language of others than the words actually spoken. A pleasant word uttered from someone with a dagger held is still one that will keep him on edge.

He will quite happily put aside his disdain for others if there is something of distinct value for him to gain from it, seeming exceedingly curious about the newer technologies that are still undiscovered to his race, though he has a habit of breaking most tools that he finds to find out how they were put together in the first place and make them more suited for himself if he's capable.

Character Description: Fiery orange sprouts protrude from this Floran's head in the distinct pattern of a mohawk, with the rest of his scalp being scarred with burns albeit in a considerably concise pattern to make sure that his "hair" grows precisely in the way he wants it.

Almost every inch of this being's body is marred with a horrendous artwork of scars and burns, blackened and sooty char marks afflicting his bark-flesh, only being complimented with the occasional slices and prods from blades. His feet seem the most damaged, as if he was forced to stand on embers each and every day; they are literally pitch black with cracks throughout the hardened and calloused flesh where the sap had bled out of him on so many frequent occasions.

The main peculiarity about the damage that this creature has succumb to is that not a single scar nor scratch adorns his face in the slightest, as if he has gone explicitly out of his way to protect his face from harm under any circumstance.

Character Biography: Born into an exceedingly dominant tribe upon his planet, as a sapling he was spoon-fed the cultural ideals that the destruction of the other tribes across the planet was the only way to assure the safety of his own tribe, ingraining a kill or be killed mentality in him and every other being that lived in their village. Where other villages would accept interplanetary traders, his own tribe would watch the ships descending to the planet's surface and swiftly rush to the forests that surrounded the destination of the ships to await the visitors to disembark from the ships, only to brutally ambush them with guerrilla tactics and scavenge everything possible from the ships. This is where Lascivar seemed to shine, not only with the hunt, but with the stolen tech; having an uncanny knack for toying with technology that he had never seen before, recognizing symbols and triggers from previous pieces of stolen equipment and merely putting the pieces together in his head as to how they work.

Years passed along swiftly and as Lascivar approached his 28th year of life, another ambush was about to take place with an Apex ship slowly lowering down through the atmosphere. Having every moment planned out like clockwork, the Apex left their ship as per usual, with the vicious and sadistic ambush ensuing, the Florans lunging out from the bushes and beginning to hack the chimps apart with stolen and scavenged phaseblades, with a few guns being shot from a distance as cover.

This was different, though. Lascivar had lept onto an Apex, latching his jaws into the being's throat and tearing at the furred flesh whilst his dagger plunged into the Ape's body.

A loud, ear-piercing shot went off and slowly everything became numb for him, his ears ringing and blotting out all but a slur of gibberish from the nearby beings, his vision beginning to dull and blacken as he let go of his Apex victim and fell back onto the ground. Looking around, his entire tribe's hunting party was on the ground, either dead or mortally wounded, his last focusing view was of some armed Florans from another village standing over the bodies. It was all a setup, the other villages had plotted against his own and they fell straight for the bait.

Prison... Floran prison in particular, a viciously cruel place to be, the torture devices were limitless and the floors themselves were filled with emberstone, turning your feet to cinders within minutes of standing in one place too long. It was no less torturous than living inches away from an open volcano and having the lava slipping past your feet constantly. The guardsmen from the other villages were no less sadistic, knowing that he and his tribe had slain their loved ones on raids. They would open his cell door on some nights, skewering his body with blades and pressing his body down against the emberstone to inflict the grueling agony of the heat into his body, leaving him just able enough to crawl back to the bed in one living piece. Some nights over the years he was prepared for it, staying awake and hearing the guards enter, lunging at them before they had a chance to harm him and making a swift attempt to escape, though it was always thwarted by the numerous guards that filled the entire prison, making it just a little further towards the surface with each attempt, although accruing more scars to match.

One night in particular though, fortune changed in his favor. As a guard walked past his cell, it appeared empty, the bedding torn up and in disarray with the emberstone in the ground having been cracked open thoroughly, though it was impossible to see if he had tunneled out with the bedding covering most of the ground. The guard swiftly opened up the gate and rushed into the cell to brush aside the bedding, only to have Lascivar lunge down from the dark ceiling atop him, a handful of the emberstone which was brutally scalding his hand was now plunged into the guard's face, pressing it to his mouth to incapacitate the guard and prevent him from screaming out.

All of his previous attempts had garnered his route out of the prison. As he made his way to the surface donning the guard's armor and weapon, he walked right past the final guards without contention, they didn't recognize him as anything but one of their own.

As luck would have it, the Apex ship was still docked after all these years, with their ambush party having killed most if not all of the crew it would seem. The ship was thoroughly overgrown with vines, but as he entered it and began toying with the command console, he knew it was in working order.

The fuel was immensely low but there was enough scraped together to get to a nearby planet and start anew..

 

Character Name: Silver Sinnard.
Character Race: Floran
Character General Info: Age 19, Male, is a rather serious and aloof character, interacting with few and choosing his words wisely every time
Character Description: 5' 0 has white silver flowery hair, and much to his dismay, is a rather girlish looking character, even for floran standards.
Character Biography: Silver through out his early youth shared the same love for stabbing as his floran kin, except he loved to do so from the back. Trained since youth to be a accomplish warrior to be unmatched on the fields, his father expected him to be a unstopable fighter with no equal, just like he was in his glory days. How ever, as the years went by and silver grew, it became more and more apparent that Silver lacked the talent, drive, and most importantly, the body for such a thing. Silver was often shunned and looked down apon by his community, and because of this he had to lie, diplomacy, and steal his way to everything hes ever wanted since a young age.

Silver makes up for his lack of floran savagery with a silver tongue, cunning guile and trickery, and his adeptness at skulduggery, hes a haphazard sort how ever, loving adventure and raiding ruins despite having the natural combat ability to fight them off as effectively as he would wish. He despises his short comings, and tries constantly to improve past them, while still polishing his talents, this often has mixed results.

Silver has had few friends, but knows of the warmth and kindness that they can bring, getting past his cold shell, or his lying face, will often lead to a good and reliable friend, who is willing to do unspeakable horrors in the name of himself and those he cares about.

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rather than face to face. Cultivating a love for exploration, infiltration, guile, and thievery, Silver Sinnard all but abandons his home planet to explore the stars for adventure and opportunity, despite his young and inexperienced age. While a rather amoral, he values the few friends and comrades he makes, and is willing to fight and die for them without question, but he sees all those who are not his allies as outsiders, and would have no qualms about putting them to the knife, provided he had a good angle behind them to slit their throats.
he is a "rational floran" in his own words, preferring to live another day than die in a glorious fight, making him a weaker fighter than most in his race.

 

I cant help but noticed that my application was neither accepted nor declined, did I perhaps over see something? If my application was not good enough I will redo it if I have to, just asking out of curiosity, cause I have been waiting for days now.

 

DeathKiller rly?
im not admin but.....I like your story not the name.

 

Character Name: Felix Vladik (I changed the name, because Mike Wazowski.. aham..)

Character Race: Apex

Character General Info: 32 years old, Felix is traveling the starts to flee the MiniKnog and to keep doing his beloved experiments. Smart and always looking to advance technologically. He also wants to have his own lab

Character Description:
His behavior is a bit "complicated". He is curious and always likes to experiment something new. He dislikes being restrained by the MiniKnog, but he, like many others, hid his real opinion of the Miniknog until he became a revolutionary

Character Biography:
Born in a small Apex colony. Like many other colonies, it was heavily guarded by cameras and armed MiniKnog security guards. His life was all about being watched.
His most prominent quality was that he was a smart Apex and thanks to that, he managed to become a Miniknog scientist. He spent many nights and days locked in the lab, doing
experiments with not always dead things. He liked that, until, one day he received a message: He was going to be donated to the VEP. That meant no more experiments, and he didn't
like that. He wanted to become free and he spent the next day thinking how to escape.

Suddenly, a MiniKnog ship landed in the colony. Two MiniKnog guards exited the ship and inmediately went to the lab. But, to their surprise, they didn't find the soon-to-be executed scientist
there. Instead of being at the lab, Felix went into hiding before the Miniknog arrived. The guards started to inspect the lab. Our brave Apex scientist quickly sealed the lab doors using a remote controller and
walked to the Miniknog ship, hoping to leave the colony and flee under Miniknog identity. Two minutes later he was already in the ship and after a fierce fight with the pilot, he finally was able to leave the planet and roam free the galaxy

 

Character Name: Matthew Barlow

Character Race: Human

Character General Info: 43 years old, male, lived a life as a lead singer of a rock band before the "Great Mishap" set the world on fire and only left a few survivors on their lonely planet called "Mother Earth", hostile type of human that only groups up with the strongest of his own kind

Character Description: Around 5 feet and 10 inches tall. His red hair always made people call him "Ginger with no soul". He's never been a fan of sports. Nevertheless he is acrobatic enough to jump, walk and climb up walls. Before the "Great Mishap" appeared, he always lived alone. Since then, he rather groups up with other humans to survive.

Character Biography: There was no day that Matthew could call a "lucky day". Especially in his childhood he was bullied by the strongest pupils at school. Under this kind of conditions he learned what life is about and founded a rock band at the age of 16. His complete childhood flew into his songs. The lyrics he wrote were just like his character: Heavy and full of rage. When his band became more popular and finally reached the charts, the "Great Mishap" arrived...Aliens were attacking the home of Matthew, the so-called "Earth". It was a huge flying object that commanded the army of the aliens. After 3 weeks the whole world was set on fire. Nearly all humans were brutally murdered. When Matthew bumped into a group of survivors, he felt happy the first time in his life. The group leader, Micheal, was a scientist once. His plan was to reach Area 51, the place he worked at before everything happened. 2 months have passed away when they finally reached the research laboratory. Micheal decided to tell the group what his plan was: Freeze the whole group in a so-called "Ice Chamber". It was a machine, built to keep humans alive for a long period of time by instantly freezing them. Matthew and Micheal were the only volunteers...
300 years have passed since now. When Matthew awoke from his sleep, he took a look around. Next to him, he could find the Ice Chamber Micheal went in... Sadly he realised that it's cables were manipulated. Everything that was left of Micheal was his skeleton. Outside Area 51 Matthew discovered a huge ship, floating just a few feet above the ground. He climbed up the ladder and without knowing what he did, he pressed every button on the console which seemed like an AI. Just a second later the boat hovered up in the air and flew away with a high amount of speed, Matthew couldn't even imagine.

Since this time, 4 months have passed. Matthew learned a lot of the solar system and the universe by some weird aliens he met, which didn't seem hostile. Finally he met a group of humans which stated, that the human race is still alive. When he joined their group he swore, to leave his past behind and never to tell anyone about it.