Unbound Travels - Starbound Private RP

You rock Schmoop.

 

Thank you for taking such time by yourself to review such a large number of various applications. Please take your time.

 

Schmoop! Thank you!

 

Thanks, Schmoop! Hope to see you all soon!

 

I was too, don't worry.

 

Due to some apps being posted while I was typing I'll add them to the post as well.

NOTE: Any apps posted after this post will NOT be included in the current accept/deny post.

 

What is the unbound travels forums link?
:?

 

Character Name: Richley
Character Race: Avian
Character General Info: He is a peaceful Bird, that is so tired of being alone in this big and empty galaxy. All he does all night long lay and gaze at the stars in hopes of one day meeting more birds like himself. Will it ever happen? Hmmmph...........

 

http://halcyon-network.net/forums/activity.php

 

*building another wall of text while snickering* You may not be dead yet, but oooooh you will be, ehehehheheh... >

 

Well, while I'm here, I may as well before you get your hopes up.

Denied - You not only missed out parts of the pre-set application, your character also lacks any detail.

 

Do you guys ever wonder how a Glitch voice sounds like? Considering they state the tone they are saying the sentence in before actually saying it, they might be like the Elcor from Mass Effect 3. In which they have to state the mood they are speaking in because their voices sound very monotone and bland.

 

idk claptrap?
HAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAH

 

I appreciate you guys were getting impatient but do you mind taking the chit-chat to a conversation/our forums?

We'd like to keep this board for apps only.

 

Sure thing im really sorry.

 

join the thread CHIT-CHAT im Phoboss

 

ALL DONE! I've just gotta compile a list of all the accepted names so I can PM them. The list will be posted here shortly.

 

Many thanks, Schmoop! Hope to see y'all soon if I was accepted.

 

Captain Schmoop here to accept another batch of apps. If your app was denied please don't whine or complain, it'll just make us want to deny you again. You're always free to try again however.

Denied - Your story is bland and is all over the place.

Accepted

Accepted

Accepted

Accepted - It was character's age, btw.

Denied - I understand if English isn't your first language but your spelling is all over the place. Your story is fine however.

Accepted - Your story was generic, but definitely not bland. And that's all we ask for.

Denied - I liked the premise to your story but you've structured it very badly. There's not much to go on here, consider adding some more detail and some better formatting.

Accepted - Be forewarned however, we have very strict rules when it comes to raiding/robbing. If you show signs of not being a good enough roleplayer for the task we will have to ban you or ask you to re-apply.

Denied - Please use the application format provided.

Denied - A for effort.

Accepted - Be forewarned however, we have very strict rules when it comes to raiding/robbing. If you show signs of not being a good enough roleplayer for the task we will have to ban you or ask you to re-apply.

Denied - Your app looks interesting but we'd prefer if you stuck to our pre-set application form.

Accepted

Denied - Your character is a bud. Let it bloom out into a flower. Failing that, give us some form of backstory at least.

Accepted - Must say, you have an interesting character.

Accepted - Just needed that age confirmation.

Denied - This isn't a dating site.

Accepted

Denied - Sorry, we don't accept plagiarised names or characters. Although I do appreciate the laugh.

Denied - Your app was pretty confusing to follow, mind re-writing it with some better formatting?

Denied - I hope you and Randy live a wonderful life together. Thanks for the laugh.

Accepted

Denied - Your story is lacking, a lot.

Denied - Your app doesn't seem to have changed much at all. Please think more about what you want your character to be before re-applying.

Denied - Your app doesn't seem convincing enough to have you running around the server killing people. I'd like to say re-apply as this character but you'd need a really impressive app to do so.

Accepted - Mix, mix, swirl, mix. Welcome to the mechanical arm club by the way, Alice'll be happy to meet you.

Accepted - it's ok, i'm bad at writing as well.

Accepted

Accepted - I'd like to deny you and say I'd like to see more from your app. However, the current info is acceptable.

Accepted - I really liked this, it was very cute and well written.

Accepted

Denied - I'd like to say accepted, but your story seems it wasn't wrote with any IC in mind at all.

Accepted - You should write a book.

Denied - Bounty Hunting? Detectives aren't normally very good at killing. I'd love to see a detective character on the server, but please expand your story and make it a bit less "Hey, I'm poor, time to bounty hunt"

Denied - Your app was hard to follow and lacked any real information about your character.

Accepted - http://i.imgur.com/vmwuKjK.gif

Accepted - I'd like to see a lot from you IC however as your story was a bit lacking.

Accepted

Accepted - Wonderful app.

Denied - Quit horsing around! We're looking for people who want to roleplay here!

Denied - Do I really need to say?

Denied - Your character is a bit lacking, in all aspects. Try expanding your backstory and if you really want to stick with the human hate, describe it in much more detail.

Denied - We're not accepting plagiarism or time travel, sorry.

Denied - Your character seems interesting but needs a lot more info before I'd think about accepting him.

Denied - Look above.

Denied - Your story is very, meh. It also lacks any detail, so the meh is more meh.

Denied - You could have an even clichér story and it'd still be denied due to an incredibly lack of detail.

Accepted - Might wanna get some explorer slippers.

Denied - Sorry, we're not accepting any races other than the default Starbound ones, this includes Apex brains crammed into Glitch bodies. Unless you can convince me with a really well written app - this character is denied.

Denied - Your character seems fine but we're not accepting blatantly plagiarised names.

Denied - Stolen Name (Although if you fix your app I might let it slip since it's a minor character), Lack of a description, Lack of detail in your backstory. If you wish to be raised around Humans you're gonna have to make a convincing story to how it all went down and not just a few sentences.

Denied - Your backstory is all over the place and your character feels very forced.

Accepted

Denied - We appreciate that you want to give your character some depth, but we take rape very seriously here. We're not accepting any forms of rape in apps.

Denied - Your character is incredibly generic and has a massive lack of detail.

Accepted

Accepted - Your app was fine but there's not much info here so I'm expecting to see a lot of in-game progression.

Denied - Your story is fine, but we're not accepting plagiarised names.

Accepted - A wonderful app, the name's just fine!

Accepted - It's like reverse finding nemo!

Denied - Your description is lacking and your character just overall seems incredibly empty.

Accepted - Feel free to write more! This was incredibly pleasant to read.

Accepted - I've scaled bigger walls. A pleasure to read.

Denied - Your story was lacking and you need to state that your name is a nick-name if you want it to be as such.

Accepted - Your grammar was fine. P.S. I expect you to play this 24/7 while you play:

Accepted

Accepted

PHEW, that was something else. Well it's 4:47 A.M. here so I'm off to get some breakfast. Right after I PM you guys the IP/Password.

EDIT: Fixed some formatting issues!

 

damn... :/