Poem The Little Tiy

Discussion in 'Winter Holiday Contest' started by Bamseper, Dec 26, 2012.

  1. Bamseper

    Bamseper Ketchup Robot

    Hello everybody, I just saw this contest and thought I'd enter... I would've drawn something but my scanner doesn't work, so here's a poem instead:

    There was once a little Tiy
    He worked on an awesome game, oh my!
    So he made a team of seven men
    and the base was located in the country of Big Ben!
    Then Christmas came, and with that a contest, too
    the snow was so white, and the sky was so blue!
    The winter wind came, so cold on my chin
    and this contest I'll enter, hopefully I'll win!

    Thank you for reading.
  2. Sham

    Sham Spoony Bard

    This reads to me like a nursery rhyme. (Not childish, just an even rhythm that is easy to remember)

    I approve!
  3. Bamseper

    Bamseper Ketchup Robot

    It was supposed to be a little childish :)
    And thank you!
  4. Sham

    Sham Spoony Bard

    I just wanted to clearly say what I meant! Every poem has a niche, and this one fits perfectly.

    Best of luck to you!:)
  5. Bamseper

    Bamseper Ketchup Robot

    Thanks alot to you ;)

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