Story The Hylotl Outcast...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by haynesy566, May 25, 2015.

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Should I continue?

  1. Yes

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  2. No

    1 vote(s)
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  1. haynesy566

    haynesy566 Heliosphere

    Hey everyone! I'm (very) glad to say that I'm not dead! I'll be working on another few chapter over the next couple of days, so buckle up and scream for your Mother Board!
     
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  2. haynesy566

    haynesy566 Heliosphere

    Chapter 11 update!!
     
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  3. Kaiachi

    Kaiachi Tiy's Beard

    His father's voice!? Ooooh what a twist! And that sounds like one fancy ship!
     
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  4. haynesy566

    haynesy566 Heliosphere

    Typing chapter 12 right now, yeah not too sure if that fits in with Shatcatch's character but he's supposed to be an exiled, disappointment of a prince so it would make sense :p
     
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  5. haynesy566

    haynesy566 Heliosphere

    Chapter 12 is up, will probably make it longer @Kaiachi
     
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  6. Kaiachi

    Kaiachi Tiy's Beard

    It was a nice tidbit to satiate, but I would like to see more! :D
     
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  7. haynesy566

    haynesy566 Heliosphere

    Updated chapter 12, added chapter 13 and a little surprise down the bottom[DOUBLEPOST=1444693261][/DOUBLEPOST]
     
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  8. Kaiachi

    Kaiachi Tiy's Beard

    Very nice! :D We shall see how this next excursion goes! I liked the file added to chapter 12, helped to round it out a bit. Character profiles coming, eh? Very nice!
     
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  9. haynesy566

    haynesy566 Heliosphere

    To anyone who is still following this story, I have updated chapter 14
    @Kaiachi still keen for a read? :rofl:
     
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  10. Ferociousfiend

    Ferociousfiend Astral Cartographer

    Oooh! A story! While it's not Shakespeare level, it's really good!

    If I could make a suggestion? I most or all the scientists were turned into zombies by the bird flu, along with lack of maintenance causing some lights to malfunction, setting a calm, creepy and contrasting atmosphere compared to the loud and brash, flaming rest of the planet. Can't wait for chpt. 15!
     
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  11. haynesy566

    haynesy566 Heliosphere

    That would be quite a contrast in scenery, I'll definitely take that on board, thanks for your feedback!
     

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