OK so i suck at drawing, but heres what I got: This enemy is actually two NPCs: Bombadave: A stircrazy bolistic loving exsoldier who after a long and brutal war, No one knows if it was the chemicals he used or the fact of war that got to him, has never been the same. He is often dellusional and unaware of his suroundings. Bombadave was once trapped in a house with 3,000 enemy soldiers moving in, when asked how he killed them all is reply was: "I'm glad I brought enough ammo". The Silent slaughter: A reclusive sly man who is the brother to "Bombadave". They were both in war to gether but he was a commander who when exceded so well in his early training he far surpased his brother. But dont let his cool collective surprise you over his entire military carrear he killed well over 20,000 (estimation most likely more) men, 5,000 by his own hands. His expertise is the fabeled lazer Katana. (no picture, but the descriptions say enouth) Behavior: They are found wandering the galaxy with no home to call there own and no want to stay in one place. When ever they come across any creature they will emedietly challenge it to the death. If one is killed the other will fight with increased strenght and fortitude. Backstory: During the year of 2164 while earth was in a deep struggle for power of the Alpha epsalon sector the two were in battle on the plannet of Zephos III. During this battle the two were struggling to win finally resorting to there last line of defence when only the two of them were left they released expiramental virus onto their advancing foe it effectiveness was unbeatable, but as their foes dissolved into writhing mass of organic matter they too suffered horrible dissfigurement and in the destruction of massive ammounts of brain cells were rendered war hungry emotionless warriors who seek nothing but a worthy opponent. please if someone could come up with a good Sprite for these characters i would love to see it.
This is pretty interesting, however only problem I have with this is that you are not really talking about monster. Its more like NPC that will attack you (and sense they are actually human, I don't see why would they attack you and not talk to you first, specially if you are actually kicking their butts) Perhaps if they went through some horrible (experimental military) training, which actually altered their physical appearance and made them look like monsters....? Something that will make player want to either interact with them, or kill them, or do something interesting. Right now I just imagine two dudes standing on surface, and when I come close, they just attack me, and after I kill them nothing happens, it would be like, Oh... well that was not engaging :\
Seems like a little bit of contradiction to me there. And maybe you should just grab piece of paper and try to draw what you want them to look like. As contest rules said, you will not be judged on your artistic skills. PS. What happens if you kill just one of them?
I could do some art if you like. The ideas and descriptions you've given are wonderful, and I can work with it.
