Story The Chronicles of Bustow

Added some more entries!

 

Entry #146 or whatever number I'm on is out! Enjoy!

 

It's been too long...

 

Entry 147 contains references to materials not suitable for minors. It's important to the plot (I think) so I suggest reading it.

 

It's back!



*heavy breathing hissing*

 

Ok! Censor that! That is NOT safe for work in the least!

 

id tag it nsfw but for some reason that abbreviation doesnt work like it should around here

 

Entry 148 is here

 

Two new entries! I'm trying to revive the rotting carcass that is the fan-fiction forum

 

Hopefully it doesn't fail like the corporation sub forum

 

A cultist sacrifice? Ooh! I hope you'll be bringing in The Ruin at some point in this ...

 

A few new entries added. Would anybody be interested in reading a completely reworked version of this story from like the beginning? Because I kind of want to do that.

 

I certainly would not mind seeing that!

 

It has gotten a bit jumbled.... Perhaps a rewrite would be good.

Can always use more practice too

 

Yes. I'd read that.

if i can suggest something for the reboot if you do that: using a few more spoilers for the entries could be an improvement. I'm getting lost when I scroll down there. And it takes an eternity to get to the bottom on mobile.

 

That's sort of why I wanted to do a re-write; I finally got around to coming up with a plot, but in order to get to that point I need to kill off several of the characters I've added in. Which could be somewhat problematic

Was definitely planning on adding spoilers, since I write 90% of the entries on my phone.

That being said, I'm gonna do it. School ended today, so now I have enough time on my hands to do stuff like this

 

The first 10 entries of the remake are here! Keep in mind that I may edit them later (still not satisfied with entry 10, so don't read that). The next 10 entries are on the way.

 

My only gripe is with how lenient the colony is. He'd've been shot for the camera thing for rebellious ideals, and there are no prisons other than the thought reassignment facilities and laboratories. Also, football and other such entertainment would not be legally allowed on the ship, nor would non-miniknog branded VIC-nog...

 

That's... That a good point that I hadn't thought of... But yeah, I'll probably change those parts at some point (especially the part about the jail... That's pretty important )
And that, folks, is why you never write at 3 AM when you haven't slept in over 24 hours.

 

Oh boy... it's been like 3 or 4 months, and imma be honest, I forgot about all of my fan fictions and have gotten very little accomplished (except for a short story that was mostly just a starbound-themed writing excersize). But im gonna try to keep working on this, so idk I guess you could get excited or something