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WIP The Charates - Piranha species

Discussion in 'Races' started by Eldrake, Dec 9, 2013.

  1. Eldrake

    Eldrake Void-Bound Voyager

    I wanna try and make at least one mod for Starbound. I decided that it should be a pirate themed Piranha species called Charates (Charate in singular). I have some of the lore down in my mind, but I need to do some of the technical work first before I start with that.

    CURRENTLY WORKING ON
    - Colors
    - Emotes
     
    Last edited: Dec 18, 2013
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  2. Krieg The Psyco

    Krieg The Psyco Void-Bound Voyager

    Yes, want, i want it NOW! Please?
     
  3. Zain Hallows

    Zain Hallows Existential Complex

    >.> is it okay if I tell you I already have a shark people idea...?
     
  4. Eldrake

    Eldrake Void-Bound Voyager

    Patience, my friend! These things, they take time.

    I've seen it actually, though I was under the impression that it's a non-player race. I might be mistaken though.


    As for the sprites themselves, I am having some trouble because I am not doing well with the head. I can't make a convincing looking shark mouth without having it looking like a checker game, and making it a 100% white mouth looks dumb to me. And of course, I can't make it bigger than it is, so that one is out of the question too.

    OTOH I experimented with a piranha looking mouth, and... I made a somewhat convincing one. Much better than the shark mouth I tried.

    I am beginning to wonder if I should go for a Piranha species instead? It wouldn't screw up most of the ideas I had in mind for the species, it works with my current sprites and might actually fit the pirate theme better. I do need a new name though, but that won't take a lot of time.

    Edit: Yeah, I think I will make them Piranhas.
     
    Last edited: Dec 10, 2013
  5. Eldrake

    Eldrake Void-Bound Voyager

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    Okay, here's what I got so far. A very rough draft of a male Charate. The skin and the underbite + torso combo will be recolorable when I get that done. No female charate yet. I don't even have proper emotes for it yet, so that's another thing to do.

    There will be fins as hair, but that will be done later.

    Edit: Actually, I think I will be improving the draft before I do that. I think it will help in the future.
     
    Last edited: Dec 11, 2013
  6. Mortfly

    Mortfly Master Chief

    I really like this idea and the character looks pretty cool already!
     
  7. Tyty

    Tyty Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    Looks kinda like garchomp, haha. This is a super cool idea.

    As for the sprite, I think you should add one, maybe two shades of color. The Starbound sprites tend to use 3/4 shades per color. It'll fit in with the others a bit better.
     
  8. Eldrake

    Eldrake Void-Bound Voyager

    Apologies for the lack of updates. I was playing a lot of Dota 2 because they just added ranked matchmaking. I should be able to focus more on these guys now.

    Thanks for the replies, they're encouraging! Looking at the colors, it does look like a smaller garchomp! Heh, I was just looking at piranha pictures on google and trying to imitate the colors closely. Probably why it ended up looking like chomp.

    Also, about the colors, I added more shades to the male sprites (I figured out that they needed these colors. Good thing they were just rough drafts), and I will begin on the arms. And then I will make the female sprites once I get hat over with.
     
  9. I Am a Secret Wizard

    I Am a Secret Wizard Astral Cartographer

    Wouldn't that make it a rough... SKIN draft?

    Anyway I love the new Piranha idea, might overlap with Hyotls though. At least, you can use their fin assets.
     
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  10. Eldrake

    Eldrake Void-Bound Voyager

    Considering how much I struggle to make a good looking fin, I might have to use their fin assets until I get better at making fins. Also aren't Hylotls more amphibian than fish?
     
  11. Eldrake

    Eldrake Void-Bound Voyager

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    They still need some slight improvements, but other than that, I think they're alright now. It's time to work on the emotes and colors.

    The emotes has proven to be tricky to get right for me, so I will start with the colors.
     
  12. Eldrake

    Eldrake Void-Bound Voyager

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    They should be almost finished once I am done with the emotes. I am probably going to tweak the colors further.

    Since I am posting this, I might aswell ask. Could somebody give me tips for making the species selection icons? I'd really appreciate it.
     
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  13. Mortfly

    Mortfly Master Chief

    Yeh im gonna have to play as the purple one he looks awesome! good job!
     
  14. RockyTV

    RockyTV Big Damn Hero

    Please make a dota 2 slark?
     
  15. yahtzeemaybe

    yahtzeemaybe Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    This is amazing, I really want to see the finished product and starter ship
     
  16. iCannibal

    iCannibal Yeah, You!

    OMG I love this idea! I really hope you make this into a downloadable mod. This looks to be my #1 mod! Will there be more teeth options? If not that's ok.
     
  17. DarkTails

    DarkTails Big Damn Hero

    I understand it's an old idea, however this is one of the better-looking ones on here so I think it deserves a little more praisssse. :nuruhappy:

    The face design is just right, and I totally agree that different teeth, along with different fins (and maybe different patterns for the body stripes), would make a great customizing addition.

    The color splits look fine, I would stop the lower color before it reaches the back of the head/neck though, that way the head doesnt look so much like a pokeball.
     

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