Digital [TAKING ANY AND ALL REQUESTS!] Various Starbound illustrations

Discussion in 'Fan Art' started by Jareix Cryvix, Apr 3, 2015.

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What do you think? (from a critical standpoint. not whether or not you like the themes.)

  1. great (Very good! keep it up.)

    51.0%
  2. good (not bad... still needs work)

    35.3%
  3. mediocre (its not horrible. just... not good...)

    7.8%
  4. bad (wow... you really need to work on it)

    5.9%
  5. terrible (sorry (or not) to burst your bubble, but you have no chance of becoming an animator)

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  1. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    Hello! I've decided that I wanted to share some of my creations with the community for criticism and feedback. Just know that i am not a professional and have a LOT to learn, hence why i am encouraging constructive criticism, both positive and negative. well... here goes nothing. enjoy! (or don't... I'm not one to decide your opinions) BRING IT ON CRITICS I CAN (probably) TAKE YOUR JUDGEMET!
    NOTE: I'm too lazy to update this top post. All of the later and greater stuff is down below in the comments. Plus, embed limit or something.
    Pixel arts (Character references):
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    A alligator blacksmith image.jpg
    A sapient gator image.jpg
    A tinker lizard image.jpg
    A lizard
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    A lizard in heavy armor
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    A pirate lizard image.jpg
    Another bloody lizard... (Anybody notice a running theme?)

    Pixel art (complete images):

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    Me. On an airship
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    A space duel on a Sallokian(lizard) space-airship (SPAAAAACE!)
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    Don't question why there are Hylotl in a desert, 'cause I don't know myself. (And yeah, I did rip this off of the "penguin bay" merchant. Please don't sue me...)

    Traditional art (sorry about the image quality. my scanner is busted, so I had to use my phone.):

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    My character again.
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    A quick sketch of the starbounder "Nibolas" (Nibolas, if you are seeing this I am so sorry I butchered your character... :( )
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    Another heavy Sallok. (With "battle-spades"!)
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    Some characters based off of my friends named "Dewleaf" and "Paul". (This is what happens when I try to draw a human... :/)
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    Something I doodled two years back because Alg1 class that day was boring as watching beige paint dry.
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    This is what would happen last year whenever I finished my geometry work with twenty minutes to spare. I reminisce and revisit. (I only realize now just how much it resembles a featherless avali...)
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    A "wing-neck"(frilled lizard) Sallokian politician. (With convenient claw needles that are perfect for backstabbing somebody.)
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    Dewleaf the warrior. (And yes, that's a skull.)
    image.jpg Its a novakid okay?
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    Personally, I like this guy better.
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    Who's the better shot!
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    This is what happens if I get bored in biology...

    Digital arts (I'm new to this, so I have quite a bit to learn. I don't have a working WACOM or similar, so I'm just taking pictures with my phone and editing them on photoshop)

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    Me AGAIN! This time in color! (And I know the foot's wonky, I don't know how but the bottom of the image got corrupted or something. Not cropped though)
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    Dewleaf and Paul. IN COLOR! first time doing cell shading, let me know if I've got it or am just figuratively face-planting...
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    Nibolas in color. once again, i would like to apologize if i screwed up your character...
    Sallokian politician [frilled lizard](flatcolor).png
    its that wing-neck again. flat colored with no shading yet. decided to change the face a bit and see how that would look.

    Things I need to work on and practice:

    • Contour lines: I currently have and AWFUL contour line that I never do in single strokes.
    • Shading: 'nuff said.
    • Coloring: I have no talent for using marker and crayons and really hate how permanent anything used to color is.
    • Proportion: it definitely needs a lot work, all I can really do is form a habit of doing proportions properly.
    • Depth: I'm really bad at translating facial depth to paper, so no head-on head shots of anything with extruded features.
    • Animation: I have no idea how good I really am. All I have is photoshop, which isn't BAD at making GIF images, just not great.
    • General skill: I just need to practice until I can actually get it right. I have artistic blood from both sides of the family, I should really focus on getting better. (I'm still not sure whether or not I have a chance at animating
     
    Last edited: Jul 19, 2015
  2. oraserat

    oraserat Cosmic Narwhal

    These are pretty awesome! I would love to see some more traditional artwork from you. :mwahaha::party::kitten2:
     
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  3. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    Thanks! I enjoy doing traditional art. Plus, I can do it whenever and fairly quickly so I'll probably end up updating this page just about every day. I already have a few more non-starbound traditional art in my off topic art thread. Occasionally with a digital art. Again, thanks for the compliment, though I would like to know where I goof up... I can't afford lessons, (except from my mother but she is heavily biased and is too nice to correct) so feedback and critique are the only ways I can learn. (other than practicing of course)
     
  4. oraserat

    oraserat Cosmic Narwhal

    :party::mwahaha::mwahaha:Great to hear
     
  5. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    As I said, I will be updating often. :3 there are now two sketches I felt like uploading now and a brand new one I did to satisfy my "art lust". Might end up posting yet another. (If my sister would STOP HOGGING MY COMPUTER! :urgh:)
     
  6. Asotil

    Asotil Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    I almost mistook you for a friend of mine I know as Jax. Either way, your arts are really nice and I look forward to more.
     
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  7. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    Hey... Quick WIP sketch I sorta doodled during 4th period today and ended up developing on. I wondered how super serious warrior Dewleaf would turn out...
    Let me know what you think and what it needs. (And yeah... The limbs look really wonky... Also, I just can't get those shoulder, hip, and shin guards right.) image.jpg
    Edit: fixed some stuff and went over it in pen. Kinda looks like a ninja. :D will color when I get the chance.
     
    Last edited: Apr 15, 2015
  8. Asotil

    Asotil Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    He looks about ready to break out into a very inspired "2 B, or not 2 B"
     
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  9. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    But 'tis not the question. While he is a lover of literature, (as will be revealed in the story I'm writing, which you can check out under fan fiction. Only got chapters 0 and 1 finished though. ) one does not know what the question is. Only that the answer is forty-two. ;)
     
  10. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    I decided to maybe try drawing a full scene rather than a character. (Once i finish coloring the warrior Dewleaf one. ) anybody care to guess where this scene will take place? image.jpg
     
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  11. Elldar

    Elldar Spaceman Spiff

    This crystal(?) reminds me of those things on the end of the blasters that some Avians use, besides that, no idea. :rofl:
     
  12. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    Try running a pink tint over it... It may look familiar. ;)
     
  13. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    This is what happens when I try something new... In this case a hylotl. image.jpg
    I end up creating an abominable soulless monster... :/
     
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  14. Elldar

    Elldar Spaceman Spiff

    Well, still better them my Abomination, so, GOOD JOB! :DD
     
  15. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    I'm not dead yet! I haven't posted in a while and decided to draw a novakid! image.jpg I can't... I just... Nope... I don't even... No... N. O. No!

    (Also, I would trade my kingdom for one bloody protractor!)
     
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  16. Heriol

    Heriol Void-Bound Voyager

    Awesome man! Loved the idea of an Alligator race!
     
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  17. Purple shawl

    Purple shawl Tentacle Wrangler

    Its not a bad style, your anatomy isnt off, people often make anatomical mistakes when drawing. I kindof like how its a bit smokey greyish, keep it up.
     
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  18. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    Well... You all know the saying. If at first you don't succeed, try try try again.
    if at first you fail; die die die die die die die die die die die due die again and again and again until you beat them with a million butt-pokes in a row...)

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    (It's supposed to read "skychester model '96) image.jpg image.jpg
    I've always really liked the clockwork armor set.[DOUBLEPOST=1430411539][/DOUBLEPOST]
    That just made my day! Thank you!
     

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  19. Elldar

    Elldar Spaceman Spiff

    Is it going to be like in those old Western movies? Let's see who does the first shot. ;)
     
  20. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

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    They fired at the same time?! Well... Let's see who was the better shot!
     
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