OOC Super Heroes OOC/CS (Applications welcome!)

Well, I do control the world a bit, but I let the people make things happen. So this RP is really led by the people, but the GM can push things to happen

 

Is it okay if i put unknown to most of the guestions becauce only he knows the ansvers? (he likes to be alone)

 

You mean the character sheet? Hiding parts of your character's information may be considered in bad taste by some, and can even be considered as a potentially abusable loophole to adjust the character to the current situation for express meta/powergaming. Either way, it's still an incomplete mark on your characters' application sheet, which is likely to be a liability on being rejected.

I believe it's fine to withhold some information from other players, mind you, as long as you PM the GM the complete character sheet and/or promise to reveal said things in the RP.
In the end, though, it's really all up to the GM.

 

Just post everything. Mark what the other people/you don't know with parentheses or something, so that at least we will know. No one in the RP will know it, it'll just be there for future reference.

 

He would only hide his identity, like what he looks like, his real name and age. You would know his powers and his costume.

Yeah, but some character might "randomly" bump in to my character when he is not wearing his costume. Also it might be fun for others to try to find out things about him.

 

I couldn't wait any more so here it is! Just say if you dont like it, i will make it better if need bee.
My character:

Gender:Male

Age:Unknown, between 12 and 20.

Height:6'2

Weigh:Slim

Eyes:Unknown

Hair:Unknown

Suit: Black and purple (litle bit tron like) suit that covers him completely, it has two purple eye like visors for his eyes and his mark purple wolf on the back and front.
Powers:

He is physicaly a lot stronger than wath his muscles look like.

He can abnormaly withstand damage, bullets and sharp weapons do litle to no damage to him.

Healing:He heals over time, quik enough that he doesn't need doctors, but slow enough that it doesn't help him in battles.

Projectile: He can shoot purple projectiles from his hands. They are about the sice of a snow ball.

Dash: He can move very quikly short distanses. Black smoke is around him when he does it.

Invisibility: He becomes invisible for a short ammount of time.

Demon form: He becomes a demon shaped purple mater. He weights more, but is as strong as he is normaly. He uses this form when he needs more weight, jumps from a high place at you ech. He can also use this only partialy, like turn only his fist and punch you.

Edit: I'm worried that Gun might be under powered. Anyone could pick a pistol and shoot with it, and many metahumans can't be killed with bullets.

 

Milkcalf, it looks okay, we just need a bit of a backstory, even if its just where hes at and what hes doing. Is he after someone? Is he good? Evil? Is he the kind of person to show up when he is most needed and fade when he isn't needed? I like the powers, the could use a bit of fleshing out though IE: How far can he dash? How long can he remain invisible? When he takes damage, how much could break him? Do blunt attacks word effectively against him? Does he heal at about Eren Jaeger speed?(Watch Attack on titan to learn more, but does he heal a tooth in about 4-6 hrs?)

 

Oh no, i forgot to write his name and morale. I was too exited when i wrote it.

Name: Tempest wolf

Morale:Good

I will meke a backstory for him soon.
I will re write it and explain the abilities beter.

 

Alrighty! Thanks for clarifying/working on it!

 

Name: Tempest wolf

Gender: Male

Age: Unknown, between 12 and 20.

Height: 6'2

Weigh: Slim

Eyes: Unknown

Hair: Unknown

Suit: Black and purple (little bit tron like) suit that covers him completely, it has two purple eye like visors (with night vision) for his eyes and his mark purple wolf on the back and front.

Moral: Good

Powers:
He is physicaly a lot stronger than what his muscles look like.

He can abnormaly withstand damage, bullets and sharp weapons do little to no damage to him. He is more vulnerable to blunt attacks, but his demon form decreases this weaknes.

Healing:He heals over time, quick enough that he doesn't need doctors, but slow enough that it doesn't help him in battles. Stabbing a sword trough his chest would mean an hour to fully heal.

Projectile: He can shoot purple projectiles from his hands. They are about the sice of a snow ball. The projectile is usualya lot stronger than a bullet, but their damage can be decreased so that they aren't deadly against normal humans.

Dash: He can move very quikly distances lower than 5 meters. Black smoke is around him when he does it.

Invisibility: He becomes invisible for 5 seconds, but cannot use his other powers.

Demon form: He becomes a demon shaped purple mater twice as big as normaly. He weights a lot more, meaning it's harder to move him, his attacks also do more damage becauce of this. He can also use this only partialy, like turn only his fist and punch you.

He uses enegy for his powers. This energy Recharges by itself. The less he has the weaker his powers get. It takes a day of running around to deplete it and it takes a day to recharge completely.

Personality:He is shy and prefers to be by himself, but is a very good friend if you get to know him.

Backstory: A.M.F (Anti-Metahuman Forces) Tested new gass near him. The gass was suposed to kill all metahumans on the area, but the it failed to efect metahumans and instead made him a metahuman.
He soon learned to use some of his powers. His dash was weaker, being only able to move 3 meters. And because he didn't use it correctly it's color was white.
He didn't know how to use his projectiles and demon form.
He wore anything that covered his head and used his normal clothes. He was given a name Stone skin. Even though the name was lame he didn't have timeto think about it becauce he was chaced by A.M.F. He left his home to hide and get a new start with his power, and is now in New York fighting crime.

 

Looks alright to me! Added to the character list!

 

cool! after new white I wanted to join another super hero rp. i'll work on mine.

 

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Eh... lol I can't stop laughing at Stu and improved's face

Anyway I'll get to making a profile later today or maybe tommorow.

 

reb furd = best furd

 

Yes! More people. And now for the hard part, waiting...

 

Name: Nelson "Nuke" Mills(May change name later...)

Age: 24
Gender: Male
Personality: Smart and able to keep calm under rough situations. Tries to avoid killing. Reason is because he tries not to be a judge or executioner, as well as worrying that killing them will do no good in the end. he will only kill as a last resort, though.
Appearence: Wears a suit made completely out of metal bands that's goldish-yellow with red accents. he wears red gauntlets with bright red lights at the fists.
he has yellow leggings with red boots that reach his ankles. he wears a helmet that has a flat-ish bottom and back but the front visor is curved like a dome.
Ethnicity: Mostly American with some Irish and German from his ancestors
Height: 5'9
Weight: 180 pounds (Suit adds 10 pounds)
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Reddish
Morality: Law(Good)

Powers
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Source: Can Produce his own nuclear energy that resides within him and is used for his attacks. without it, he is near defenseless.

Hand Blast: Can shoot his nuclear energy from his palms that has enough energy to knock someone out cold or kill them if used long enough

Sphere Bombardment: Can create spheres of Nuclear Energy that when thrown can cause small explosions

Super Strength: Nuclear energy he produces increases muscle mass.

Flight: Nuclear energy gave him the ability to surround himself with it thus giving the power of flight.

Heat Vision: Can cause Nuclear energy to smolder and shoot out of his eyes. He cannot use it for long periods of times as it hurts badly. "Stings" as he describes it.

Absorption: Can transform nuclear radiation into Nuclear Energy that he can use for his powers.

Bio
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Nelson Mills was a worker at a Science Facility known as "Hunting Foundations" that specialized in making Nuclear power into Energy to be used for war, but still was used for some good
purposes such as "Pest Traps, A safer way to use Nuclear Power" and the list goes on. Unfortunately, At the lab, there was an unusual pattern of short bursts with the Reactor, putting everyone in the lab at risk and a team of professional engineers was sent to fix it before it became unstable. Nelson mills was was part of this team. upon exiting, a radiation scan on the team as they left showed that Nelson Mills was exposed to dangerous levels of Nuclear energy due to a tear in his suit. Nuclear energy, when in the heated energy form, was nearly impossible to remove. Things looked Bleak for Nelson until he was given two options. One, he could undergo a very dangerous operation to install a NEPE(Nuclear Energy Powered Engine) within his chest to use the Nuclear Energy slowly killing him to instead power him, or he could live the rest of his life, which was estimated two months. He agreed to option one, which he survived. The NEPE was altered so it had a NEP(Nuclear Energy Processor) to provide Nuclear Energy constantly for his survival. Shockingly, he soon discovered that the added NEP, producing energy sucked up as soon as it was produced, he was given excess Nuclear Energy which gave him superpowers. Given these Powers, he was applied as a Meta Human and instantly became a target of the Anti-Meta Human forces. He would've been locked away if it weren't for a crisis in a remote series of Islands in the Northern Indian Ocean where a Radioactive content filled Factory exploded and leaked dangerous materials into the atmosphere, making the Island hazardous and unlivable. This issue was the perfect excuse for him to stay free for as long as the Isles were hazardous. After 3 years, he witnessed an attack on a purified part of the isles, and used his powers to defeat them. after questioning from authorities, it was revealed they were from a part still tainted and hazardous. He felt that the world was full of danger and needed to do more than purifying an isle that could be done just as well as well-trained professionals. He went rogue and now lives in Chicago, helping prevent crime and preventing the Ganymede Isles to be repeated, from the conflicts of man.
Notes:
>The Ganymede Isles are a fictional location.

>There is a difference between Nuclear energy and Nuclear Radiation, Nuclear energy being energy made from Nuclear Radiation, and being harmless while Nuclear Radiation being dangerous

>His weaknesses include Nuclear Resistant Objects made from the same armor he uses. if it's immune to Nuclear Radiation, then Nuclear
Energy is near useless. If it comes to this case, he'd have to rely on his super strength.




(If it isn't very good, point out whats bad and I'll fix it)

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Revised it

 

Well, the first thing I would do is run this through a spellcheck. Try proofreading it outload before you post it. It'll help you remove most, if not all, of the spelling/grammar mistakes with it, and will really help with comprehension. It'll also let people focus on the story more than the errors. Other than that, the back story could use some refining. Like, why would the company completely fall apart from one accident? Just little stuff like that. It may not bother other people and seem nit picky, but I'm OCD. Sorry.

 

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KK, I don't really know how to spell "Dependancy" so if you can help with that and I'm sure I can improve the way its written . but the company falling apart is because when the public learned that a man was affected negatively by the Nuclear Energy, (In the timeline the company fell apart before he was given the Nuclear Dependancy Solution) and the Nuclear Energy was in products that THEY were using, they were scared and nobody
would buy the products in fear of what would happen to THEM because as I said, the Nuclear energy was used in all sorts of things. Also, I'll check my story again for any mistakes. Thanks for the heads up!