[[User KK22’s personal log Nº1 – 3212|21|1]] Ok, so, yeah. I am really effed up over here. My ship broke down and I am the last of my fleet to actually survive the attack from that other fleet. However, I just barely made it, my ship’s also pretty effed up, with neither the FTL or the Thrusters working… In addition, I am in the middle of nowhere… I can only hope to be caught on a habitable planet’s gravitational pull and then not crash into it. That would be cool. However, I can only hope. In other news, I’m driving insane because of how lonely I’m feeling, so that’s why I started doing these personal logs, they will be helpful to me to keep track of my sanity, if that helps in anything. I will also be programming an A.I just to pass my time, since I am just waiting for shit to hit the fan. I hope to be able to do something so complex it will feel just like a human being. The hardest part will be giving it consciousness, but I am sure as hell to program a copy of the NRL just so it does not mercilessly kills me. My food levels are still quite good and I will not be worrying about it so soon, but I will be saying goodbye to the midnight snacks. But what will tell me when it is midnight? Not even the PC of this ship has a clock to count that, just a random calendar that not even I can understand. Apex technology is weird man. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [[User KK22’s personal log Nº2 – 3212|25|1]] I have been programming Jack the past… What? Days? Hours? Weeks? I do not know, I just know it has been a while. I am almost finished, I just need to fix some bugs and add some more lines over the scripts to them to run smoothly. Finally, I will have someone (or something on this case) to talk with me. It has been quite lonely this past days/weeks/whatever. I still did not find any planets, which is not that bad, I still have plenty of food. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [[User KK22’s personal log Nº3 – 3212|1|2]] Finally, I got into the orbit of what seems to be a habitable planet, I have yet to see. However, I am optimistic now, I still got some food and Jack is working properly, I just need to find some resources to fix my ship. I do not really know what to expect once I go onto the planet… So this may be my last log… I hope not. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [[User KK22’s personal log Nº4 – 3212|2|2]] One thing is for sure, the planet is very resourceful, both in materials and biological deathtraps. At least I got some core mineral and fixed my normal thrusters. Using a little bit of oil I have found it might be enough to go to another planet and try finding materials for the FTL rockets. I might claim the planet as well… I did not find any intelligent life anyway, so might as well score for the Ioah. Yeah, sure they did not consider me dead or at least MIA (I am so MIA it is unbelievable) right? Wrong. They are not even going to search for me probably, I cannot even blame them. We were never fit for searching a MIA soldier anyhow, we’d risk our weak asses by doing so. If someone is crippled, better leave them there and live another day. I still can return to the council and get honored for surviving out of my squad. Well, I would also get a medal for being the only surviving member of my squad. At least they were new and I do not have to pass through the extra guilt trip in case I had some kind of emotional attachment for them. Still I feel guilty for not being able to help them out… Nevertheless, better live another day and regret than never have the chance to live in the first place.
Great start. I like the tone the main character has. One question though: what race is he? Other than that, good start!
I think that telling their race is quite unnecessary. Also, if it isn't to ask too much I would rather prefer to refer them with gender neutral pronouns, thank you.^^
Wow, is this a thread revival? Yeah it is. I posted a new entry to the journal, bigger than the last two I've posted (wow, that was a month ago? Holy carp). Anyhow, I hid a little bit of information about the character over there (it's hella obvious, not even slightly covered) that you guys might find interesting. Well, it is being quite fun to write the entries and now I'm fueled with creativity, ready for more updates!
