Story: To the Valley (Happy New Year: Chapter 30!)

Discussion in 'Fan Works' started by Alkanthe, Jun 20, 2016.

  1. Alkanthe

    Alkanthe Supernova

    Chapter 28! A little short, but important stuff.
     
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    • 611

      611 Subatomic Cosmonaut

      Experience has taught me not to trust people who have Chryso at the beginnings of their names. You better not trust this crabberoo, Reb.
       
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      • Risukage

        Risukage Giant Laser Beams

        Seeker? Hmm! Well, there's no Golden Snitch here, but they did still find a nifty prize: allies. Now to see how it pans out for everyone. Don't be a stodgy old fart about this, Marlon! :p
         
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        • Alkanthe

          Alkanthe Supernova

          Chapter 29. Don't complain about the laziness. I need help. I am being threatened with limits on the time I can spend working on stuff like this. I'm losing my steam here. I'm trying to do this for you guys before I run out of time.
           
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          • Risukage

            Risukage Giant Laser Beams

            Hunh, the title of that book sounds strangely familiar... ;P

            Well, story time! BRB, off to get some hot cocoa and a comfy chair.
             
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            • Alkanthe

              Alkanthe Supernova

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            • Risukage

              Risukage Giant Laser Beams

              I have only one comment today:

              D'awwwwwww. :D
               
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              • 611

                611 Subatomic Cosmonaut

                I

                I just.

                *starts crying*

                So happy.
                 
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                • Alkanthe

                  Alkanthe Supernova

                  Sorry, no new chapter yet... but does anyone remember when I posted this?

                  Well, it's happening now. But only if I get enough players. Like this post, here to let me know if you want to play. This is a good reference for the type of game I host.
                   
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                  • Alkanthe

                    Alkanthe Supernova

                    Um, so...

                    This is coming back.

                    Over the summer, yep.

                    I've condensed the previous chapters into nine sections, so far; not sure if that's proper but I'll fix it up and give you a nice link to them tomorrow. (Or, later today.)

                    Get ready for a wild ride.
                     
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                    • Ghostly Fox

                      Ghostly Fox Heliosphere

                      Welcome back! It'll be interesting to see how you do the condensing, because three chapters into one sounds pretty intense.
                       
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                      • Alkanthe

                        Alkanthe Supernova

                        It kinda is, but for one: most of my "chapters" are really short. Also, at least in the early chapters, three chapters covered an entire day, and... that was pretty consistent for at LEAST twelve chapters.

                        It's taking so long because I have to reformat everything, including the character profiles. Good news is, I know what direction this story is gonna go.

                        It's not gonna be pretty. It's not gonna be normal. It's gonna cover pretty hard topics, and it'll be a lot like my life, which I guess is kinda the point of Reb being a self insert.

                        I don't even know if Reb is gonna get the girl. I sure haven't.
                         
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