Songbird

Discussion in 'Writing' started by Arra, Aug 26, 2016.

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Is this a fairly good start?

Poll closed Sep 8, 2016.
  1. Fairly good

    9 vote(s)
    90.0%
  2. Not amazing, but not horrible

    1 vote(s)
    10.0%
  3. Meh

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  4. Ohgawdno

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  5. Return this to the fiery depths of hell from whence it came.

    0 vote(s)
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  1. Arra

    Arra The End of Time

    UPDATED! ITS REALLY SHORT BUT I'LL WRITE MORE WHEN IM IN THE MOOD!
     
  2. Firebird Zoom

    Firebird Zoom Master Astronaut

    Where's chapter 3?
     
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  3. Arra

    Arra The End of Time

    Mistyped....
     
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  4. Arra

    Arra The End of Time

    (( Double post again why ))


    Gosh, life and school is so annoying. I'll try to get another chapter before Christmas....and two during my break...


    Edit: I also made the Songbird drone outta legos! Anyone wanna see it?
     
  5. HunterC1998

    HunterC1998 Cosmos Killer

    I'll be interested.
     
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  6. Pangaea

    Pangaea Forum Moderator

    Interesting! I like this. But you changed tenses part-way through. Also there's some punctuation errors but that's not a big deal.
     
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  7. Waffle-Chan

    Waffle-Chan Guest

    Needs more activity
     
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