Meet the Slugentoms! They are a race of telekinetic slugs. They are very,very VERY friendly! They are peaceful farmers, but do have 160 rows of razor sharp teeth and also, they sorta can spit acid. BUT the acid is used in lots of medicine and perfume. They have pets commonly referred to as slugs! You can get a pet slug on their planet. They love eating plants, as they are omnivores but they barely eat any meat. They are just humble caveman-like beings, there weapons are things like spears, clubs etc. The first Slugentoms emerged from the Cabbage of life in . Each year, all the Slugentoms go to the Cabbage to see the new Slugentoms come out. 10 come out every year (1/2 an Earth year). There current king is Lord Slugum. Like I said, they have telekinesis! They use this to carry boulders for there graves. This has been a tradition for them for over 200,00,000 earth years. They also use it for farming things like harvesting, herding animals and pulling carts to the market. They love to cook things like cabbage stew and make salad. They also build robots powered by food scraps. These robots are used in battles. This is a very popular sport. The government type is a monarchy type thing called The Slug Monarchy. There home planet is named Slorgeer. They are now found on lots of other planets. They are quite smart, although there speaking is kinda muddled up in English. Their language is called Slugonian. There are no diseases that can effect them. They breathe air, like we do. Their metal cannot be found anywhere but on Slorgeer. The metal is stronger then any other type of metal. It's called Sluatal. It is easy to smelt, but is smelted WAY differently to other metals. It's smelted using WATER! There is a lot of water on Slorgeer. There are heaps of islands on it. All the islands are considered continents. The main city is called Sluland. The Cabbage of Life and Sluggy Palace are in it. They live in holes in the ground, but they are very fleshed out. The robots that are powered by food scraps are called Slamtrons, as to win the robot needs to slam down on there opponent and keep them down for 5 seconds. The Slugentom's time is measured the same as earth time. Their days are 2x as long as earth days, but they do not sleep. To entertain themselves, they watch T.V and play on rainbows and the Rainbow Playgrounds. They do have technology, but it's powered by food scraps. On Sluland they have the Scrapz Plant, a power plant powering almost everthing on the planet that is mechanical.
More ideas are needed for this suggestion from you. Flesh them out a little. Why do they live like they do? What's some background on them? Where do they come from? Give us a little bit about their culture, their society (saying they're agrarian isn't much), their government, etc. What kind of technology do they have? There's so much more that needs to be covered.
Ok! They are just humble caveman-like beings, there weapons are things like spears, clubs etc. The first Slugentoms emerged from the Cabbage of life. Each year, all the Slugentoms go to the Cabbage to see the new Slugentoms come out. 10 come out every year (1/2 an Earth year). They hail there king, Lord Slugum. Like I said, they have telekinesis! They use this to carry boulders for there graves. More this afternoon.
every one of your suggestions is very lacking stevo. quality over quantity. try making one well detailed, original suggestion, instead of a bunch of poor ones.
OK LITLBEAR! THIS IS ALL THE INFO ON THEM! Meet the Slugentoms! They are a race of telekinetic slugs. They are very,very VERY friendly! They are peaceful farmers, but do have 160 rows of razor sharp teeth and also, they sorta can spit acid. BUT the acid is used in lots of medicine and perfume. They have pets commonly referred to as slugs! You can get a pet slug on their planet. They love eating plants, as they are omnivores but they barely eat any meat. They are just humble caveman-like beings, there weapons are things like spears, clubs etc. The first Slugentoms emerged from the Cabbage of life. Each year, all the Slugentoms go to the Cabbage to see the new Slugentoms come out. 10 come out every year (1/2 an Earth year). They hail there king, Lord Slugum. Like I said, they have telekinesis! They use this to carry boulders for there graves. This has been a tradition for them for over 200,00,000 earth years. They also use it for farming things like harvesting, herding animals and pulling carts to the market. They love to cook things like cabbage stew and make salad. They also build robots powered by food scraps. These robots are used in battles. This is a very popular sport. This is a basic picture of a Slugentom I made:
not my suggestion. excuse me for wanting fleshed out suggestions, instead of shitty ones. don't break a nail on the way out.
I like this idea they are JUST LIKE MEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! Peace loving farmer someday i wake up smell the fresh air and think to myself how badly i want to become a lazy friendly peaceful loving slug farmer and how delicious cabbages are.
THANK YOU SO MUCH GUYS I REALLY APPRECIATE IT! More ideas for them coming soon! Like, NOW! : Meet the Slugentoms! They are a race of telekinetic slugs. They are very,very VERY friendly! They are peaceful farmers, but do have 160 rows of razor sharp teeth and also, they sorta can spit acid. BUT the acid is used in lots of medicine and perfume. They have pets commonly referred to as slugs! You can get a pet slug on their planet. They love eating plants, as they are omnivores but they barely eat any meat. They are just humble caveman-like beings, there weapons are things like spears, clubs etc. The first Slugentoms emerged from the Cabbage of life. Each year, all the Slugentoms go to the Cabbage to see the new Slugentoms come out. 10 come out every year (1/2 an Earth year). There current king is Lord Slugum. Like I said, they have telekinesis! They use this to carry boulders for there graves. This has been a tradition for them for over 200,00,000 earth years. They also use it for farming things like harvesting, herding animals and pulling carts to the market. They love to cook things like cabbage stew and make salad. They also build robots powered by food scraps. These robots are used in battles. This is a very popular sport. The government type is a monarchy type thing called The Slug Monarchy. There home planet is named Slorgeer. They are now found on lots of other planets. They are quite smart, although there speaking is kinda muddled up in English. Their language is called Slugonian. There are no diseases that can effect them. They breathe air, like we do. Their metal cannot be found anywhere but on Slorgeer. The metal is stronger then any other type of metal. It's called Slutal. It is easy to smelt, but is smelted WAY differently to other metals. It's smelted using WATER! There is a lot of water on Slorgeer. There are heaps of islands on it. All the islands are considered c -+ive in holes in the ground, but they are very fleshed out. More ideas coming soon This is a basic picture of a Slugentom: This is a map of a normal Slugentons house:
Meet the Slugentoms! They are a race of telekinetic slugs. They are very,very VERY friendly! They are peaceful farmers, but do have 160 rows of razor sharp teeth and also, they sorta can spit acid. BUT the acid is used in lots of medicine and perfume. They have pets commonly referred to as slugs! You can get a pet slug on their planet. They love eating plants, as they are omnivores but they barely eat any meat. They are just humble caveman-like beings, there weapons are things like spears, clubs etc. The first Slugentoms emerged from the Cabbage of life in . Each year, all the Slugentoms go to the Cabbage to see the new Slugentoms come out. 10 come out every year (1/2 an Earth year). There current king is Lord Slugum. Like I said, they have telekinesis! They use this to carry boulders for there graves. This has been a tradition for them for over 200,00,000 earth years. They also use it for farming things like harvesting, herding animals and pulling carts to the market. They love to cook things like cabbage stew and make salad. They also build robots powered by food scraps. These robots are used in battles. This is a very popular sport. The government type is a monarchy type thing called The Slug Monarchy. There home planet is named Slorgeer. They are now found on lots of other planets. They are quite smart, although there speaking is kinda muddled up in English. Their language is called Slugonian. There are no diseases that can effect them. They breathe air, like we do. Their metal cannot be found anywhere but on Slorgeer. The metal is stronger then any other type of metal. It's called Slutal. It is easy to smelt, but is smelted WAY differently to other metals. It's smelted using WATER! There is a lot of water on Slorgeer. There are heaps of islands on it. All the islands are considered continents. The main city is called Slutland. The Cabbage of Life and Sluggy Palace are in it. They live in holes in the ground, but they are very fleshed out. The robots that are powered by food scraps are called Slamtrons, as to win the robot needs to slam down on there opponent and keep them down for 5 seconds. The Slugentom's time is measured the same as earth time. Their days are 2x as long as earth days, but they do not sleep. To entertain themselves, they watch T.V and play on rainbows and the Rainbow Playgrounds. They do have technology, but it's powered by food scraps. On Slutland they have the Scapz Plant, a power plant powering almost everthing on the planet that is mechanical. This is a basic picture of a Slugentom: This is a normal Slugentoms house:
Stevo if i may ask. Can i see a picture of this "Rainbow Playground" i must know just how colorful the Slugentoms entertainment really is.
I'm not going to bubble wrap what I'm about to say. Your art for this is is honestly sub par, and that's putting it gently. It's very simple and while Starbound's graphics are low res they aren't simple at all, they're very well drawn, IMO. In pixel art, if you're using the same exact shade of a color for too big of a space, you're probably drawing badly. In addition, your names are just unoriginal. I don't even need to explain this. At least Avian and Floran, while being generic, sound pretty good. Your writing style is childish. I'm not just saying that as an insult, this honestly, truly seems to be written the way a child would write it. You have a poor grasp of proper formatting and frequently use walls of text. This race just sticks out like a sore thumb, it's poorly written, and poorly drawn. I'm sure once you look at the really well done stuff you'll learn of the course of a few years. And one last thing, Slutal. Slutal. Slutal.
