This is really messy because I'm really tired today, but anyway here's the start to the comic, I suggest watching the thread, I'll be commenting when there's an update! I'm hoping every Monday a comic gets uploaded, not sure about the time though. The quality of the comics honestly depend on my mood. So it's going to be very inconsistent xD Note: her hair is black but man idk how to do that so- Her hair can magically change colors till I figure it out xD (Ps this one, use the vines and numbers to navigate, go straight down, then to the middle, and down again.) Tell me what you think so far! Don't worry romance isn't the only thing, I just like to set grounds you know? Update! Before you read this update know that this week, last week, and next week are full of tests, but then I'm off school, so this comic is flat colored and such due to short time. Edit: I colored that empty seat but I guess it didn't pick it up lmao, also if you have trouble opening this, try reloading or reclicking, I did it twice, then it worked Clarification: Hunter is her sibling, and her and Alex both fell out of the tree. Again sorry, I really wanted to make this better but testing kills my insides. And finals next week.. who wants that? Woo! Sorry for the late update but this week is finals ahaha, The last two panels aren't colored on purpose, and the pacing is a bit frantic because my life is hectic af. Anyway using imgur to make things easier for everyone xD -Bearings-
I really like every artist's style in this forum, yours is no exception! It's one of the styles that stands out the most As for the comic, yessss I love the idea, we need more of these imo, but even with your directions, I found the dialogue a little hard to follow. I think it could be organized better for the next ones, or maybe use more defined speech balloons? Could just be me, though. You can also dismiss this if you have a complicated schedule, but I think updating consistently is pretty important when maintaining ideas like this. Of course, you're not actually forced to update it on a set schedule, and the next best thing to do is give yourself whatever time you need! Hope to see more!
Yeah I knew the dialogue was a tad messy, I'm not sure how to make full perfect bubbles so I'll try next time, thanks for the advice!
It was much easier for me to follow this time around! Great job and I look forward to see what you do with your character
Ah thank goodness! I cleaned it up a lot more since it was kinda confusing, I may fix up the first page as well.
I usually plan out scenes when listening to songs, then sometimes I draw them down traditionally so I can use them later in a comic or something, then revise it. Ex:
Don't forget the shotgun! lol nice update. I really dig your style. It can be a bit overwhelming at times but it has impact.