Traditional Poptart's art dump

Discussion in 'Fan Works' started by EvilPoptart81, Mar 29, 2016.

  1. Sandriel

    Sandriel Void-Bound Voyager

    Sweet <3 Now we need a throne, a big throne...maybe with many Vegetables and Fruits. A Throne for Kim, to rule the Fanfic world or...only Stardew Valley i don't know :3
     
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    • Satashi26

      Satashi26 Phantasmal Quasar

      @EvilPoptart81 woooooooo! *hug hug hug* thank you! She's adorable <3 Ever since I've seen pictures of her, I realiize just how LONG her hair is, oh my god! I have to add that into the story somehow.

      @Sandriel lol thank you *hugs!* But there are better writers out there :p But that really really made me happy, thank you!!!
       
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      • EvilPoptart81

        EvilPoptart81 Cosmic Narwhal

         
        • EvilPoptart81

          EvilPoptart81 Cosmic Narwhal

          Alright so I've got a semi proper sketch of my farmer Riley that I'm working on, I'll post up what I have so far!

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          • Satashi26

            Satashi26 Phantasmal Quasar

            @EvilPoptart81 Hey, you've noticeably gotten better with that picture :D Keep it up! Hips are a great size, the clothing is really nice, hair is good looking too. Your eyes/nose/mouth are distinctly western, but eyes are starting to lean a bit more towards eastern. Not sure what else to say on that :p But yeah, you're getting better!
             
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            • EvilPoptart81

              EvilPoptart81 Cosmic Narwhal

              @Satashi26 Thank you so much, I've always had a bit of an influence with both eastern and western styles, sometimes one comes out more than the other. Heck I started out with the massive eye styles of the old classic anime's from the early/ mid 90's..probably showing my age here haha. As much as I've tried before to move away from the anime style, it seems to come back and sneak itself into my characters features sometimes, with minor adjustments in my own style. But thank you again for the feedback, it's really helping me! <3
               
              • EvilPoptart81

                EvilPoptart81 Cosmic Narwhal

                Going to just drop this off here. Have a Farmer Riley ^_^

                Riley newlines3.png
                 
                • Ghostly Fox

                  Ghostly Fox Heliosphere

                  Interesting shirt design. It looks pretty good. She looks vaguely smug/pleased about something she just did.
                   
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                  • Satashi26

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                    woot! Colored! I like, but I have to point out something, sorry! The skin tone looks a very pale and light. Especially her exposed shoulder. Now I don't really mind things like this, but it seems a little TOO pale for some reason... Maybe the background color playing tricks on my eyes? But yeah, still love the pose and dat sexy stomach!
                     
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                    • EvilPoptart81

                      EvilPoptart81 Cosmic Narwhal

                      Hmm I see what you mean with her being pale, could just be the light background too, but I do have a tendency to make her very pale, or very pink LOL. I'm looking at her shoulder now and I must have put a highlight or something on the edge of her shoulder there, I can see how pale she is in that one spot, Poor thing. Glad you like her though! I still have some stuff planned, maybe Riley and Kim hanging out, killing slime or something like that : D
                       
                      • Ghostly Fox

                        Ghostly Fox Heliosphere

                        I think it's the way the light is reflecting/highlighting on her skin? Or possibly the lack of an undertone... Though now I'm thinking that her elbow looks a bit off... But I can't think of how to explain why it looks off.

                        Edit: Ninja'd.
                         
                        • EvilPoptart81

                          EvilPoptart81 Cosmic Narwhal

                          Yeah I'm noticing a few things too the more I look at her, but then I'm still rusty ^^;
                           
                          • Satashi26

                            Satashi26 Phantasmal Quasar

                            But the main thing is, you can point out things in art while still REALLY appreciating it. I really like your pictures, and you're a sweet person as well! I love when people comment on my fics so I want to be sure to tell everyone what I think about their pics as well <3

                            Riley might appear in the upcoming Stardust chapter, btw :p
                             
                            • EvilPoptart81

                              EvilPoptart81 Cosmic Narwhal

                              *blushie face* =^_^= Aww you're going to make me blush! I do really appreciate everyone's comments and tips! I think you're so sweet as well :cookie: and I'm glad I got this chance to meet a handful of new people here! <3 <3 <3
                               
                              • EvilPoptart81

                                EvilPoptart81 Cosmic Narwhal

                                I started to work on this one last night and dozed off around 1am while listening to some music while sketching, so have a flirty Abigail.

                                Abigail flirty.png
                                 
                                • MagicallyClueless

                                  MagicallyClueless Master Astronaut

                                  I really like your proportions. I know that's a weird compliment, but I totally do.

                                  I also enjoy how you do faces (I feel like I've said this already??) and Abigail looks like she has a lot of personality in that drawing!
                                   
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                                  • EvilPoptart81

                                    EvilPoptart81 Cosmic Narwhal

                                    Thank you!! I tried to give her as much of her light flirty-ness and personality as possible (flirty-ness it's totally a new word lol) Faces and expressions are probably one of my biggest enemies..that and hands LOL I'm glad you like it though!! I hope to have her complete sometime this week ^_^
                                     
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                                    • Satashi26

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                                      *saves* Woohoo! I must say I like your pencil drawings a whole lot. I love colored too, don't get me wrong, but something about sketchiness is a real artistic turn on :D But where's her BUTT at!? D: Abby needs a butt!
                                       
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                                      • EvilPoptart81

                                        EvilPoptart81 Cosmic Narwhal

                                        LOL That's probably about the time I started to fall asleep, I never finished her butt! D: Don't worry, she'll at least have a bottom half and not be as cropped out once she's complete. X3
                                         
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                                        • EvilPoptart81

                                          EvilPoptart81 Cosmic Narwhal

                                          For now I've got the line art finished, to the Abigail pic I posted yesterday. I tried coloring her in, but the end result was sloppy and not acceptable to post. It was like all of a sudden my skills went full derp. I'll work on her tonight when I have more time or tomorrow hopefully. I had started a Haley sketch last night, but damn her skirt..I'll need to fix that atrocity before the sketch is even passable to post here LOL Anyway have some Abby line art, if you want to color her in yourself, be my guest, I really don't mind if people color in my line art, think of it as a freebie coloring page! ^_~ <3

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