Poem Poems of Epic Proportions! [Taking Requests!]

Kaiachi · Sep 4, 2015

Lava Cake said: ↑

Okay, enough chat, let's get some moar poems up in this hizzy:

A Jump in Slow Motion

On top a monstrous cliff a human stomps in gentle rhythm

Slowly crushing and compressing the humble pebbles beneath him with each step

He takes one more step and stops

Slowly, he directs his vision downward to the mammoth drop below

Swivels his head upwards again, then swallows in both anxiety and excitement

He gradually stretches and pulls his arms out

Then when his hands meet a large snap his heard from his hands

He sheathes them back down in his withered pockets

But he slowly pivots away from the edge

Again stomping

But this time away from the terrifying cliff

Is it fear?

Has he changed his mind?

Wait

He quickly jerks towards the cliff again

And his feet are moving faster than before

They accelerate

And Accelerate

At the sharp edge he springs himself from his right shoe

Left shoe launched first in the air

His right shoe moves to catch up

He has now detached from the confines of the world

During this moment

Freedom is sovereign

No pain of the feet

Just the sheets of air layering him

A moment so peaceful

A moment so beautiful

A moment so free

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That one was especially lovely. That's what I've always imagined it would be. Very nice!

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