Story One long journey of The Green Lance

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Warget, Jul 21, 2015.

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Wanna hear more about The Green Lance's crew?

  1. Yeah!

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  2. Nope!

    0 vote(s)
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  3. No violence, language, etc and you got my vote!

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  4. Why did you do this to poor Ol' Crookbrand? T^T

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  1. camerox

    camerox Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    Should I write something about florans maybe or glitch? hmmmm
     
  2. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    What is your heart desires?
     
  3. camerox

    camerox Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    I like them both :(
     
  4. Alkanthe

    Alkanthe Supernova

    Then you could write about both.
     
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  5. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Write a story about Floran living among Glitches. (Glitch among Florans is "meh", cause of it's popularity)
     
  6. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Update! Added the 4-th text! Hope you'll like it.
    I would be happy if you give me a big pack of feedback on this one!
     
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  7. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Looks like forum is a bit broken theese days...
     
  8. Shador

    Shador Subatomic Cosmonaut

    This story is really good:DD...but try to not make it too serios, add some more humor. The sex-content/violence isn´t that bad, so keep it in ur story.
     
  9. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Thanks. It's really important to know, that people likes what I write.
    Also, what do you think about song-inserting idea?
     
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  10. camerox

    camerox Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    Don't do songs in books. They don't work. Songs have rhythm and you can't write that.
     
  11. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Maybe you're right. >_>
     
  12. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    One thing is bothering me a lot. Right now I have nobody to chat about my stories.
    I mean... I want to share the ideas and "live" inside my storyline, but I have to mind it on my own and this is pretty hard.
     
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  13. Alkanthe

    Alkanthe Supernova

    If you wanna share ideas, I mean, you could talk to me...
     
  14. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Can try. I will contact you soon. ^_^
     
  15. Alkanthe

    Alkanthe Supernova

    Okay! Thanks
     
  16. Shador

    Shador Subatomic Cosmonaut

    I skipped the song-part....waste of time
     
  17. Alkanthe

    Alkanthe Supernova

    For what it's worth, I enjoyed the song part, even though I don't know the tune.
     
  18. The Squid

    The Squid Oxygen Tank

    Me too. It added more depth to some of the newer characters in a pretty creative way.
     
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  19. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    The song contains some actions I added to it to show Fiddle's personality + you skipped the appearing of the wild guitar guy =D
     
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  20. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Story number FIVE is ready to read! Be prepared for the hell of the text. (Also HUGE thanks to Miss Alkane, for being my redactor!)
     
    Last edited: Aug 11, 2015
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