Other Ode to SDV.

Discussion in 'Fan Works' started by barbieshangover, May 13, 2016.

  1. barbieshangover

    barbieshangover Star Wrangler

    My creativeness is no way near as good as any of you guys, but I thought I'd try and participate with a little poem I wrote. It's very rough and my first one, so apologies in advance if it really sucks!

    Ode to Stardew Valley

    I wanted to get away from the world that I fear,
    So I opened the letter that I held so dear.
    It was what I was wishing for, a chance to flee,
    Would I make a better life, make a better me?


    My journey began on the first day of Spring,
    The place was a mess, I could not see a thing.
    Was this the right choice? I pondered a while,
    But then soon after I started to smile.

    It took time to settle, but now I can see,
    In Stardew Valley I finally am free.



     
    • Pudassassin

      Pudassassin Hard-To-Destroy Reptile

      Nice poet you got there. Good job![​IMG]
       
        Last edited: May 21, 2016
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      • barbieshangover

        barbieshangover Star Wrangler

        Thanks. I haven't written any poetry in nearly a year so I'm very rusty!
         
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        • Gabaw

          Gabaw Spaceman Spiff

          A beautiful little poem, here's hoping for more
          Put pen to the paper and something something ride a boar lmao see it's not that easy. I love it :confirm:
           
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          • mrobake

            mrobake Zero Gravity Genie

            Nice, more new form of art. I hope there will be more of it coming!
             
            • barbieshangover

              barbieshangover Star Wrangler

              I'm going to try and go for something a little more complex.
               
              • barbieshangover

                barbieshangover Star Wrangler

                I need a subject, a person or an area of the game. If you can think of anything please let me know, I need inspiration!
                 
                • mrobake

                  mrobake Zero Gravity Genie

                  Why not start with the farm. How expanse the area was, how chaotic its state before the farmer moving in: weeds, gravel and boulder, and wild grass; The dilapidated greenhouse, thickets, ponds... Wild cretins inhabiting the area such as frogs, butterfly, squirrels, crow, birds, owl... Hidden grandpa shrine and that extra shrine for farm totem teleportation area...

                  I can't express it, but there is so much hidden and raw beauties the farm at the beginning has, ready to be managed. Just like unmolded clay ready to be made into an art
                   
                    Last edited: May 13, 2016
                  • barbieshangover

                    barbieshangover Star Wrangler

                    That right there is poetry in itself.
                     
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                    • mrobake

                      mrobake Zero Gravity Genie

                      Really? Thanks! So yeah, does my point help to inspire you somehow?
                       
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                      • barbieshangover

                        barbieshangover Star Wrangler

                        Yes it does! I'm feeling creative for a change. Thank you :)
                         
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