Octavion is the name of a race of monster, they all wear highly durable armor and use special alien technology. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- -You require strong parties, or highly geared people to kill them!! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Their Racial Ability is that they can all summon a beast called Spinarak. - All Spinaraks can fight in battle and can be used as a mount to ride on. - There are 2 types of Spinarak, The Battle Spinarak, and The Movement Spinarak. - The Battle Spinarak, is best in battle its the one that I drew above; you can still ride it although it is not as fast as The Movement Spinarak. - The Movement Spinarak, is best at transport, it moves way faster than The Battle Spinarak; it can still be used to fight in battle but its alot weaker than The Battle Spinarak, the way it looks is exactly like the Picture above but without horns on its head, and the two claws on its back, and so it bend down alot more to be more streamlined. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ As you can see I spent alot of time doing the artwork. But not all Octavion are the same there are different types, the one I drew is called a Reaver: - They are like assassin type, they are very fast, can go stealth, and slice people with their blades, their blades are poisoned so if they stab you, you will be poisened/weakened. (Also has high armor but not as much as the Smashers) The next type is Smasher: - They are strong tanky types, with a shield made from dragon bone, and a warhammer made from special alien technology imbued with electricity. The next type is Torpedo: - The Torpedo can summon 2 Spinaraks at a time and are specialized in ranged attacks, they also have a shield but made from boar hide, its not as strong as the warriors one. So they fight from a distance using their plasma rifles and tracker/seeker arrows(they explode), while the spinaraks deal with up close. (They have high armor too but less than the Reavers) The final type is the Instructor: - The Instructor is the boss of the Octavions, he has all of the traits of the other Octavions (HIGHEST ARMOR, BEST RANGE, CAN GO STEALTH, POISONS, SUPER FAST, etc...), he wields random weapons everytime you encounter him, just to keep it interesting. (Obviously the random weapon must be from the special alien tech) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -The Octavion and Spinarak live in the same biomes. They can be found in these Biomes: -Jungle Biome. -Desert Biome. -Icey/Frost Biome. -Lava/Fire Biome. Their Special Alien technology allows their gear to adapt to the different biomes, so once they walk into a different Biome their gear begins to change the their look (for example, when entering a frost biome, your gear begins to grow ice shards, and weapons change into frost.) it takes a period of 2days for their gear to fully adapt, and during this time period their armor level is weakend, so this would be the easiest time to kill them. -Spinaraks change skin color in different biomes. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Changes that occur in Different Biomes: -Jungle Biome: Their gear changes to grow vines and leaves, their weapon have an overglow of green, all of their weapons do poison damage, and due to the vines on their gear when you hit them theres a chance to Bleed. (Spinarak is Green) -Desert Biome: Their gear looks rusty, and all of their weapons are rusty, they have some cloth rags on them, and on their helm. -no changes to weapon damage, or armor level. (Spinarak is dark Yellow/Brown) -Icey/Frost Biome: Their gear has several ice shards on it, their shoulderpads are fully made of ice shards, their weapons change to frost, their attacks now slow enemies for 2 seconds. (Spinarak is Blue-ish/Black) -Lava/Fire Biome: Their gear is somewhat on fire, like their shoulderpads are firery, and their weapons have fire on them, all weapons Ignite (DoT of fire). (Spinarak is Orange/Firery) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- .............Hope you like my idea
Thanks for the support guys! And Question... What exactly do you mean/suggest by "could do with some improvements"? Could really use the feedback, and thanks for the critisism, no seriously
well, here goes: I like the monster itself. I love how it uses the different types and all too. The concept is nice and all, but you could expand a bit. Why not say a bit of background information, of how this beast came to be? Maybe also add variations of the different types. Also, if you could lay it out as a factifile that would be great! I'd love to know a bit more detail about these species. Maybe also so how they would act together as a species and all. I like it, but yeah. Check out this one to see what I mean: playstarbound.com/index.php?threads/zolons-submission-the-seekers.2960/
So you want feedback ey?.... First off just to say Amazing idea, plus Loveing the Artwork um well just off the top of my head, you could add their environments, like different biomes 'n' stuffs maybe like what they eat/ or how they scavenge their food. .................Hope this helped Oh and Dont take this the wrong way I do love the idea, with a bit more info it could have potential to win
Thanks for the feedback im working on the editing now. EDIT: HUGE CHANGES MADE TO THE IDEA!!!! Check it out, added Biomes and Adapting gear, and DoTs. ---Working on a Frost Smasher..!!
