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awesome

 

Interesting story idea.

 

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I wonder if pixels are cubes, or just square discs...

 

I've read your other story "Shadows from the Abyss" and loved it.
Also great work so far until now in the sequel.I'm waiting for the next chapters.Good luck.

 

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I figured you got a bit too close to "Eddard Stark" than you intended ...

 

Oh. oh! OH OHHH!

I don't GoT. I don't GoT at all. I didn't even know such character name existed before I Googled it. Should do that more often to avoid such coincidences. Kinda awesome coincidence though! xD

Btw, should I GoT? I've been thinking that.

 

The books are great. The only problem is the gap of time between them. I think you should. You can but the first five books for roughly $80...
Although I can't say for the show. Never watched it.

 

Name:Alexander Peter Milliner
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Appearance:Long,brown trench coat over a messed up shirtl.Long,scruffy blonde hair,deep blue eyes,dark blue jeans and fingerless gloves
Personality and traits: Shy,calm,collected.has a faint twitch duue to damage to his veins,Has amnesia
Backstory: Orginally a scientist in the team attempting to make the multifunctionial manipulation Tool,Or matter manipulator for short.When he went out for a breath of air,he was mugged and beaten nearly to death,causing damage to his nervous system,a severe blow to the head caused his amnesia,Where he ran off,Not knowing his name,his lab coat became so dirty it became his trench coat and his cloves tips ripped.due to his sudden disappearance,he was announced dead and work on the matter manipulator was never fully completed,making the slow,sluggish and overall disappointing yellow lump of plastic we all know and love.He never realized his past,and stole a ship.He named himself Neon tetris,after things he heard people talk about.
Gear and items: Electric sword and a bomb.
Additional wishes: I dunno,your decision i guess....[DOUBLEPOST=1409686825][/DOUBLEPOST]

Because you like it does it mean hes in?

 

The like was more like: "I acknowledge this post, and thanks for posting it!" That said, your character is in. I think I have a good place for him, but it will take some time when I get to that point.

 

Name: Floran Oakenshield
Race: Floran
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Appearance: He's a standard floran, olive skin with green leaves. He has a bright pink rosebud on his head. He usually wears the synthesizer armor set, and wields the slashening.
Personality and traits: He is normally a quiet a serious kind of person. Due to being constantly being after argans (mushroom folk, wtf they called), he never has too many friends. He is also a bit of a social introvert, only showing his kind, caring side to those who trust him.
Backstory: Not much is known of his childhood, only that his entire planet was wiped out and enslaved by mushroom folk. Oakenshield then wanted to take revenge, after ten years, and attacked the mushroom folk head, which resulted in his near demise. In the attack, he managed to save two people of his clan, Sporen Oakenshield and Thorn Oakenshield. While the three never really hang out, they stay in close communication for figuring out how to destroy the mushroom folk.
Gear and items: Synthesizer armor and the Slashening.
Additional wishes: If he's gonna attack someone good, have him go for a big chase, but never actually attack the good guy. Also, make his action comical (like tripping over stuff while he attacks). Make him a comical, serious person.

 

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Wooo!

 

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My chareter,, Well That's Where i wanted to be came true!

It goes well with the story!

Oh I forgot to tell you zebe, Hito is a fan of Dragon Ball Z so He knows everything about the show, So that makes Rin his ally.

P.S, If You put some refrences about the show, Rin might be surprised.

Also, Hito's favorite Theme is: Future's Sword - Morganstudios, Third Power - Morganstudios, and Way of the Mystic - Morganstudios.

So If you like 3 themes, Which of them is more epic and fitting to Hito?

 

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Really?

Cool! I think Future's sword will Fit Hito the best!

I really know him better!

As for your reward......

I give him The Power to control Ki and flight as the only human that uses ki. He can charge up his sapphire gun blade with energy though.

By the way, There is another reward for another chareter......

Name: Saki Namashi
Race: Human
Backstory: In the year before Hito, There is a warrior with the power of flight, The power of shooting ki blasts, Her name was......Saki Namashi. An Supporter that most Hylotl will remember her of. She is most powerful human but Hito.......She's a sister of him! Her age is the same of her new creation called "Human" Vegeta (That's why she's had a lot of secrets about her life......But it's the most awesome part of ever.) Most of these Hylotls will remember her brave spirit as well as her mother of Hito. She is the real Videl, But back in her day, She was born with her powers, Meaning she has 2x the lifespan. Why? Is because someone upgraded Saki to be the most powerful human alive, But Hito came first. Saki knows what is her mission, Take back the Hylotl home world. She will defend most of her friends even on Hito's side. But Saki knows Her old friend......Zackery Drew.......She might be the most powerful, But she had some limit strains. First she had a limit of 600 BP but her maximum is about 6,000 BP which she's the weakest. Second, She is limited to bring 3 people at a time. And Third, She can get hungry very fast. But She can overcome her weaknesses in just a flash, But her body can get strained very harder and can cause some problems. In conclusion, Saki Namashi is the reminder of a woman with powers that can change the Hylotl Into a powerhouse for eternity.

Age: 11? (Due to her Double lifespan, She looks like the age of 8.)
Gear and items: She wears her Trademark, Saiyan armor Tier 5. Along with her left hand she has the Portal Splitter tier 6, It has a blue glow to the sword.
Apperince: She has blonde hair, Blue eyes, and Ponytail like hair.
Personality: Kind hearted, Very sweet, But mean and aggresive to the Floran if stabbing sounds were heard.


And That's it!

 

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It's okay, as long as you make it right, You are fine and dandy zebe! Also, If night sky is over, Will you make a compleately different story that allows Non-canon chars too into the story?

And Still, No Op chars too. No gods VS mortals. Just canon or non-Canon chars (For Example: Avail, Peglaci, Etc.) And They will be many more......Will you do that?

Also, I give it 10/15. because, Great story.