Captain Tathrio slammed his fist on the observation table. How could he be stuck at base camp with a broken leg while his sub-ordinates died? He watched the final wave using the observation table.It used holograms to project on a small scale what is happening on the front lines. It was completely experimental. When he remembered how the creator stressed on how fragile it was he immediately stopped, worried he’d have to pay the $2,000,000 fine. He was still awestruck on how definite it was, he could even see the separate blades of grass. He though idly while trying to take his mind off of his defenselessness in the most dire situation of his life.He stopped for a second.“How could they so easily defeat the 19256 ray gun?” he thought out loud.“This is the first battle we used it in, there is no way they could have learned how to counter it.”That’s when it hit him. He hopped on his computer and did a background check on his newest recruit Private Anubian. Sure enough the minute he looked it up, a report from Private Anubian's original employer popped up. Private Anubian had been giving maximum security information to the enemy.Private Anubian T Jackal was a spy.
I like how the writing flows, and the writing in general . EDIT: Also wanted to bump this thread up a bit so more people can see this!
