Digital I'll draw your Starbound char o3o

Discussion in 'Fan Art' started by rhomboid, Jul 29, 2014.

  1. rhomboid

    rhomboid 0118 999 881 99 9119 725... 3

    alright alright lol


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    My original sketch for Cipherstar, but then I changed it entirely. o3o
    Basic anatomy was borrowed from a WW comic cover. Typically when I do this, the final product comes out looking a lot less plagiarized.

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    An action shot from some Floran lore. I might still finish this one, but I originally gave up because of the damned axe. Stupid axes and their stupid angles >>
    Also I'm unhappy with the rabbit thing.
    Meh.

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    eugh
    just don't even say anything. I told you my original sketch was shitty >>
    Seriously, ugh.

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    Ending on a better note. This is my cat as a dragon. I'd like to finish this one, but don't have the motivation yet.
    Cute little fuck.


    I might rummage around for some more later. In the meantime, it's bed for me~
     
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  2. General Nuclear

    General Nuclear Supernova

    really cool i really like the color and shadows on the cratgon (cat dragon)
     
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  3. Owl_Stalker

    Owl_Stalker Guest

    It's a geometric shape!
     
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  4. General Nuclear

    General Nuclear Supernova

    did't know that thank for saying
     
  5. Presios Saiyan

    Presios Saiyan Giant Laser Beams

    Would you draw my Ningen Character: Akane?

    She wields the Star Seeker and Akane's Blight ( Was Data Trojan.) and make sure she has Anime eyes. I promise.

    Make sure she has her sword/keyblade strapped to her back, Otherwise it will come out wrong.

    Oh and i forgot: She's is in love with this: If you don't know who he is: Go look. http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Uub

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  6. rhomboid

    rhomboid 0118 999 881 99 9119 725... 3

    @Presios Saiyan I'll put you back onto the list!

    @General Nuclear Thanks! I'm happy with how it's turning out so far, as well.

    @TimeCraked Finished yours! I could not get the feet right, though, and also I didn't want to bother with covering up your junk with some weird metallic strips, so I opted pants on you. I think it might look better if the entire lower half was removed; thus I'm only half pleased with it. Besides those two areas, I really like this one. I hope you do, too!
    Style of shading is quite a bit softer than usual.
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  7. rhomboid

    rhomboid 0118 999 881 99 9119 725... 3

    So I've done a very preliminary, basic, speed-paint/sketchy type sketch of Draikken's Avali.
    I'll be moving onto the next request if they don't PM me back within a day or two, since I don't want to be doing requests for people who aren't here anymore when there are active members waiting on me o3o
    I'd like @Featherdust 's feedback on my avali this time. I didn't use a reference, other than the picture Draikken linked me.
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  8. Feathery Dust

    Feathery Dust Spaceman Spiff

    Very well then, I'll happily provide some feedback for you! ^^
    First of all: very well done, this avali design looks a lot more accurate, it's just awesome overall! ^w^
    ..
    Now I'll first explain some of the details that could use some changes, first there's the plumage feathers, all of them are supposed to come out of the back of the head, not the top of it.
    Secondly, you made the bottom ears upside down, I may as well say they're basically exactly like the top ears only located in a different place. And then there's the headphones,
    you had a few small details wrong which make them look more like earrings, but that's just how it looks to me. Another thing is the purple feathers (I don't really know what's the name for those)
    need to go down all the way to the little nose thingy, like this: http://imgur.com/Y7vlnCD, Avali also don't have an iris, their eyes are entirely black.
    ..
    Now there's one last important detail I wish to mention, is the body size.
    The average height for Avali is 3-4 ft, and that means they can't be as lanky and tall as humans.
    Because of that, their limb to body ratio needs to be a little different, for example:
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    Most of the races you draw have lankier, taller limbs and torso, while avali have short ones.
    This is an important detail considering the two Avali you drew seem tall and lanky compared to other Avali. (although I really like how you draw that)
    One last important detail is the tail, it's good but it's quite far off what the original design was meant to be.
    ..
    That's all the feedback I can think of, hope this is helpful in the future! ^w^
     
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  9. rhomboid

    rhomboid 0118 999 881 99 9119 725... 3

    Ridiculously helpful! Thanks a lot. I might not edit this one (unless Draikken comes back), but I still have one more Avali request to tend to at some point o3o.

    I'll be sure to make use of your advice! The avali anatomy is something that confuses me quite a bit. ^^'
     
  10. Feathery Dust

    Feathery Dust Spaceman Spiff

    Glad to know I'm being helpful for a chamge! ^^
    And yup, it's quite confusing since it's far from what most of are used to..
    ..
    Also quick question, could I make another request? ^^;
     
  11. rhomboid

    rhomboid 0118 999 881 99 9119 725... 3

    Go nuts lol
    So long as you don't mind the ever-increasing wait-time o3o
     
  12. Feathery Dust

    Feathery Dust Spaceman Spiff

    I don't mind that at all, considering the first request I ever asked for took 11 months ^^;
    Anyways here he is:

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    Basically the same guy except with a different outfit and a teacup ^w^
    So in that case may I ask how many requests come before this one?
     
  13. Cup o' Tea

    Cup o' Tea Guest

    Can't wait to see how my request will turn out!
     
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  14. rhomboid

    rhomboid 0118 999 881 99 9119 725... 3

    You'll be at the bottom of the list, so there're 13 people in front of you. Could be shorter than that, though, if any of them are inactive.
     
  15. Feathery Dust

    Feathery Dust Spaceman Spiff

    I see, well I'll be looking forward to it, thanks! ^w^
     
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  16. Gav Featherbeak

    Gav Featherbeak Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    I'm not inactive so you can't skip me bruh ;DDDD
     
  17. rhomboid

    rhomboid 0118 999 881 99 9119 725... 3

    I'll be sure not to skip you lol
     
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  18. Hatsya Souji

    Hatsya Souji Parsec Taste Tester

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    I'd like to see your take on my Starbound avatar (NetGameSaga novel character of mine) someday...

    Oh, here's its original reference:

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  19. rhomboid

    rhomboid 0118 999 881 99 9119 725... 3

    I will totally stick you on the list!
     
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  20. The Lem

    The Lem Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    Am I able to make a request for you to draw a character that isn't from Starbound?
     

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