Story Human Race - N707 Logbook

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by matrix1368, Nov 8, 2014.

  1. matrix1368

    matrix1368 Pangalactic Porcupine


    Earth \\ Logbook \\ Log 30574 \\ Date: 1/4/2015
    Tyler Knife \\ Codename: "Matrix"

    I'm currently in undercover in the Rocky Mountains.
    The main base of the so called U.S.C.M. We are currently planning to spread all over the universe
    to make humans the most powerful species. Tomorrow we are going to launch our first ship, the
    N707.

    - Matrix out



    Earth \\ Logbook \\ Log 30574 \\ Date: 2/4/2015
    Tyler Knife \\ Codename: "Matrix"

    The government of America has found the existence of the U.S.C.M. We have to launch the N707 fast.
    Well that's cool. Those idiots forgot to fill the fuel tank.
    Because the capacity of the tank is more than 100L. It will
    take a while.
    -------
    Our base is under attack. We have to evacuate this base.
    I will stay here with {player} and a few other engineers to
    fill the N707.
    -------
    Finally after 30 minutes or so the ship is full. We are launching now...
    Now i'm going to find {player}
    - Matrix out



    Ship: N707 \\ Logbook \\ Log 001 \\ Date: 1/01/0001
    Tyler Knife \\ Codename: "Matrix"

    After that apocalypse on Earth, we decided to start over with everything. That's why
    I changed the log date.

    But I was just getting reports of the Bridge that our ship is running low on supplies.
    My idea is to send out a few people to scavenge for some supplies and turn back.
    Let me think about it for a while, but still... time's ticking...

    - Matrix out



    Ship: N707 \\ Logbook \\ Log 002 \\ Date: 1/03/0001
    Tyler Knife \\ Codename: "Matrix"

    We just arrived in a giant asteroid field. We have to spread out before
    one giant meteorite hits the ship and then we're all going to die.
    Good thing is that this ship has more that 20 different shuttles.
    As said before, I'm going to send out a few people in space to scavenge for
    some supplies.

    Their mission is simple. Find a good habitable planet and activate an distress
    beacon for pickup.

    Commander {player} is one of my best pilots and survivor.
    I found him on Earth in a forest eating insects. I trained and raised him
    as my own. He will go alone, alone is he faster than with a group.

    I don't want to lose him again...
    I hope I will hear from him soon.

    - Matrix out
    [/spoiller]
     
    Last edited: Nov 11, 2014
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  2. jpmrocks

    jpmrocks Phantasmal Quasar

    Right off the bat, as soon as I saw ebola, i withered up like slug in salt. I dont want to get all political, but it's not a viral out break. This ain't Plague Inc. or Pandemic 3. The actual log is good though.
     
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  3. matrix1368

    matrix1368 Pangalactic Porcupine

    Yeah maybe you're right. I think i'm going to change it. Thanks for the review :)
     
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  4. jpmrocks

    jpmrocks Phantasmal Quasar

    I know in the lore of SB, mysterious spores turned into the tentacomet, which destroyed Earth, so maybe use that?
     
  5. matrix1368

    matrix1368 Pangalactic Porcupine

    Good idea. I'll add that later :)
     
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  6. matrix1368

    matrix1368 Pangalactic Porcupine

    First I have to think about a good way to tell that story. Because it would be a little bit weird that just some giant
    tentacomet joins the world and destroys it... xD
     
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