OOC Halo: Beyond the Rim [Over for now]

Discussion in 'Role Playing' started by Dragonclaw, Oct 22, 2016.



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  1. Dragonclaw

    Dragonclaw Oxygen Tank

    I'm drawing a thing for this... I worked on it for an hour... now time to color... tomorrow.
  2. Dragonclaw

    Dragonclaw Oxygen Tank


    I'm not sure what it is yet, but I have an idea...
    What do you guys think on a scale of 'Please don't try this again' to 'This isn't that bad'?

    EDIT: Reduced amount of lines in the shading.
    Last edited: Mar 22, 2017
  3. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    It's not bad at all. Really you just need to translate it to something cleaner. A vector based graphic software like Illustrator would be great.
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  4. Firebird Zoom

    Firebird Zoom Oxygen Tank

    I liked it. That means that it is good.
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  5. Dragonclaw

    Dragonclaw Oxygen Tank

    Thanks. I bet I could make it a bit cleaner if I used an actual pencil instead of that super-accurate mechanical pencil. I just don't want to use photoshop stuff with my drawings.
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  6. Dragonclaw

    Dragonclaw Oxygen Tank

    Apparently you can get rid of lines with your finger... This looks much better.

    EDIT: If anyone wants to have this as part of the story, I'll ask you to name it. I've come up with this being a colony ship (Horizon-class) that has detachable modules (the box things).

    Also, if this is annoying you guys at all, PLEASE tell me to stop.
    Last edited: Mar 23, 2017
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  7. Jirky-Kake

    Jirky-Kake Phantasmal Quasar

    How about the name Firebrand? :cato3o:
  8. Dragonclaw

    Dragonclaw Oxygen Tank

    Ooh... Nice idea! I just need to find a way to put it on the side...
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  9. Dragonclaw

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    And here it is! The UNSC Firebrand!

    Some specs:

    Affiliation: United Earth Government

    Class: Horizon-class colony ship
    Length: 5800 feet
    Engine: 9 thruster units
    Slipspace: Yes
    Hull: Titanium-A, Energy Shielding
    Navigation: Nav computer/onboard AI
    Magnetic Accelerator Cannon
    Point Defense system
    Deck guns
    Archer missile pods
    HAVOK Tactical Nuclear Weapons


    Maximum of 9,000 personnel

    (Multi-role carrier)
    -Terraforming/colonization of new planets
    -Orbital support of ground forces and ship to ship combat


    Refit: 2532, again in 2556

    Fleet: 1st Colonial Force, TBA
    Last edited: Mar 24, 2017
  10. Omicron445

    Omicron445 Pangalactic Porcupine

    The first Colonial force had magnetic accelerator cannons and HAVOK nukes? Typical humans when it comes to "colonizing".
  11. HunterC1998

    HunterC1998 Cosmos Killer

    Bet their American..
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  12. Dragonclaw

    Dragonclaw Oxygen Tank

    That is post-refit. Before it was just colonization stuff and maybe a few weapons.

    I bet you're American. AMERICA.

  13. HunterC1998

    HunterC1998 Cosmos Killer

    Yes I am American, and just so you know, it was named after an Italian mapper named Amerigo Vespucci..Not even the person who discovered it.
  14. Dragonclaw

    Dragonclaw Oxygen Tank

    I know the history of my country. I forgot about that, but I still know some stuff. Mostly Hamilton stuff. Like how Washington didn't really ask Hamilton to lead. Hamilton just kept pestering Washington until he agreed.
  15. HunterC1998

    HunterC1998 Cosmos Killer

    That I didn't know, and I feel I may be partially cliche'd of what people from other countries think of Americans..
  16. Dragonclaw

    Dragonclaw Oxygen Tank

    I've seen at least one thing that shows at least some people think what we think they think.
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  17. Erathcam

    Erathcam Poptop Tamer

    I'm a role play expert
  18. Firebird Zoom

    Firebird Zoom Oxygen Tank

    Somehow I doubt that.
  19. Jake9039

    Jake9039 Pangalactic Porcupine

    Just wanted to note I put this out here. I don't know if people really noticed it, and was wondering if this character was ok...
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  20. Dragonclaw

    Dragonclaw Oxygen Tank

    Looks good. The age would probably be a lot older than 261 though. That doesn't matter that much. I'll make an intro post soon.
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