Interesting story. I like how it talks about the Avian religion, and that idea of the 'Grounded' Avians seems like something that would be interesting in the game. I really like this story. It doesn't really feel like it's got much of a conflict in it, though. It feels unfinished; this could conceivably be the start of a longer story. Also, there's a line that's somewhat difficult to understand: Imagine trying to read that if you didn't know English well, like many members of this forum. Just a thought.