Floran "Poetry" (you have been warned)

Discussion in 'Writing' started by Kuerbiskanal, May 26, 2016.

  1. Kuerbiskanal

    Kuerbiskanal Void-Bound Voyager

    For the "upcoming" release of Starbound 1.0, i wrote this piece of "art" to get in character.
    !Warning may offend:
    -people with a basic understanding of poetry

    And here it is:
    Stab stab stab the fish

    Let him bleed, delicious blood

    Stab stab stab the fish

    Let him scream in his pain

    Stab stab stab the fish

    Burn down his hut and let him watch

    Stab stab stab the fish

    poison there waters till its dead

    Stab stab stab the fish

    hunt them down one by one

    Stab stab stab the fish

    cut of his limbs and gnaw on them

    Stab stab stab the fish

    butcher him and eat him raw

    Stab stab stab the fish till he's dead

    Please let me know what you think and if i catched the the Floran attitude or should go in the corner and shame myself.
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  2. Iceball457

    Iceball457 Phantasmal Quasar

    You captured their style AND their knowledge of poetry
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  3. Cliff474

    Cliff474 Void-Bound Voyager

    I love it! I can see a Floran reciting this in some poetry session in a coffee shop full of Hylotl!
  4. Shaadaris

    Shaadaris Giant Laser Beams

    Still 4242% better than Vogon Poetry.
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  5. KingTomato

    KingTomato Jackpot!

    Proud to be a Glitch. I heard Florans dislike how Glitch taste. Glitch 1-0 Floran
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