Digital Fanfiction Webcomic! (AYELMAO UPDATED 4 ONCE)

Discussion in 'Fan Works' started by yokimoninoka, May 19, 2016.

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Cutest ship?

  1. Sebastian x Yokee

    31.3%
  2. Sam x Yokee

    7.8%
  3. Sebastian x Abigail

    12.5%
  4. Sam x Kelly

    7.8%
  5. Sam x Penny

    4.7%
  6. I REFUSE TO VOTE

    29.7%
  7. Sam x Abigail (omg)

    6.3%
  8. Sebastian x Kelly (? ? ?)

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  1. Gabaw

    Gabaw Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    Glad to see an update! Background is looking great and the comic itself even better. Max dokes up in here :p looking forward to part 3
     
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    • Risukage

      Risukage Giant Laser Beams

      "Uwah! Kokoro ga doki-doki shite'ru... Kono atsui na kanjiru...nani ka?"

      This has been "Speaking Shoujou" with your local weaboo, Risukage. :p
       
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      • Rgbunpro

        Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

        *German accent* Oh yes! It's so cute! Look at all the adorable things!
        *Normal voice* okay, rant over. So, two things:
        1. I'm not gonna get over how pretty Yokee's dress is
        2. I write quite a bit myself, i'd love to give you some advice. But then again, as a writer I know that "being told how to write your story" is probably not what you wanna hear.
         
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        • mrobake

          mrobake Zero Gravity Genie

          Doki doki doki

          That cliffhanger tho. Take Yokee to where Sam? Where's Kelly atm? The romance thicken!

          And why Penny's just her hair :urgh: #riot
           
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          • Gabaw

            Gabaw Scruffy Nerf-Herder

            hahaha well think of it this way, do you really want Penny dancing with someone else?? Maybe egg yokes decided to tease the hair to leave us in suspense. Who is it really? We'll never know. well maybe we might in part 3.
             
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            • Pudassassin

              Pudassassin Hard-To-Destroy Reptile

              Aww, I know the feeling... Leah is missing, nowhere to be found. Yokee?!

              Anyway, nice comic art and story. I wonder what's next...
               
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              • Rgbunpro

                Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

                The suspense! It's pretty neat actually.
                 
                • yokimoninoka

                  yokimoninoka Prypiat

                  UH UH UH Uh UH
                  so i didn't update this week because frankly I'm lazy AF. and currently the story line is getting hard. plus ive been dealing with some weird shit thats been pretty bad from someone else's perspective. either way, I am working on another story

                  with different characters that aren't SDV. If i get far enough, I really want to make a webtoon. I also bought the program manga studio @___@ im really excited over it because its an actual comic program thing (also someone i know does it >:O

                  eitherway. I will update next week tho
                  COMMENTS AT 5 AM THO

                  >3> yayy the dress was based off of a lot of KOREAN dress sights lol.
                  and its not that the story is bland, its the characters.
                  A lot of the original SDV characters are pretty boring =_= and its hard to give them complications

                  im not planning on putting leah in till later tbh
                  MUCH later.

                  Thank you my sister would be thrilled to see her backgrounds being complimented
                  lmao and PART 3 IS COMIGN ALONG I SWEAR

                  =3= cliff hangers is what keeps u reading and penny is gunna be there eventually too i think
                   
                  • Rgbunpro

                    Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

                    Good point, It's pretty easy to give your own character a whole personality, but the others..
                    Hmm, and your already doing the exaggeration of their basic character thing too. Hmm.
                    I shall have to think on this, perhaps the old noggin can actually come up with good advice if I do.
                     
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                    • yokimoninoka

                      yokimoninoka Prypiat

                      AHHAHAHAHHA
                      I MIGHT HAVE LIED
                      OR NOT NEXT WEEKS UPDATE IS REALLY IFFY
                      (part of me is waiting on a new screen so i can watch anime and draw at the same time without having no room to draw"
                      (the other part just wants to play overwatch)

                      So if anyone is interested in getting to know me, and how play games

                      PM for a battle net user thing, and ill add you!

                      ( if you play overwatch / diablo III ) i need people to INVITE :sneaky:
                       
                      • ApertureGaming011

                        ApertureGaming011 Scruffy Nerf-Herder

                        When will this comic be updated?
                         
                        • yokimoninoka

                          yokimoninoka Prypiat

                          Uhm. Probably not anytime soon. Im currently busy working on emergency commissions / YCH's for extra cash. :( n plus ive lost a lot of interest in drawing this comic, but im hoping it will come back to me
                           
                          • MagicallyClueless

                            MagicallyClueless Black Hole Surfer

                            be patient and take your time, and if you never come back to it, that's okay. that's your decision <3
                            def don't let people pressure you about it. i wish you luck with your commissions and whatnot!
                             
                            • ApertureGaming011

                              ApertureGaming011 Scruffy Nerf-Herder

                              Please, take your time. I'll try my best to contain the screaming in my heart that is yearning for the next episode!
                               
                              • yokimoninoka

                                yokimoninoka Prypiat

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                                WOW I UPDATED? THIS IS UPDATED?
                                WOW OWOWOWW

                                Thank you all for staying with me so long. im sorry i havent been active or anything. This semester has been pretty ham
                                but hey im here now and im seriously planning on finishing this comic.
                                like dead serious.

                                I dont know if stardew valley still has hype going on but i really still love all the characters i made, i've just needed a break with what was going on

                                I love you all so much, n thanks to my sister for doing the wonderful backgrounds on all this CRAP

                                im also really sorry my style has changed so muich over the year
                                Im plannin on sticking with this last one
                                 
                                • Risukage

                                  Risukage Giant Laser Beams

                                  Ahh! Welcome back, sweetie! And you return just to leave us hanging, too, nooooes! :p

                                  Hope stuff gets better for you soon, anyone trying to juggle school and fan projects like this has my respect. *Throws confetti and glitter.*
                                   
                                  • Pudassassin

                                    Pudassassin Hard-To-Destroy Reptile

                                    Oh, welcome back! We missed you a bit but still got some nice comic work as before.
                                    Also, what happened to Yokee!?
                                     
                                    • yokimoninoka

                                      yokimoninoka Prypiat

                                      Thats what keeps you reading tho right?? ^u^ n thank u for your support, i swear ill try to lay off the cliff hangers.

                                      thank you sm <3, n what happened to her? D: i got really scared that i got the names wrong, because lately ive been using the name Queen for another character? so ;;;;
                                       
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                                      • ApertureGaming011

                                        ApertureGaming011 Scruffy Nerf-Herder

                                        SHE'S BAAAAAAACK! THE SAGA CONTINUES AND SO DOES MY DEtermination to live! Welcome back and your sister, too! I really missed this series and I'm looking forward to see more of the events unfold!
                                         
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                                        • Rgbunpro

                                          Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

                                          Welcome Back! Excelsior!
                                           

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