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Fan Fic: Awoken

Discussion in 'Fan Works' started by Fox0427, Nov 21, 2013.

  1. Daimera

    Daimera Cosmic Narwhal

    "Suddenly, Joshua was interrupted by a series of three dongs that played twice, almost like a clock tower."

    Honestly, because I'm apparently five years old, my brain went straight for the gutter midway through this sentence. I think you might want to change "dongs" to "chimes" or something.

    8D
     
    • Fox0427

      Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

      ...I will never read that sentence I wrote in the same way again... Fixed...
       
      • Fox0427

        Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

        Hooray, new chapter... Oh boy, the next one is going to be fun to write...
         
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        • Chanthecat

          Chanthecat Tentacle Wrangler

          Chapter 9?:iswydt:
           
          • Fox0427

            Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

            Oh, right, sorry. Starbound and all. I'll start on that.
             
            • Chanthecat

              Chanthecat Tentacle Wrangler

              yeahyuh! :sneaky:
               
              • Fox0427

                Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

                Hmm, for some reason I don't feel satisfied with this chapter, but tell me what you guys think.
                 
                • Fox0427

                  Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

                  Fun fact: I didn't mean to call chapter 9, "Insert Name Here" (I fixed it now) That was a placeholder I accidentally left. Anyway, next chapter coming very soon.
                   
                  • Fox0427

                    Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

                    Next chapter is coming today, I swear! Just give me a while!
                     
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                    • Fox0427

                      Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

                      Sorry for the somewhat short chapter, I realized what time it was and immediately said, "OH CRAP!" And worked on this. I'll make it up with a somewhat long chapter tomorrow. I swear. Seriously. You believe me, right?
                      Twelfth chapter! Yay! Not exactly somewhat long but hey, I actually posted one withing two days from another for the first time in a week or two.
                       
                        Last edited: Dec 19, 2013
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                      • Fox0427

                        Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

                        I'm not dead. (New chapter coming soon.)
                         
                        • austinlb90

                          austinlb90 Scruffy Nerf-Herder

                          are you sure
                           
                          • Fox0427

                            Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

                            Huh? What are you talking about? I just took a small nap before- HOLY WHAT IT'S BEEN MONTHS... Uh... I... Uh... Hey again. Soooo. I guess I should probably... Yeah I'll get right on that chapter... Maybe.
                             
                            • zerosabers

                              zerosabers Yeah, You!

                              Very nice, I love how the creatures actually have a reason to attack Joshua. Also it might be cool to have him team up with or battle Acrid/other classes.
                               
                              • Fox0427

                                Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

                                Who knows what I have in plan for when I decide to start again. Which I will. Eventually.
                                 
                                • austinlb90

                                  austinlb90 Scruffy Nerf-Herder

                                  remember im watching this
                                   
                                  • austinlb90

                                    austinlb90 Scruffy Nerf-Herder

                                    why do i still watch your not updating any way
                                     
                                    • Fox0427

                                      Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

                                      I'm on a not indefinite just long hiatus, I will continue this eventually, I swear.
                                       
                                      • austinlb90

                                        austinlb90 Scruffy Nerf-Herder

                                        darn if only i could find that unfollow button
                                         
                                        • Fox0427

                                          Fox0427 Big Damn Hero

                                          It's up to the right of the page numbers. Yes, I know that was sarcasm trying to get me to continue the story. Yes, I will continue the story. Yes, I will do it soon. Yes. Soon. Meaning within a few days.
                                           

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